Imosa wrote:I'm not sure what your talking about with Minnie's body.
Ok, what is the horrible twist in your plot? If all you say is Minnie gets kidnapped and Junior rescues her, then that doesn't sound interesting. You have to sell the idea a little more.
Well if you look at it that way than every plot is based on:
1)The main hero wants to achive something,
2)the story is about him achiving that some some thing (some times the hero dosent ewen knows what it is until the end),
3)then there are posible finals
a)he achived it and lived hapily ever after.
b)he achived it but died in the end.
c)he achived it but lost some thing even more imporntant. (life of someone dear to him for example)
d)he died in misery without achiving it, but left an example.
f)he understand that he alredy have it or dosent need it anymore (usualy when he already accomplished the task).
Absolutely every story based on this.
My point is, the diference being made by how the story will be served.
Even the simplest plot, like the one i mentioned can become some thing tasty if you add some mistery,
drama, comedy and sexual content
in right proportions.
p.s. about Minnies body there was some sneak peek at this http://bleedman.deviantart.com/gallery/ ... 4#/d2xo9wd
she is way shorter than Mmi or JR like she didnt grow at all.