|Reviews for Night Sky|
| pandorka42 chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
Amazing. I love 'velvet blue sky'. Perfect metaphor. :)
| Jamir420 chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
Love the content. Try using less words, like "and" though. Sometimes it can make your sentences sound too complicated, which can offset the tone, a undesirable result in poetry.