|Reviews for riddles|
| ittybittytreefrog chapter 1 . 9/10/2003
Nice rhyme scheme (see? you can too rhyme!)
For some reason the first one makes me think of the reflection of the sun on the water. I don't know if that's the answer though.
| Chiaroscuro chapter 1 . 7/25/2003
The first riddle seems well constructed, though the end rhyme is a bit too simple. My answer to that one would be 'the day' or 'daylight.' I had been thinking that the sun would be a probable answer - at least until you referenced it directly in the riddle. ;
Your second riddle strikes me as the more composed, although a lack of the same ethereal imagery as the first was somewhat disappointing. I can't fault you too much, however - the thing you describe probably didn't warrant the same sort of portrayal. My answer to this one would be 'a bow.' More properly it would be a longbow, I think.
| ittybittytreefrog chapter 1 . 7/25/2003
Interesting. Is the answer to the first riddle 'water'?
Heehee, I like to write riddles too. I haven't posted any though.
| Shinn chapter 1 . 6/13/2003
Thanks very much for reviweing my work. Oh, and I've read through this thrice and still can't figure it out _ Though I'm too much entranced by the lovely style to worry about the answers.