Can't wait for you to post! :)
You're new half-puppy loves this chapter, even though she's asleep right now. :D ...
How could I have guessed what the outcome would be? Possibly because Derek's suc ...
I don't like Derek. He's very mean and rude and a humongous jerk. Why did you n ...
They had a fight pretty quickly... I don't like this gushy first-date phase!! ...
Innocent, curious little brother, stuck up, immature older sister, upset, stress ...
Interesting start. :) taytay
Prologue (sort of an excerpt)
Sounds cool so far -- I like how you added song lyrics. Please keep writing!
Sounds cool so far! :)