|Reviews for Tenipuri Cafe|
| Ciel Squish chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
YOU MUST CONTINUE THIS! IT'S TOO AWESOME!
| AspergianStoryteller chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
Amusing, but this should be rated at least T.
| So1Thought chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
Oooh... ;) Naughty...
LOL! So cute! :)
| Jaricchi chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
oh god!bwafufufufuufufufu!i seriously like it!u might want to change the rating though!_ganbatte!keep it up!
| pearlshadow03 chapter 1 . 3/28/2007
are ryoma and tezuka gay?
| blood red tensai chapter 1 . 1/9/2007
ga24t6 5s 042a5h's f5rst na0e.
| Ria Sakazaki chapter 1 . 3/2/2006
cute! really cute!
| Silver Mystic chapter 1 . 8/26/2005
XD THAT GREAT!
| Ishka chapter 1 . 8/11/2005
the last line was... wow. XD
| ennov chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
This is soo cute haha esp the last part when ryoma says "And they thought I hated crossdressing." Keep it up...
| psyne0 chapter 1 . 4/14/2005
Cute! Crossdressing Ryoma yum.
However: I have to comment on the random insertion of Japanese. It disrupts the flow of the story. Especially when the entire opening wouldn't even make sense to someone who doesn't know Japanese. I know it can feel weird having them speak English when you always hear them in Japanese, but it's weirder for them to arbitrarily switch back and forth, isn't it? But really, the only things that should be kept in Japanese are nicknames, catchphrases, and Japanese cultural references (i.e. ochibi, mada mada dane, obentou). Basically, the same things they keep in Japanese in the subtitles. There's no real reason to include more than that unless you're actually going to write it in Japanese.
And I guarantee you you'd get more reviews if you kept it in English. I know lots of people that will wince and click 'back' if they see 'demo' or other pointless Japanese in a fic. I used to be one, but now I try to deal with it and then let the author know But other than that, cute fic!
| delusional-lady chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
I love cross-dressing! Wait.. That didn't sound right.. Anyhoo, *gets nosebleed attacks when Tezuka reached inside Ryoma's skirt*, hehe. Well, I guess it's safe to say that Ryoma and Tezuka lead very.. exciting lives. :D
| Kiawna chapter 1 . 4/1/2005
*giggles* That was cute. And quite amusing. The OOC-ness can be good sometimes. I want to know what happens to his Senpais. XD Fear the wrath of Tezuka! *snickers* Ryoma as a crossdresser. That's great
| ai-chan chapter 1 . 3/30/2005
hahahaha what can i say? _
| Zen Nat chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
Only one plus: A bit of fluffy goodness in that fic.
Sorry to tell you; M... Well, Ryoma Echizen is not that sort of guy who is into cross-dressing. It is totally NOT realistic.
Simply, RZen is a person with fierce pride & solid self-esteem. So how possibly can it be for him to demean himself like that? It contradicts his very essence of character.
That's all I have said. All the best.