|Reviews for Stairs to Heaven|
| T-Bird chapter 4 . 11/22/2011
Not bad You fixed some of the minor errors but theres still problems with the plot itself.
| RMcD94 chapter 7 . 1/8/2010
THAT WAS AWESOME!
No criticisms at all. I thoroughly enjoyed the entire series. You should write a book.
Nothing more to say, truly awesome.
| T-Bird chapter 6 . 1/8/2010
You write some really messed up stuff bro. He raped her for what? 600 years?
| T-Bird chapter 5 . 1/8/2010
12 Guardians should be left then right? How would you place those on the Earth on it's continental system in order to maximize the defense? Or are the oceans covered as well and the Earth is more like a death star?
| T-Bird chapter 4 . 1/8/2010
The Oort Cloud extends halfway to Alpha Centauri...you make it seem that the boundary of the Solar System and the boundary of the Oort Cloud are really close.
| T-Bird chapter 3 . 1/8/2010
You just couldn't keep the Dragonites out of this could you?
| T-Bird chapter 2 . 1/8/2010
This seems to be almost a replication process of earlier stories. Do a explanation of the robot and it might be more interesting.
| T-Bird chapter 1 . 1/8/2010
So they finally began the nuking process did they? About time...why am I reading this for you again?
| RMcD94 chapter 5 . 1/1/2010
What time does your sun get up?
Anyway, my review: