|Reviews for Breaking a Sweat|
| Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
The pace really gets you going! My heart was pounding after reading this. I like the imagery and I'm somewhat curious as how they got into that position in the first place! Good poem :)
| Grimpeddler chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
Ooh! Interesting. Is it eminent death or impending marriage? ;D
| The Lesbian of Reason chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
This is very good. I love how it's in poetry form. You should add onto it.