|Reviews for A ringing sound|
| Dashboard Dusk chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
I had to wonder whether or not it was about schizophrenia or that annoying ringing that you get that lasts ten seconds then slowly goes away. *guillotine'd* I'm sorry, I couldn't resist.
I think the poem is good as is, but would be brilliant if continued. Or perhaps I'm just favorable of longer poems, but the short-and-sweet kind usually make the reader think more, wouldn't you agree?
| AmintawithaRose chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
Nice rhythm and rhyme scheme.