|Reviews for A Pyromancer's Oath: Shattered Worlds|
| NightSkyWolves chapter 7 . 12/29/2012
HOW DARE YOU SPAM RANDOM WORDS IN ANOTHER LANGUAGE AT THE END OF A STORY! GAH!
No. I'm kidding. XD Epic still, and sad it's over but IMMOLATION FOR DA WIN!
| NightSkyWolves chapter 6 . 12/25/2012
| NightSkyWolves chapter 5 . 12/16/2012
So... many... caps... x.x
| NightSkyWolves chapter 4 . 12/14/2012
Love the ending. Oh CCCCCRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAPPPPPPP PPP! XD
| NightSkyWolves chapter 2 . 12/2/2012
Very nice... The storyline is quite fascinating, and I'm particularly fond of detail used.
| NightSkyWolves chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
Excuse me for not reviewing your other story lately, but I have read it.
To start, the storyline is exceedingly intriguing. A secondary to the primary story. I've always liked it when writers continue their stories in a second part. It gives the ones who can't post their own stories a topic to read.
The War for Wizard City, nice idea. Whenever I write I name the chapter by what I find to be significant as a quoted subject. But that's just me. (You can thank the inventors of Puella Magi Madoka Magica for that)
Secondarily, there are some grammatical errors I have unveiled. You see, I'm not attempting to flame, (if you ask me pointing out grammar isn't a flame) but I found just one thing that made the story difficult to entirely comprehend. Always originate a quote in a new paragraph. In other words, start a new paragraph when someone speaks.
Hehe, otherwise, you're doing extremely well. Your dexterity as an author is quite high. I hope to see more.
Mami: As do I.
Um, don't ask... _