|Reviews for Chauvinistic Equality|
| D chapter 5 . 7/28/2011
| D chapter 3 . 7/28/2011
| Not Afraid of Bruises chapter 11 . 12/29/2007
repeating "all those holes in your screams" was VERY effective and gave the poem a strength that the simple rhyming might have taken away.
at some points it seems like you toss stuff in without connecting it to the rest fo the poem, even so, I liked it. well written
best of luck, and happy new year
| mepoindexter chapter 4 . 9/5/2007
I've made a habit every so often of checking back and reading your poetry.
There's nothing else to say except that it's "unfathomably brilliant!"
It's so macabre, it oozes wonderment within my mind. At times, the directness smacks you like a hammer.
I'm often left bleeding. Thanks.
| dog problems chapter 1 . 5/11/2007
That ending is the greatest.
| Suicidal Skies chapter 2 . 8/26/2005
This is bitter sweet, and it makes me grin, that sarcastic grin. This is kick ass work of fiction!
Thanks for the review!)
| poet tree chapter 9 . 8/9/2005
I like it. For some reason, it sounds like virtual reality gone awry...good job.
| poet tree chapter 8 . 8/9/2005
I like the questioning nature of the poem.
| poet tree chapter 7 . 8/8/2005
Bitter. I like the first one better, but on the second, I like the 'i hope you die which rhymes with cry but i wouldn't'. It's all happy. (Not really, but to me it is.)
| poet tree chapter 6 . 7/24/2005
I like it. It's sweet in a twisted way.
| K.Silence chapter 2 . 7/23/2005
Kids will be Kids... sickeningly true. Loved it.
| poet tree chapter 5 . 7/22/2005
Your way with words is incredible. Once again, I am in awe.
| poet tree chapter 4 . 6/27/2005
Ah, the bitter irony of it all. Love it.
| Suicidal Skies chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
I like the irony and wicked artisticness of it all.
| poet tree chapter 3 . 6/26/2005
I like the ending a lot.