|Reviews for Heavy|
| hoowdoideletethisaccount chapter 1 . 1/7/2006
Mm, I love haikus. There's something stunning about the simplicity of them.
I like this one- the power of the wind, the straining branches (I love that word in there; straining), the hopelessly falling berries. Good poem, man.
| Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 1/7/2006
this is neatly done, it's an enduring, philosophical image. nice.
| Wishdreamer89 chapter 1 . 1/7/2006
Oh that's why you sound talented, becuase it's "you"! Haha, i didn't notice who I was reviewing. This one is cute, I like it. "poor branches in the wind strain" truly vivid lovely line. Have a good day,
| sloppy firsts chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
i don't know if it was your intention or not (since it is not marked in the genre humor) but the last line is strangely amusing.