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Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	alternative Reading passege emphesize about alternative to priscibing burning by giving some turm like " disking " in this fire clear out dry and dead shrub and stimulate the growth of new plant life .	A different passage emphasizes an alternative to prescribed burning that uses the term " disking , " a method that uses fire to clear out dry and dead shrubs , thus stimulating the growth of new plant life .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	According to the lecture , management should plan carefully when hire well-trained people or teach them how to manage the fire in a better way before fire .	According to the lecture , management should plan carefully by hiring well-trained people or teach current employees how to be prepared for a fire .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	People are not dependent of other people or timescedules of for example trains , trams and buses .	People are not dependent on other people or time schedules , for example , of trains , trams , and buses .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	However , I want to go to the U.S.A that I can study and life in my dream 's contury , I want to have my famliy that I never not alony .	However , I want to go to the U.S.A so that I can study and live in the country of my dreams ; I want to have a family so that I never have to be alone .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	When these people create their new ideas others often look very strange on them .	When these people create their new ideas , others often look very strange to them .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	Because you do not need to be a hero in order to try new things , you just need to want it and know that any result will be a succes in things that you want or in learning .	Because you do not need to be a hero in order to try new things , you just need to want it and know that any result will be a success in things that you want or in learning .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	There is many way for this another examples bottele of juise if its tast bad they make thier shape wonderful like making it colourful .	There are many ways for this , another example is a bottle of juice , if it tastes bad , they make their shape wonderful and make it colorful .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	First he shows that in some cases placebo made the patient believe he was gon na get cured , which made him create more killing cells , which cured him .	First , he shows that in some cases a placebo made the patient believe he was gon na get cured , which made him create more killing cells , which cured him .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	For exsample I like to go to a big city like New York .	For example , I like to go to a big city like New York .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	For example , the most famous Thomas Edison was asked a question when he applied for a loan to a bank one more time for his experiments which were failing .	For example , the most famous inventor , Thomas Edison , was asked a question when he applied for a loan to a bank one more time for his experiments , which were failing .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	People are not and shouldnt be robots .	People are not , and should n't be , robots .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	It has come to be one of the effective measures manufatures use in selling their products .	It has become one of the most effective measures manufacturers can use in selling their products .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	I cast doubt that twenty years is too short time to prove the problem .	I doubt that twenty years is too short of a time to prove the problem .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	SOME LUCE POINTS INWALL .	Some loose points in the wall .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	television makers just hung academic title on their program .	Television makers just hang academic titles on their programs .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	To resolve this problem , the governments of the cities are likely to improve the public transportation system by building new subway system and adding more lines for buses .	To solve this problem , city governments are likely to improve public transportation systems by building new subway systems and adding more bus lines .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	In studing the processes underlying biochemical pathways knowledge of biochemistry is required which is an integration of biology and chemistry .	In studying the processes underlying biochemical pathways , a knowledge of biochemistry is required , which is an integration of biology and chemistry .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	They do not have to go to work everyday instead they may go see a football game in a different city .	They do not have to go to work every day , instead they may go see a football game in a different city .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	It mentions about the cane toad which threatens many local species in Australia .	It mentions the cane toad , which threatens many local species in Australia .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	In the lecture , however , professor oppose the reading statement .	In the lecture , however , the professor opposed reading the statement .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	Most of the actors , soldiers , workers and students are young people .	Most of the actors , soldiers , workers , and students , are young people .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	Secondly the place of the film must must be very clear and chir must be relax etc .	Secondly , the location of the film must must be very clear and the director must be relaxed , etc .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	As it is important to see your work in the context of the whole car , he now still benefits from his broadly chosen majors in college .	As it is important to see your work in the context of your whole career , he now benefits from his broadly chosen majors in college .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	People will buy more cars and take advantage of this mode of transportation in the days ahead .	People will buy more cars and take advantage of this mode of transportation in the days ahead .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	This demonstrates the undeniable fact that it is bebeficial to having differnt experiences .	This demonstrates the undeniable fact that it is beneficial to have different experiences .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	Also , sometimes , people may meet some new friends in the traveling group .	Also , sometimes , people may meet some new friends in the group they are traveling with .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	Also the animal population got better and they recovered really good after the fire .	Also , the animal population got better and recovered really well after the fire .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	Hence from the very beginning children form this hesitancy from interaction with other people which time only solidifies .	Hence from the very beginning , children form a hesitancy to interact with other people , which time only solidifies .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	The definication yong or older is not apparent .	The definition of young or old is not apparent .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	Against those problems , people started to use cheaper transportation instead of car .	To combat those problems , people started to use cheaper transportation instead of cars .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	because this is not very easy to use .	This is not very easy to use .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	When a talk about reaserch I mean ask people that had the product like friends , family or go to forums on the Internet .	When a talk about research , I mean ask people that had the product , like friends , family , or go to forums on the Internet .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	Sometimes , even a personality , like a famous actor , becomes this truthworthy voice .	Sometimes , even a personality like a famous actor , becomes this trustworthy voice .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	for example , there may be eldelery travelers which may cause a slow movements due to their unability to walk fast .	For example , there may be elderly travelers which may cause slow movement due to their inability to walk fast .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	Every time when we meet , I will look forward to the new things .	Every time when we meet , I will look forward to the new things .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	Comparing with older people , they do n't even have enough time to enjoy their life .	Compared to older people , they do n't have enough time to enjoy their life .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	Other one is a gambler which means that people always try the new things and take risks .	Other one is a gambler , which means that people always try new things and take risks .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	Obviously the unreplaciable examination and less enemy can bring huge advance to fulfill the defination about success .	Obviously the irreplaceable examination and less enemy can bring huge advances to fulfill the definition of success .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	Younger generation are more adaptable thus they can adapt to changing technology .	The younger generation is more adaptable and can therefore adapt to changing technology .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	He knows that there is no return in his help to others .	He does not expect others to reciprocate his help .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	But I disegree this opinion because often the advertisement do n't speak about the only functionals of the product but it promises other characteristics that do n't depend by it .	But I disagree with this opinion because often the advertisement does n't speak about only the functionality of the product , but it promises other characteristics that do n't depend on it .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	But , even if this student passes the course , he/she will not be a succesfull lawyer in the future about contracts .	But , even if this student passes the course , he/she will not be a successful lawyer in the future about contracts .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	then there chance to shift him other parts of cricket .	Then there chance to shift him other parts of cricket .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	Many people think that treasure never existed , but in reality it exits .	Many people think that the treasure never existed , but in reality it exists .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	They have to think twice before performing even routine activities of life .	They have to think twice before performing even routine activities in life .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	First of all , old houses are not necessarily suited to the needs of mordern residents .	First of all , old houses are not necessarily suited to the needs of mordern residents .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	Raising tax for the gas can be the most effective and possible way to decrease the use of gas in three reasons .	Raising the gas tax could be the most effective way to decrease gas consumption for three reasons .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	So it is complex , looking after many new employee every year can be difficult .	So it is complex ; looking after many new employees every year can be difficult .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	if they are urged to understand the concept that is being passed and interact with the information , the learning process will take place in a completely different way .	if they are urged to understand the concept that is being passed on and to interact with the information , the learning process will take place in a completely different way .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	Because the fashional culture has been changed .	Because the fashion culture has changed .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	he usually bring a book , and ask something to some one , he wants to understand the bood	He usually brings a book and asks someone when he wants to understand the book .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	It 's normal : propose something to the client and construct something different , is the best way ( and it 's legal ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! )	It 's normal , propose something to the client and make something different , it 's the best way and it 's legal !
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	Hence , in twenty years , the need for man to go out and get what he wants will be out of question .	Hence , in twenty years , the need for man to go out and get what he wants will be out of question .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	To work hard means to run the company .	To work hard means to run the company .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	I think that young peopie is not able to think deeply for the things than older people .	I think that young people are not able to think as deeply on things as older people .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	And availablity of jobs to the candidates having specfic knowledge is less when compare to the all round perormer ,	The availability of jobs to the candidates having specific knowledge is less when compare to the all around performer .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	He or she can help me in languages , introducing specific beautiful places , what the special food in that country is , and how about that country 's culture .	He or she can help me in languages , introducing specific beautiful places , teaching what the special food in that country is , and about that country 's culture .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	Other tourists would teach you some tips for the travel with thier experience .	Other tourists with experience can give you some travel tips .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	In addition , students want to learn the language and they want to use it , so when they understand the concepts and the ideas it will help them to learn the language .	In addition , students want to learn the language and they want to use it , so when they understand the concepts and the ideas , it will help them to learn the language .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	As a student who learns many subjects at the same time , I found it very beneficial .	As a student who learns many subjects at the same time , I found it very beneficial .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	Therefore the government in America should decide to raise the gasoline tax is proposed .	Therefore the government in America should propose to raise the gasoline tax .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	There are many people that do n't think before take a choose .	There are many people that do n't think before making a choice .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	Although the professor in the listening passage explains that the solution is acceptable because not only the striped bass population is vital for menhaden but also the entire ecological system based on it .	Although , the professor in the listening passage explains that the solution is acceptable because not only is the striped bass population vital for Menhaden , but also the entire ecological system based on it .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	But after a few days , I found myself enjoying in it .	But after a few days , I found myself enjoying it .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	when you be successful you will have a reasons for live .	When you are successful , you will have reasons to live .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	If a person just know the facts , he would never think about the possibilities .	If a person just knows the facts , he would never think about the possibilities .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	Carusage in the United States is very important in every day life , aswell as in many latinamerican countries , and thirdworld countries .	Car usage in the United States is very important in every day life , as well as in many Latin American countries , and third world countries .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	It is not bed if you know it , it means that your intelligence is high but a doctor has to be absolutely good at safing and helping ill persons .	It is not bad if you know it , it means that your intelligence is high but a doctor has to be absolutely good at saying and helping ill people .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	Because they can get a great amount of money from these companies .	They can get a great amount of money from these companies .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	Understand how they work would give students a better lesson .	Understanding how they work would provide students a better lesson .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	Maybe I can not enjoy in real meaning and I am tired .	Maybe I can not enjoy the real meaning and I am tired .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	By the same token , people will learn many different intellages by doing so many things but they just learn it 's appeals not get any crutial informations and wisdom form it .	By the same token , people will learn many different intelligences by doing many things , but they just learn its appeals and do n't get any crucial information or wisdom from them .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	Because it is allready a fixed data so nobody can creat problem with this type of litreture .	Because it is already fixed data , nobody can create a problem with this type of literature .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	Ignorance of striped bass will abbreviate our earning also it has some astonishing effects on our health .	Ignorance of striped bass will abbreviate our earnings , also it has some astonishing effects on our health .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	After all , personally , until now , I try to go on a diet and manage my health condition more carefully .	After all , until now , I tried to stay on a diet and manage my health condition carefully .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	They have limit to way which have meaning and function like a word .	They have limits to ways that have meaning and function like words .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	They dont have to read spacific books and articles just because they love the topic .	They do n't have to read specific books and articles just because they love the topic .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	Thanks to new and `` out of the box '' way of thinking it is what made our civilizations what it 's now .	Thanks to new and `` out of the box '' ways of thinking ; these are what made our civilizations what they are now .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	New kinds of vehicles will be invented with new technology than today .	In the future , new kinds of vehicles will be invented with new technology than today .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	In my essy i want to focus on : how impotant is for students to learn facts .	In my essay , I want to focus on how important it is for students to learn facts .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	I guduate in university .	I graduated from a university .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	It will alsow bi unfair , because it would affect low-income Amricans much mor seriously than well-to-do Americanc In the listenig part the woman ecplani dhe nir reality the raising gasoline tax dose not reflest the real economic damage .	It will be unfair because it would affect low-income Americans much more seriously than well-to-do Americans , and listening to the part where the woman explains her reality does not reflect the real economic damages raising gasoline tax would do to low-income Americans .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	Also its been on all the sections because we use the head phones it makes alot of noise and it seriously very hard to stay on task .	Also it has been on all the sections because when we use the head phones it makes a lot of noise and it is seriously very hard to stay on task .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	The heart decease patients shows improvement when they are taking placebo .	The heart disease patients show improvement when they are taking a placebo .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	Ihad good life in my cauntry but everything I got from my patents .	I had a good life in my country , but everything I got from my patients .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	Disadvantage is parking their car is very difficult .	A disadvantage is that parking their cars is very difficult .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	This is clearly seen in the way many young people organize the collection of funds or books to help others receive a proper education , and , also in the way many students go to schools for the blind to read out books to them and help them out .	This is clearly seen in the way many young people organize the collection of funds or books to help others receive a proper education , and , also , in the way many students go to schools for the blind to read books aloud to them and help them out .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	For example , last monthe , i bought a product for skin , actully i bought the product beacuse the adevrtising got my attention .	For example , last month I bought a product for skin because the advertising got my attention .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	Also , the professor indicates prescribed fire should be carful when we use prescribed fire solution .	Also , the professor indicates that we should be careful when we use the prescribed fire solution .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	He will conceder him self losing the years that he spent on colecting the money .	He will consider himself losing the years that he spent on collecting the money .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	On the other hand , sientist agree that the predators are beneficial to control the population tof the menhaden .	On the other hand , scientists agree that the predators are beneficial to control the population of the menhaden .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	At the time of emergency he / she could be of great help if he / she is aware of the child health problems and their cure .	At the time of an emergency he / she could be of great help if he / she is aware of the child health problems and their cure .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	However , almost all of tour guide would go there with my group members and me .	However , almost all tour guides would go there with my group members and myself .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	For example , little children are told that do not cross the street at red light , because it is so dangerous that we cannot let kids learn from crash .	For example , little children are told not to cross the street at a red light because it is dangerous , and we should n't let kids learn from a car crash .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	This does n't destroy our culture , because our culture has changed .	This does n't destroy our culture , because our culture has changed .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	as a conclution you are not atracted totaly by the product but , by the lifestile that this product will give to you .	As a conclusion you are not attracted totally by the product , but by the lifestyle that this product will give to you .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	May be one day there will be a tool that will take us anywhere we want only in a few seconds .	Maybe one day there will be a tool that will take us anywhere we want in only a few seconds .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	In this way a person always feels to be original and `` modern '' , not `` ancient '' like people that surroand him or her .	In this way , a person always feels original and `` modern , '' not `` ancient '' like the people that surround him or her .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	Altough life is never easy : the age do n't depend on when you can be protected or prevented from bad things .	Although life is never easy , age does n't ensure you can be protected from bad things .
Improve this text for clarity, grammar, and style	In short , these were critical parts that contradicted the reading materials .	In short , these were critical parts that contradicted the reading materials .

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alternative Reading passege emphesize about alternative to priscibing burning by giving some turm like " disking " in this fire clear out dry and dead shrub and stimulate the growth of new plant life .

A different passage emphasizes an alternative to prescribed burning that uses the term " disking , " a method that uses fire to clear out dry and dead shrubs , thus stimulating the growth of new plant life .

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According to the lecture , management should plan carefully when hire well-trained people or teach them how to manage the fire in a better way before fire .

According to the lecture , management should plan carefully by hiring well-trained people or teach current employees how to be prepared for a fire .

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People are not dependent of other people or timescedules of for example trains , trams and buses .

People are not dependent on other people or time schedules , for example , of trains , trams , and buses .

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However , I want to go to the U.S.A that I can study and life in my dream 's contury , I want to have my famliy that I never not alony .

However , I want to go to the U.S.A so that I can study and live in the country of my dreams ; I want to have a family so that I never have to be alone .

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When these people create their new ideas others often look very strange on them .

When these people create their new ideas , others often look very strange to them .

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Because you do not need to be a hero in order to try new things , you just need to want it and know that any result will be a succes in things that you want or in learning .

Because you do not need to be a hero in order to try new things , you just need to want it and know that any result will be a success in things that you want or in learning .

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There is many way for this another examples bottele of juise if its tast bad they make thier shape wonderful like making it colourful .

There are many ways for this , another example is a bottle of juice , if it tastes bad , they make their shape wonderful and make it colorful .

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First he shows that in some cases placebo made the patient believe he was gon na get cured , which made him create more killing cells , which cured him .

First , he shows that in some cases a placebo made the patient believe he was gon na get cured , which made him create more killing cells , which cured him .

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For exsample I like to go to a big city like New York .

For example , I like to go to a big city like New York .

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For example , the most famous Thomas Edison was asked a question when he applied for a loan to a bank one more time for his experiments which were failing .

For example , the most famous inventor , Thomas Edison , was asked a question when he applied for a loan to a bank one more time for his experiments , which were failing .

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People are not and shouldnt be robots .

People are not , and should n't be , robots .

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It has come to be one of the effective measures manufatures use in selling their products .

It has become one of the most effective measures manufacturers can use in selling their products .

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I cast doubt that twenty years is too short time to prove the problem .

I doubt that twenty years is too short of a time to prove the problem .

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SOME LUCE POINTS INWALL .

Some loose points in the wall .

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television makers just hung academic title on their program .

Television makers just hang academic titles on their programs .

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To resolve this problem , the governments of the cities are likely to improve the public transportation system by building new subway system and adding more lines for buses .

To solve this problem , city governments are likely to improve public transportation systems by building new subway systems and adding more bus lines .

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In studing the processes underlying biochemical pathways knowledge of biochemistry is required which is an integration of biology and chemistry .

In studying the processes underlying biochemical pathways , a knowledge of biochemistry is required , which is an integration of biology and chemistry .

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They do not have to go to work everyday instead they may go see a football game in a different city .

They do not have to go to work every day , instead they may go see a football game in a different city .

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It mentions about the cane toad which threatens many local species in Australia .

It mentions the cane toad , which threatens many local species in Australia .

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In the lecture , however , professor oppose the reading statement .

In the lecture , however , the professor opposed reading the statement .

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Most of the actors , soldiers , workers and students are young people .

Most of the actors , soldiers , workers , and students , are young people .

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Secondly the place of the film must must be very clear and chir must be relax etc .

Secondly , the location of the film must must be very clear and the director must be relaxed , etc .

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As it is important to see your work in the context of the whole car , he now still benefits from his broadly chosen majors in college .

As it is important to see your work in the context of your whole career , he now benefits from his broadly chosen majors in college .

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People will buy more cars and take advantage of this mode of transportation in the days ahead .

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This demonstrates the undeniable fact that it is bebeficial to having differnt experiences .

This demonstrates the undeniable fact that it is beneficial to have different experiences .

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Also , sometimes , people may meet some new friends in the traveling group .

Also , sometimes , people may meet some new friends in the group they are traveling with .

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Also the animal population got better and they recovered really good after the fire .

Also , the animal population got better and recovered really well after the fire .

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Hence from the very beginning children form this hesitancy from interaction with other people which time only solidifies .

Hence from the very beginning , children form a hesitancy to interact with other people , which time only solidifies .

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The definication yong or older is not apparent .

The definition of young or old is not apparent .

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Against those problems , people started to use cheaper transportation instead of car .

To combat those problems , people started to use cheaper transportation instead of cars .

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because this is not very easy to use .

This is not very easy to use .

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When a talk about reaserch I mean ask people that had the product like friends , family or go to forums on the Internet .

When a talk about research , I mean ask people that had the product , like friends , family , or go to forums on the Internet .

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Sometimes , even a personality , like a famous actor , becomes this truthworthy voice .

Sometimes , even a personality like a famous actor , becomes this trustworthy voice .

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for example , there may be eldelery travelers which may cause a slow movements due to their unability to walk fast .

For example , there may be elderly travelers which may cause slow movement due to their inability to walk fast .

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Every time when we meet , I will look forward to the new things .

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Comparing with older people , they do n't even have enough time to enjoy their life .

Compared to older people , they do n't have enough time to enjoy their life .

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Other one is a gambler which means that people always try the new things and take risks .

Other one is a gambler , which means that people always try new things and take risks .

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Obviously the unreplaciable examination and less enemy can bring huge advance to fulfill the defination about success .

Obviously the irreplaceable examination and less enemy can bring huge advances to fulfill the definition of success .

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Younger generation are more adaptable thus they can adapt to changing technology .

The younger generation is more adaptable and can therefore adapt to changing technology .

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He knows that there is no return in his help to others .

He does not expect others to reciprocate his help .

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But I disegree this opinion because often the advertisement do n't speak about the only functionals of the product but it promises other characteristics that do n't depend by it .

But I disagree with this opinion because often the advertisement does n't speak about only the functionality of the product , but it promises other characteristics that do n't depend on it .

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But , even if this student passes the course , he/she will not be a succesfull lawyer in the future about contracts .

But , even if this student passes the course , he/she will not be a successful lawyer in the future about contracts .

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then there chance to shift him other parts of cricket .

Then there chance to shift him other parts of cricket .

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Many people think that treasure never existed , but in reality it exits .

Many people think that the treasure never existed , but in reality it exists .

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They have to think twice before performing even routine activities of life .

They have to think twice before performing even routine activities in life .

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First of all , old houses are not necessarily suited to the needs of mordern residents .

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Raising tax for the gas can be the most effective and possible way to decrease the use of gas in three reasons .

Raising the gas tax could be the most effective way to decrease gas consumption for three reasons .

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So it is complex , looking after many new employee every year can be difficult .

So it is complex ; looking after many new employees every year can be difficult .

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if they are urged to understand the concept that is being passed and interact with the information , the learning process will take place in a completely different way .

if they are urged to understand the concept that is being passed on and to interact with the information , the learning process will take place in a completely different way .

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Because the fashional culture has been changed .

Because the fashion culture has changed .

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he usually bring a book , and ask something to some one , he wants to understand the bood

He usually brings a book and asks someone when he wants to understand the book .

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It 's normal : propose something to the client and construct something different , is the best way ( and it 's legal ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! )

It 's normal , propose something to the client and make something different , it 's the best way and it 's legal !

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Hence , in twenty years , the need for man to go out and get what he wants will be out of question .

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To work hard means to run the company .

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I think that young peopie is not able to think deeply for the things than older people .

I think that young people are not able to think as deeply on things as older people .

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And availablity of jobs to the candidates having specfic knowledge is less when compare to the all round perormer ,

The availability of jobs to the candidates having specific knowledge is less when compare to the all around performer .

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He or she can help me in languages , introducing specific beautiful places , what the special food in that country is , and how about that country 's culture .

He or she can help me in languages , introducing specific beautiful places , teaching what the special food in that country is , and about that country 's culture .

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Other tourists would teach you some tips for the travel with thier experience .

Other tourists with experience can give you some travel tips .

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In addition , students want to learn the language and they want to use it , so when they understand the concepts and the ideas it will help them to learn the language .

In addition , students want to learn the language and they want to use it , so when they understand the concepts and the ideas , it will help them to learn the language .

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As a student who learns many subjects at the same time , I found it very beneficial .

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Therefore the government in America should decide to raise the gasoline tax is proposed .

Therefore the government in America should propose to raise the gasoline tax .

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There are many people that do n't think before take a choose .

There are many people that do n't think before making a choice .

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Although the professor in the listening passage explains that the solution is acceptable because not only the striped bass population is vital for menhaden but also the entire ecological system based on it .

Although , the professor in the listening passage explains that the solution is acceptable because not only is the striped bass population vital for Menhaden , but also the entire ecological system based on it .

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But after a few days , I found myself enjoying in it .

But after a few days , I found myself enjoying it .

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when you be successful you will have a reasons for live .

When you are successful , you will have reasons to live .

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If a person just know the facts , he would never think about the possibilities .

If a person just knows the facts , he would never think about the possibilities .

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Carusage in the United States is very important in every day life , aswell as in many latinamerican countries , and thirdworld countries .

Car usage in the United States is very important in every day life , as well as in many Latin American countries , and third world countries .

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It is not bed if you know it , it means that your intelligence is high but a doctor has to be absolutely good at safing and helping ill persons .

It is not bad if you know it , it means that your intelligence is high but a doctor has to be absolutely good at saying and helping ill people .

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Because they can get a great amount of money from these companies .

They can get a great amount of money from these companies .

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Understand how they work would give students a better lesson .

Understanding how they work would provide students a better lesson .

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Maybe I can not enjoy in real meaning and I am tired .

Maybe I can not enjoy the real meaning and I am tired .

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By the same token , people will learn many different intellages by doing so many things but they just learn it 's appeals not get any crutial informations and wisdom form it .

By the same token , people will learn many different intelligences by doing many things , but they just learn its appeals and do n't get any crucial information or wisdom from them .

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Because it is allready a fixed data so nobody can creat problem with this type of litreture .

Because it is already fixed data , nobody can create a problem with this type of literature .

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Ignorance of striped bass will abbreviate our earning also it has some astonishing effects on our health .

Ignorance of striped bass will abbreviate our earnings , also it has some astonishing effects on our health .

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After all , personally , until now , I try to go on a diet and manage my health condition more carefully .

After all , until now , I tried to stay on a diet and manage my health condition carefully .

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They have limit to way which have meaning and function like a word .

They have limits to ways that have meaning and function like words .

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They dont have to read spacific books and articles just because they love the topic .

They do n't have to read specific books and articles just because they love the topic .

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Thanks to new and `` out of the box '' way of thinking it is what made our civilizations what it 's now .

Thanks to new and `` out of the box '' ways of thinking ; these are what made our civilizations what they are now .

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New kinds of vehicles will be invented with new technology than today .

In the future , new kinds of vehicles will be invented with new technology than today .

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In my essy i want to focus on : how impotant is for students to learn facts .

In my essay , I want to focus on how important it is for students to learn facts .

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I guduate in university .

I graduated from a university .

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It will alsow bi unfair , because it would affect low-income Amricans much mor seriously than well-to-do Americanc In the listenig part the woman ecplani dhe nir reality the raising gasoline tax dose not reflest the real economic damage .

It will be unfair because it would affect low-income Americans much more seriously than well-to-do Americans , and listening to the part where the woman explains her reality does not reflect the real economic damages raising gasoline tax would do to low-income Americans .

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Also its been on all the sections because we use the head phones it makes alot of noise and it seriously very hard to stay on task .

Also it has been on all the sections because when we use the head phones it makes a lot of noise and it is seriously very hard to stay on task .

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The heart decease patients shows improvement when they are taking placebo .

The heart disease patients show improvement when they are taking a placebo .

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Ihad good life in my cauntry but everything I got from my patents .

I had a good life in my country , but everything I got from my patients .

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Disadvantage is parking their car is very difficult .

A disadvantage is that parking their cars is very difficult .

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This is clearly seen in the way many young people organize the collection of funds or books to help others receive a proper education , and , also in the way many students go to schools for the blind to read out books to them and help them out .

This is clearly seen in the way many young people organize the collection of funds or books to help others receive a proper education , and , also , in the way many students go to schools for the blind to read books aloud to them and help them out .

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For example , last monthe , i bought a product for skin , actully i bought the product beacuse the adevrtising got my attention .

For example , last month I bought a product for skin because the advertising got my attention .

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Also , the professor indicates prescribed fire should be carful when we use prescribed fire solution .

Also , the professor indicates that we should be careful when we use the prescribed fire solution .

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He will conceder him self losing the years that he spent on colecting the money .

He will consider himself losing the years that he spent on collecting the money .

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On the other hand , sientist agree that the predators are beneficial to control the population tof the menhaden .

On the other hand , scientists agree that the predators are beneficial to control the population of the menhaden .

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At the time of emergency he / she could be of great help if he / she is aware of the child health problems and their cure .

At the time of an emergency he / she could be of great help if he / she is aware of the child health problems and their cure .

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However , almost all of tour guide would go there with my group members and me .

However , almost all tour guides would go there with my group members and myself .

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For example , little children are told that do not cross the street at red light , because it is so dangerous that we cannot let kids learn from crash .

For example , little children are told not to cross the street at a red light because it is dangerous , and we should n't let kids learn from a car crash .

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This does n't destroy our culture , because our culture has changed .

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as a conclution you are not atracted totaly by the product but , by the lifestile that this product will give to you .

As a conclusion you are not attracted totally by the product , but by the lifestyle that this product will give to you .

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May be one day there will be a tool that will take us anywhere we want only in a few seconds .

Maybe one day there will be a tool that will take us anywhere we want in only a few seconds .

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In this way a person always feels to be original and `` modern '' , not `` ancient '' like people that surroand him or her .

In this way , a person always feels original and `` modern , '' not `` ancient '' like the people that surround him or her .

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Altough life is never easy : the age do n't depend on when you can be protected or prevented from bad things .

Although life is never easy , age does n't ensure you can be protected from bad things .

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In short , these were critical parts that contradicted the reading materials .