well i would have to explain the first story later but here's the second story:a former cabin girl named Maria is just leaving another beach town when she wanders into a small beach town where she wanders until she spots an abandoned lighthouse at the edge of town and takes shelter there and then tries to find work around town, and old couple runs into the orphan and lets her mow their lawn for $5.00 an hour, feeling concerned for her safety and well being they let her stay with them and they send her off to school. When she's in class she hears her classmates talking about the legend of the underwater universe but maria is reluctant to believe them but they dare her to check it out for herself, she goes home and tells the old couple but they don't discuss it, at night she goes to the beach to find the underwater universe she dives into the water and swims out to sea and sees nothing at first but then a bunch of bubbles swirl around her and then she can see all the underwater planets and stars and things. The planets rings are schools of fish and sharks and the stars are jellyfish etc... . Maria is so surprised by what she saw that she forgot to breathe, she swam up to the surface and then dove back down again and it all disappeared and bubbles started to swarm around her again and it all reappeared again, then when she was swimming deeper into the water and she saw a glowing abalone stuck on a rock, she dives down to the bottom to get it but it's stuck, she then remembers how a sea otter opens it's food with a rock and she hits the shell against a rock until it finally breaks off. Then Maria swims back to shore. The next day she can see from her classroom window that the ocean is glowing, she tells her classmates that she saw the underwater universe and about the shell and all they tell her is to return the shell to the ocean. Later that night she goes to the pier to drop the shell in the ocean but it spits the shell out and then the shell starts to glow and so does the ocean, this makes her think that she has to return it to where she found it so she swims out to sea to drop the shell in the ocean herself but when she sees the underwater universe it dissipates and all the planets animal rings turn into skeletons, then the current gets stronger and stronger, she quickly swims back to shore but too quick to just drop the shell, she tries to tell the elderly couple but they won't believe her, she runs up to her room and realizes that the shell is making the ocean act weird and that was what kept the underwater universe alive and thanks to her she killed it. she pries open the shell and something is engraved in it that says "if you're reading this than you just removed me from my rock, stupid." She runs into the school building where most of the people in the town are hiding, the town is mostly flooded from a giant tidal wave. Maria runs into the corner where everyone else is and opens the shell just in time for a huge gush of water to pour in, when she opens the shell all the water pours into the shell, after a few minutes she closes the shell and the town is mostly drained of the water, then the shell starts to glow for a few seconds and when she opens it there's a pearl inside and another engraving on the shell that says "Do not drop this pearl under any circumstances or else it will drown the entire earth". Maria walks home and she sees that the couple made her a dress and hat for her, she thanks them and then goes to bed. after a few hours she decides to leave. She writes them a thank you note and heads on her way.
it might not be long enough to be a movie but i might add more to it later. what do you think?
It seems so creative. The story doesn’t remind me another movie or anything I’ve ever seen or read. Keep the good work up. It leaves a good message, that we need to be careful and respect the fact that everything we do has a repercussion on everything that surround us. Thanks for include my concept on your work.