|Reviews for Tyler and I in Olympia|
| fatbird33 chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
what a fantastic poem. great story :)
| cab fed hig chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
i like how it runs on, like how a child can, in a summer field,
never cease to dream.
| RedGlowingFlowerPot chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
"And I told you once that when I was a kid my dad yelled, but you taught me how to play poker in the singsong September swan drive".
I like that one; it feels orange juice gin in summer.
| Black Sparrow chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
'and somewhere there is a
picture of me sitting beside
you, smile wide though my
teeth don't show in the whirl
of scenery like a sea of green,'
That was my favourite part :) it sounds beautiful and I love it. You are such a master of words.
| YasuRan chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
That was some great imagery to potray with your sparse, but incredibly deep, poetry/prose. Your writing has this superb quality of making me reread it to gain a greater understanding of the picture you're trying to portray. It's a great quality for any writer's work to achieve :)