Clouds became clearer? The sky can be cloudy or clear but I am not sure what a clear cloud is.With the advent of spring, the clouds became clearer, flowers began to grow, magnolias, cherries, and quince started to bloom. The Himalayans Mountains are disgorging crystal clear water, and the animals are celebrating the season. Every thing looked happy, but Mary seems to be cheerless. Despite of the blithesome weather, she is tearful.
“I wont go to the bazaar”, replied Mary in a cold-blooded voice to her mother, when she was asked to accompany.
The Himalayas or Himalayan Mountains.
I am totally confused as you keep switching from past to present tense.
'Despite of the blithesome' should be 'Despite the blithesome'.
'when she was asked to accompany'. Accompany who?