|Reviews for Wait|
| Ashelin chapter 1 . 8/24/2006
Sad, but don't let them crush your dreams. Dreams and hopes are beautiful things, so don't ever let anyone break them down!
P. your dream is to be a hooker. Lol.
| Theallpowerfull chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
I like this one the most out of the new poems. I enjoy the ideas behind your poetry. You have the raw thoughts and emotions that are important for real art. Just make sure that you've chosen the exact words you've been looking for. Grammar is also incredibly important, so be as careful as possible (such as the improper usage of you're rather than your in To a Friend).
Is it in the structure you intended it to be? If not then you can edit the story after you upload it. To get rid of the foolish double spacing they throw in there just backspace, press shift and enter. While holding shift it will single space instead of double.
I have yet to go back and do that with my old poems.
If you want me to stop giving reviews like this please tell me.