THE NEWS HIRT:
WHITE BIRDS HIT.
20 Apr 02
Rated 9 (6.3) by 2 users.
Active (2): 10
Inactive (10): 1, 3, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 7, 7, 8, 8
(define the words in this poem)
(181 more poems by this author)
(3 users consider this poem a favorite)
Add A Comment:
Great stuff, Norm, but is it pastry? How about DUCKY or even SUCKY perhaps MUCKY (hmmm... perhaps not).
I like it -- welcome back, gnorm.
Meh, bit silly.
gnormal, you are the most underappreciated poet on this site.
clever, indeed. -Shattered
more poems about teddy bears
k im stupid and dont get it...care to explain anyone?
this website is the suckiest website I've ever went on.
the new shirt
white bird shit
get it now?
this poem is cool
HIT ON SIDE
I feel so stupid: I started looking up 'hirt' on dictionary.com, thinking it was a verb I didn't know ... Ha ha.
SPLAT! Cute poem gnormal! :-)
yeah, i didn't understand it at first either.
ohm ye yes a rehurt, yo ufo old ear to PC.
yes ohm ye yes a
rehurt by yo ufo
old ear to PC.
nice, a in' tit?
well, if it gets you thinking and scratching your
head for gawd knows how long, then it certainly
has allowed you the illusion and experience of
time while riding the words you've just read.
may BMWrong, maybe MNO....T, hehe.
i think 'hit' deserves a line
of its own, though.
what do you think?
Questioning what poetry is
Is often but not always
A useful exercise in writing