|Reviews for The Gated Wall|
| thedarkthatiwas chapter 1 . 3/11/2005
This is an absolutely wonderful poem... I can relate perfectly, wow wow wow! I don't think you're on my fave authors list... *tuts loudly to self* now that can't be right... there that's better. I like this poem heaps, so it can go on my fav stories list. It is very very true, sarcastic and sad at the same time... and angsty, very angsty. Wow!
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 2/25/2005
Wow...you killed my angst poems! lol...but I can say I'm in that situation too... Oh love is hard...
| ShadowofDemise chapter 1 . 2/24/2005
Very nice, the imagery is great, I can almost shiver at the scene that comes to mind. I can relate, I love your metaphor for such a secret place. *adds to faves*(I have yet to read your other work, you have so many!)
| S0ulSearching chapter 1 . 2/24/2005
Again, awsome. I relate perfectly. Nice. *PAMMY*
| SagaciousPnay chapter 1 . 2/24/2005
Another beautifully written poem. Brings a tear to my eyes because i realize there are other people who knows how I'm feeling. I mean, i got my wall too and ::sniffs:: you Trista, you perfectly wrote down so accurately as my wall _ Thank you for the wonderful piece!
Keep writing! :)
| Diana Shore chapter 1 . 2/24/2005
Great imaging in this poem.I sometimes open the gate, but only if a guard is standing closely by! :-)Take care, D.
| Broken Melody chapter 1 . 2/24/2005
Wow what a interesting little piece, I really like it! I used to feel like that, like I couldn't talk to anyone, like the gate thing! I like this! Its going in my favs!
| Karma Chameleon chapter 1 . 2/23/2005
great poem. love the analogies.