|Reviews for Recursion|
| SmallInsect chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
I feel guilty for not reviewing sooner. This fic totally deserves it.
Your writing is elegant and detailed and I'm sorry but I LOVE the way you write staffhead :P Sometimes, I think, your content is a little diffciult to follow lately. You can sopeak very much "in character" in terms of a time period (I remember that original fic you showed me the other day) but in some ways, it's like a different language. A very readable language. But a different one. And that's your style so it works.
And Illusion... Zoar bless that scrappy young thing, before tact was drilled into her. Probably with staffhead.
I love the... contained violence of it all. It's something in the way you write, I think, the way you can write things which feel harsh and blunt, but relegent in the same breath. LIke you're speaking as Lady Illusion, but doing Lord Fear's deeds. Melodrama yay :D :D
So yeah. I hope that makes sense, it does in myhead, dearest
| Ashley chapter 1 . 11/13/2009
Cool, Sarah I love it. You know LI isnt exactly my fave character but even I enjoyed reading that. :)
| guess-who chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
:D Love love love.
I'm so rubbish at constructive comments - but the way you described her power, and the process of him searching for it was fantastic, I could really feel it :) Perfect characterisation also :D