If I was a dude I wouldnt "wife a flip"... I would think that there would be way more of a chance she would cheat..
but you are a woman, so what...
What did you mean by the ending, who was holding onto who, and why?
this was a nice flowing piece,sort of like a melodic daydream along the river bank.
[QUOTE=sagacious infant]Usually when I write [poetry] it's because something is bothering me. It'll just come out on the paper like a good bowel...
I thought this was good. You proposed some good questions that many a human being could relate to. Your structure was yours, surely it will be said...
My heart blinks back and forth
over my third eye scanning my aura
for some conciousness somewhere
thats deep in me like fresh air
I balance my...
Happy new year
You can blame it on me,you can take me personally
to the edge of your tether,you can merge me with sin
cast me into pain,give me the blame
Great way of bringing across isolation and the coverings of the human heart which consists of blanking out much feelings, If this what you intended...
this was amazing, i would love to meet that person
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