Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: As the aging problems are getting seriously nowadays, it should not be invariably neglected by the society but to face the problem that the elderly may suffer financial hardships in their golden age after they retired.

Target: As the aging problems are getting serious nowadays, it should not be neglected by society but face the problem that the elderly may suffer financial hardships in their golden age after they have retired.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: In the other hand, a huge amount of stress which may cause high blood pressure, heart disease and cancer will affect both their emotional and physical health and reduces their ability to live to the full.

Target: On the other hand, a huge amount of stress which may cause high blood pressure, heart disease, and cancer, will affect both their emotional and physical health and reduces their ability to live to the full.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: Burden of responsibilities of taking care of their aged parents, taking care of their children, rising cost of living and at the same time worrying about job security makes the future generations live so stressful every day in life in competitive society.

Target: The burden of responsibility of taking care of their aged parents, taking care of their children, rising cost of living, and at the same time worrying about job security makes the future generations' live so stressful every day in the life in a competitive society.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: These strategies prove that instead of spending much money on supporting the aged, government can seek for another alternatives to reduce the burden.

Target: These strategies prove that instead of spending much money on supporting the aged, the government can seek for another alternative to reduce the burden.


Source: Fix grammar: Moreover, by doing so, the elder can earn for their living, have a savings for future need on health care, and have less dependency on their younger generation.

Target: Moreover, by doing so, the elderly can earn a living, have savings for future needs for health care, and have less dependency on their younger generation.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: Opponents may say current clinical R&D cause an increase in longevity, which substantially raises the average age of the population.

Target: Opponents may say current clinical R&D causes an increase in longevity, which substantially raises the average age of the population.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: Clinical R&D continuously introduce people with healthier living styles, bring in more efficacious, safer and cheaper medical treatments, which allows people to look young and stay healthy so that they are still able to work actively in middle or even old age.

Target: Clinical R&D continuously introduce people to healthier living styles, and brings in more efficacious, safer, and cheaper medical treatments, which allows people to look young and stay healthy so that they are still able to work actively in the middle or even old age.


Source: Make the sentence fluent: To cope with it, Chinese government has made and implemented several policies like building up colleges of continuing education for the aged.

Target: To cope with it, the government has made and implemented several policies like building colleges of continuing education for the aged.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: Shrinking workforce is another problem arising from an aging population.

Target: A shrinking workforce is another problem arising from an aging population.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: The manpower resources of many developed countries are predicted to shrink as a hefty portion of the workforce is edging towards retirement.

Target: The human resources of many developed countries are predicted to shrink as a hefty portion of the workforce is edging toward retirement.


Source: Fix grammaticality: The solution inevitably invited criticism as many found themselves being victims of ageism, a situation where younger workers are preferred over retaining or hiring the old.

Target: The solution inevitably invited criticism as many found themselves being victims of ageism, a situation where younger workers are preferred over retaining or hiring older ones.


Source: Fix grammaticality: Another major issue caused by aging population is the increasing healthcare problem associated with elderly.

Target: Another major issue caused by the aging population is the increasing healthcare problem associated with the elderly.


Source: Grammar improvements: In fact, leaders and policymakers particularly from the developed countries have proactively implemented a series of researches and policies in an effort to confront this unprecedented phenomenon.

Target: In fact, leaders and policymakers, particularly from developed countries, have proactively implemented a series of research and policies in an effort to confront this unprecedented phenomenon.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: Healthcare issue has to be taken into consideration because elderly are prone to suffer from several chronic diseases as they grow older.

Target: Healthcare issue has to be taken into consideration because the elderly are prone to suffer from chronic diseases as they grow older.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: Nonetheless, if the spending on healthcare is limited, the burden will increasingly fall on low-income individuals as well as their families.

Target: Nonetheless, if the spending on healthcare is limited, the burden will fall increasingly on low-income individuals as well as their families.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: Elderly are encouraged to work longer and contribute to the growth of economy, thereby reducing elder dependency of fiscal cost.

Target: The elderly are encouraged to work longer and contribute to the growth of the economy, thereby reducing the elder dependency on fiscal costs.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: However, older workers are usually less productive than imported foreign talents whereas employers may compromise on a small portion of existing aged employees.

Target: However, older workers are usually less productive than imported foreign talents, though employers may compromise on a small portion of existing aged employees.


Source: Fix grammar: Alternatively, the government should encourage employment of elderly by offering privileges and incentives to private sectors.

Target: Alternatively, the government should encourage the employment of the elderly by offering privileges and incentives to private sectors.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: The future elderly will be more professional and better educated than current cohorts in many countries.

Target: The future elderly will be more professional and better educated than the current cohorts in many countries.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: Thus, decision-makers must carry on fashioning programs to further ease the aging process nowadays without getting them locked into policies and approaches that may not be suitable for the changing composition of tomorrow's elderly.

Target: Thus, decision-makers must carry on fashioning programs to further ease the aging process without getting them locked into policies and approaches that may not be suitable for the changing composition of tomorrow's elderly.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: Nowadays almost every developed country is concerned about the issue of growing aging population because this issue is a barrier for a country's development.

Target: Nowadays, almost every developed country is concerned about the issue of a growing aging population because this issue is a barrier to a country's development.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: But this does not means that to overcome these challenges excessive spending should be done by the government.

Target: But this does not mean that to overcome these challenges, excessive spending should be done by the government.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: As it takes years for the country to overcome with this problem so likewise spending on the aged should be limited.

Target: As it takes years for the country to overcome this problem, so likewise spending on the aged should be limited.


Source: Grammar improvements: So there should be limited public spending on the aged group so that money can be diverted to other areas of the county which will give better returns in near future.

Target: So, there should be limited public spending on the aged group so that money can be diverted to other areas of the country, which will give better returns in the near future.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: So for the country's development there should be more injections than the leakages.

Target: So for the country's development, there should be more injections than leakages.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: Spending on the infrastructure and defense will enhance the country's economic growth rate, living standards and overall the image of a country.

Target: Spending on infrastructure and defense will enhance the country's economic growth, the living standards of the people, and the overall image of the country.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: It is less effective because benefits do not exceed the cost.

Target: It is less effective because the benefits do not exceed the cost.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: In the awareness of this demographic, countries like Japan and Singapore have been establishing ways to curb the aging population.

Target: In view of this demographic, countries like Japan and Singapore have been establishing ways to curb the aging population.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: Majority of these elderly are the baby boomers who yearn to extend their duration in the workforce.

Target: The majority of these elderly are baby boomers who yearned to extend their duration in the workforce.


Source: Grammar improvements: More portion of national budget may later be allocated to the incentives for the old.

Target: A greater portion of the national budget may later be allocated to the incentives for the old.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: However, the increase of public spending on the elderly may not effective as it can be diverted to other sectors that need it.

Target: However, the increase in public spending on the elderly may not be effective as it can be diverted to other sectors that need it.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: If the plan goes well, it may stabilize or even increase GDP which in turn will provide more funds to the elderly.

Target: If the plan goes well, it may stabilize or even increase GDP, which will, in turn, provide more funds for the elderly.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: The institution which they work at will also provide a percentage of funds to the savings.

Target: The institution at which they work will also contribute a percentage of funds to the savings.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: The contribution rate from employee and employer reduces as the age of employee increases while the crediting to Medisave account increases.

Target: The contribution rate from employee and employer reduces as the age of the employee increases while the crediting to the Medisave account increases


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: Since it is a complement to CPF contribution scheme, there is an obligation to contribute about 71 percent of the total workfare payout to CPF.

Target: Since it is a complement to the CPF contribution scheme, there is an obligation to contribute about 71 percent of the total workfare payout to CPF


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: Hence, the net payout is relatively helpless due to high living expenses in Singapore.

Target: Hence, the net payout is relatively useless due to the high living expenses in Singapore.


Source: Fix errors in this text: In conclusion, Singapore government has implement policies and development that are relatively effective in easing the aging process.

Target: In conclusion, the Singapore government has implemented policies and development that are relatively effective in easing the aging process.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: In many developed countries, aging population is rising and Singapore is no exception.

Target: In many developed countries, the aging population is rising, and Singapore is no exception.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: This is not true as now countries like Japan and US are encouraging elderly entrepreneurs that will eventually create more jobs for them.

Target: This is not true as countries like Japan and the US are now encouraging elderly entrepreneurs, and that will eventually create more jobs for them.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: If the fertility rate continues to drop, there will be not enough young people to replace the older generation.

Target: If the fertility rate continues to drop, there will not be enough young people to replace the older generation.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: This will lead to the shrinking of workforce which will affect the economic growth of Singapore.

Target: This will lead to the shrinking of the workforce, which will affect the economic growth of Singapore.


Source: Fix errors in this text: First, the current government policies are not easing the ageing process because they are limited to a specified group of the aged population.

Target: Firstly, current government policies are not easing the aging process because they are limited to a specified group of the aged population.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: The current policies in placed are definitely planned to benefit a large portion of the target group.

Target: The current policies in place are definitely planned to benefit a large portion of the target group.


Source: Fix grammaticality: For example, the Government could top-up the Medisave accounts of the less fortunate elder Singaporeans when there are budgetary surpluses to ensure that seniors have the capacity to afford healthcare services.

Target: For example, the government could top-up the Medisave accounts of the less fortunate elder Singaporeans when there are budgetary surpluses to ensure that seniors have the capacity to afford healthcare services


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: For example, the Government has increased the retirement age to 63 years old.

Target: For example, the government has increased the retirement age to 63 years old


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: Hence, the Government must first attempt to inform the elders in Singapore about the available avenues and encourage them to reap the benefits of the current policies to maximize the effectiveness of its policies.

Target: Hence, the government must first attempt to inform the elderly in Singapore about the available avenues and encourage them to reap the benefits of the current policies so as to maximize the effectiveness of its policies.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: The Government has not developed sufficient programmes to cater to the psychological needs of the aged.

Target: The government has not developed sufficient programs to cater to the psychological needs of the aged.


Source: Fix grammar errors: On the other side of the coin, opponents will argue that the Government cannot be responsible for every aspect of the issue.

Target: On the other side of the coin, opponents will argue that the government cannot be responsible for every aspect of the issue.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: Hence, the Singapore Government should invest more in programmes to cater to the mental aspect of the elderly so that the elders can proceed to commit themselves to important and useful roles in society after retirement.

Target: Hence, the Singapore Government should invest more in programs to cater to the mental aspect of the elderly so that they elderly can proceed to commit themselves to be important and useful roles in society after retirement.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: If more effective policies are formulated and implemented, in will indirectly lower the burden imposed on the young population and society as a whole.

Target: If more effective policies are formulated and implemented, they will indirectly lower the burden imposed on the younger population and society as a whole.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: They were the ones who had toiled in the sun to build infrastructure during Singapore's early developing days.

Target: They were the ones who had toiled in the sun to build the infrastructure during Singapore's early developing days.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: In evaluating the policies to undertake, it is necessary to consider the net impact of using public funds to deal with aging population, as well as the consequences if the issues relating to aging population are not adequately dealt with.

Target: In evaluating the policies to undertake, it is necessary to consider the net impact of using public funds to deal with the aging population, as well as the consequences if the issues relating to the aging population are not adequately dealt with.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: In this case, only focusing on public spending seems not to be the best way to solve the aging problem.

Target: In this case, only focusing on public spending does not seem to be the best way to solve the aging problem.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: Instead, government should limit the public spending on the aged so that more money can be invested to other areas of the country's development.

Target: Instead, the government should limit public spending on the aged so that more money can be invested in other areas of the country's development.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: Consequently, government may not be able to provide enough pension and health care to help improve the old citizens' life as a result of lack of finance.

Target: Consequently, the government may not be able to provide enough pensions and health care to help improve the old citizens' life as a result of a lack of finance.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: Moreover, too much pension may even lead to pension abuse which will make the public spending ineffective.

Target: Moreover, too much pension may even lead to pension abuse which will make public spending ineffective.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: To sum up, it is necessary for government to limit the spending on the elderly so that the economy of the country can be developed more quickly and the effectiveness of the public pensions can be increased.

Target: To sum up, it is necessary for the government to limit the spending on the elderly so that the economy of the country can be developed more quickly and the effectiveness of public pensions can be increased.


Source: Grammar improvements: Public spending on the aged should be limit and the government should use the money to invest in the young and other areas of the countries' development.

Target: Public spending on the aged should be limited, and the government should use the money to invest in the young and other areas of the countries development.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Moreover, the elderly usually demand high salary in exchange for their experience but they cannot work as hard as when they was young, whereas the young lack experience and find difficulty in seeking jobs.

Target: Moreover, the elderly usually demand higher salaries in exchange for their experience, but they cannot work as hard as when they were young, whereas the young lack experience and find difficulty in seeking jobs.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: With advanced education, we can develop new technologies for higher productivity and lower cost, which help the young generation fill the gap of low workforce caused by aging population and take up the burden of caring for the aged.

Target: With advanced education, we can develop new technologies for higher productivity and lower cost, which helps the young generation fill the gap of the low workforce caused by the aging population and take up the burden of caring for the aged.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: There are many areas in the economics that need capital other than the aged.

Target: There are many areas in the economy that need capital other than the aged.


Source: Make the sentence fluent: There are many areas in the economics that need capital other than the aged such as education, infrastructure and so on.

Target: There are many areas in the economy that need capital other than the aged, such as education, infrastructure, and so on.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: Large proportions of the elderly are unemployed and they may not be able to cope up with the rising medical costs.

Target: Large proportions of the elderly are unemployed, and they may not be able to cope with the rising medical costs.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: It is often heard that some elderly abuses the pension by gambling or turn to other vices since the money is free.

Target: It is often heard that some elderly abuse their pension by gambling or turning to other vices since the money is free.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: The elderly would hence feel more in touched with society and likewise, the younger generation would not look upon the elderly as a burden.

Target: The elderly would hence feel more in touch with society, and likewise, the younger generation would not look upon the elderly as a burden.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: Such various government polices provides the aged with economic solutions, social solutions, healthcare solutions to the problems that they may face and hence easing the growing problems faced by an aging population.

Target: Such various government polices provides the aged with economical solutions, social solutions, and healthcare solutions to the problems that they may face hence easing the growing problems faced by an aging population.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: In conclusion, through the various available health polices, government policies, social policies and technological advancements, the elderly now is able to lead a better more comfortable and more fulfilling life.

Target: In conclusion, through the various available health policies, government policies, social policies, and technological advancements, the elderly are now able to lead a better, more comfortable, and fulfilling life.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: Ageing process in humans refers to a multidimensional process of physical, psychological, and social change.

Target: The ageing process in humans refers to a multidimensional process of physical, psychological, and social change


Source: Fix grammar: Steen Langebaek, president of AGE, an organization which aims to promote the interest of older people across Europe, believes that older people should be encouraged to study and work beyond retirement, whether through part-time work or on a voluntary basis.

Target: Steen Langebaek, president of AGE, an organization that aims to promote the interest of older people across Europe, believes that older people should be encouraged to study and work beyond retirement, whether through part-time work or on a voluntary basis


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: It means elderly are welcome to continue serving in the workforce provided they are willing themselves.

Target: It means the elderly are welcome to continue serving in the workforce provided they are willing.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Also, Silver job fairs, established to find jobs for people 60 and older, have mushroomed across South Korea in the past year as part of a government effort to assist a rapidly growing population of older Koreans adrift in a changing society.

Target: Also, Silver job fairs, established to find jobs for people 60 and older, have mushroomed across South Korea in the past year as part of the government's government's effort to assist a rapidly growing population of older Koreans adrift in a changing society


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: From the above examples in different continents, it is inevitable to conclude that elderly employment is one of the policies that have been well adopted by various governments.

Target: From the above examples in different continents, it is inevitable to conclude that elderly employment is one of the policies that has been well adopted by various governments.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: Currently, the drug that helps to reduce aging is being tested and will be releasing into the market soon.

Target: Currently, the drug that helps to reduce aging is being tested and will be released into the market soon.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: This useful drug will ultimately increase life span, hence increasing the productive of the workforce as people could retire at an older age because of this drug.

Target: This useful drug will ultimately increase life span, hence increasing the productivity of the workforce as people could retire at an older age because of this drug.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Government has also promised to build more studio apartments in the upcoming projects.

Target: The government has also promised to build more studio apartments in the upcoming projects.


Source: Fix grammar errors: Large portion of the public health expenditure actually goes to the aged.

Target: A large portion of the public health expenditure actually goes to the aged.


Source: Fix grammar errors: Therefore, for China, being a country which is much less developed than Japan, to limit the spending on the aged will be a more wise decision.

Target: Therefore, for China, being a country which is much less developed than Japan, to limit the spending on the aged will be a wiser decision.


Source: Fix errors in this text: Some sociologists argued that if the expenditure on public health is to be limited, the younger generation has to pay more.

Target: Some sociologists argue that if the expenditure on public health is to be limited, the younger generation has to pay more.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: Last but not least, China's public spending should be limited because there are other sectors of the China's economy which need the money more imperatively.

Target: Last but not least, China's public spending should be limited because there are other sectors of China's economy that need the money more imperatively.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: By doing so, it can partially relief the society of the increasing financial burden of an aging population.

Target: By doing so, it can partially relieve society of the increasing financial burden of an aging population.


Source: Fix grammar: The government are aware of the challenges faced by the aging population due to inadequate facilities and living conditions and have influenced the change in the environment so as to make life easier for the elderly.

Target: The government is aware of the challenges faced by the aging population due to inadequate facilities and living conditions and has influenced the changes in the environment so as to make life easier for the elderly.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: With such bleak outlook of our economy, our nation should be spending more wisely.

Target: With such a bleak outlook on our economy, our nation should be spending more wisely.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: Also, especially in Asian societies, such as Singapore, older people are traditionally supported by their own families.

Target: Especially in Asian societies, such as Singapore, older people are traditionally supported by their own families.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Parents above sixty, who could not support themselves, can approach the tribunal for an order to claim maintenance from their children, delegating responsibility to the children.

Target: Parents above sixty, who cannot support themselves, can approach the tribunal for an order to claim maintenance from their children, delegating responsibility to the children.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: As the nation prospers, these homes will appreciate in value, and Singaporeans may draw on this nest egg when they are old.

Target: As the nation prospers, these homes will appreciate in value, and Singaporeans may draw on this egg nest when they are old.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: Employers could also offer other kinds of employment, not necessarily to be the same job or pay as of their previous employment.

Target: Employers could also offer other kinds of employment; it does not necessarily have to be the same job or pay as their previous employment.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: As the population gets older, retired elderly will require healthcare reimbursement, building of elderly friendly infrastructure and domestic helpers.

Target: As the population gets older, retired elderly will require healthcare reimbursement, the building of elder-friendly infrastructure, and domestic helpers.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: As a result, this will become very costly to the working generations, and also it will be a hindrance to the economic growth.

Target: As a result, this will become very costly to the working generations, and also it will be a hindrance to economic growth.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: The elderly should be educated about the aging population, because the economy may be severely implicated if they are no longer able to support themselves financially.

Target: The elderly should be educated about the aging population because the economy may be severely affected if they are no longer able to support themselves financially.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: Being financially responsible, the elderly should save up as much money as possible while they were young so that they can pay for their daily expenses.

Target: Being financially responsible, the elderly should save up as much money as possible while they are young so that they can pay for their daily expenses.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: As large working population retires, this will mean that there are less people to work and provide for the retired elderly.

Target: As a large working population retires, this will mean that there are fewer people to work and provide for the retired elderly.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: The growing number of elderly population around the world has certainly created huge impacts which in turn caused changes to the structure of current society.

Target: The growing number of elderly around the world has certainly created a huge impact which in turn has caused changes to the structure of current society.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: One of the main solutions offered would be the economic policy that eases the financial situation of the elderly.

Target: One of the main solutions to be offered is the economic policy that eases the financial situation of the elderly.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: With the right economic plan and policies, elderly can effectively contribute back to the growth of the country.

Target: With the right economic plan and policies, the elderly can effectively contribute back to the growth of the country.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: In conclusion, aging population problems are likely to continue or even worsen over the coming years.

Target: In conclusion, the problems of an aging population are likely to continue or even worsen over the coming years.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: Including economic, social and architectural aspects, there are many other implementations that can be done to ease the aging issues.

Target: Including economic, social, and architectural aspects of society, there are many other implementations that can be done to ease the aging issues.


Source: Grammar improvements: With the success of the implementations, I believe the world can shift the paradigm of the aging phenomenon to a sustainable positive impact.

Target: With the success of these implementations, I believe the world can shift the paradigm of the aging phenomenon to have a sustainable positive impact.


Source: Fix grammar: In Singapore, the government and society have come out with various policies and strategies to assist the aging population.

Target: In Singapore, the government and society have come up with various policies and strategies to assist the aging population.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: One might object here that the government and society have not really done much for them.

Target: One might object that the government and society have not really done much for them.


Source: Fix grammaticality: These are just examples of the many strategies that the government has come out with to ease the aging process in Singapore.

Target: These are just examples of the many strategies that the government has come up with to ease the aging process in Singapore.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: Instead of living in the past, they are encouraged to pursuit their dream and work towards their future.

Target: Instead of living in the past, they are encouraged to pursue their dream and work towards their future.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: It turns out to be a fun and exciting for the elderly.

Target: It turns out to be fun and exciting for the elderly.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: Having this festival, the government allows the elderly to enjoy their aging life together with their family members.

Target: In having this festival, the government allows the elderly to enjoy their aging life together with their family members.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Having an aging population meant that there will be lesser people in the workforce and this will have an impact on the country's economy size.

Target: Having an aging population means that there will be lesser people in the workforce, and this will have an impact on the country's economy.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: If public spending is not limited, this meant that the workforce may be further taxed to provide sufficient funds for the aged.

Target: If public spending is not limited, this would mean that the workforce may be further taxed to provide sufficient funds for the aged.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: The money in the Medisave account was formed by a percentage of their income and could be for hospitalization expenses.

Target: The money in the Medisave account was formed by a percentage of their income and could be used for hospitalization expenses.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: The aging process means as time passes, the people will undergo a process of physical, psychological and social change.

Target: The aging process means that as time passes, people will undergo a process of physical, psychological, and social change.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: Thus, the system is put in place for elderly to cross safely on a reasonable amount of time.

Target: Thus, the system is put in place for the elderly to cross safely within a reasonable amount of time.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: With the large demand for mobile phones, phone companies have to compete with each other by inventing fanciful mobile phones with many functions such as Internet, games, music player and more.

Target: With a great demand for mobile phones, phone companies have to compete with each other by inventing fanciful mobile phones with many functions such as the Internet, games, music player, and more.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: Thus, phone companies take this opportunity to penetrate the market with elderly-friendly phones.

Target: Thus, phone companies must take this opportunity to penetrate the market with elderly-friendly phones.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: Being one of the fastest aging populations in the Asia region, Singapore faces many challenges in trying to overcome this aging problem.

Target: Being one of the fastest aging populations in the Asian region, Singapore faces many challenges in trying to overcome this aging problem.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: Although some of the government's policies are initiated with the goal of encouraging the young to look after their aged parents, it did not seem to work out as planned.

Target: Although some of the government's policies are initiated with the goal of encouraging the young to look after their aged parents, it does not seem to work out as planned.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Government should try educating this younger generation on the correct mindset before exploiting the full potential of these implemented policies.

Target: The Government should try educating this younger generation on the correct mindset before exploiting the full potential of these implemented policies.


Source: Fix grammar: One of the main causes of growing aging population is the low fertility rate in Singapore.

Target: One of the main causes of the growing aging population is the low fertility rate in Singapore.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Due to that, Singapore is facing a serious declining fertility rate that resulted in huge difference between the aged and the young.

Target: Due to that, Singapore is facing a seriously declining fertility rate that is resulting in a huge difference between the aged and the young.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: To further tackle the rising trend, government also implemented different housing schemes so as to better allow the families to look after their aged parents rather than putting them in old folks' homes or leaving them to look after themselves.

Target: To further tackle the rising trend, the Government implemented different housing schemes so as to better allow families to look after their aged parents rather than putting them in old folks' homes or leaving them to look after themselves.


Source: Make the sentence fluent: Supporting services and subsidies are provided to families with aged dependents so as to assist them and at the same time, help the aged to remain physically and socially active.

Target: Support services and subsidies are provided to families with aged dependents so as to assist them and, at the same time, help the aged to remain physically and socially active.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: The Parkinson's disease usually develops after the age of 65.

Target: Parkinson's disease usually develops after the age of 65.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: By this, the member will not need to worry about the retirement life later.

Target: Because of this, the member will not need to worry about retirement in later life


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: The dependency of the elderly on the young can be reduced and government's spending on the elderly can also be minimized in long-run.

Target: The dependency of the elderly on the young can be reduced, and the government's spending on the elderly can also be minimized in the long run.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Technological inventions should also be taking into account as they are also essential in easing the aging process.

Target: Technological inventions should also be taken into account as they are also essential in easing the aging process.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Moreover, the inventions of wheelchair controlled by a magnet on the tongue also enable some elderly who are unable to move freely move easily to wherever and whenever they want.

Target: Moreover, the invention of a wheelchair controlled by a magnet on the tongue will also enable some elderly people who are unable to move freely to move easily to wherever and whenever they want.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: In a nutshell, it is undeniable that in this globalization era, research, development and policies have been doing their parts in easing the aging process.

Target: In a nutshell, it is undeniable that in this globalization era, research, development, and policies have been doing their part in easing the aging process.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: With these inventions, people nowadays are leading comfortable lifestyle and aging process are no longer tough for both the elderly and the young ones.

Target: With these inventions, people nowadays are leading comfortable lives, and the aging process is no longer tough for both the elderly and the young.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: The policies that the government introduced and the current research have indeed helped to buffer the aging process.

Target: The policies that the government introduced and current research have indeed helped to buffer the aging process.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: This is because as people grow older, most are bound to suffer from age-related diseases such as Alzheimer's and Parkinson's disease.

Target: This is because as people grow older, many are bound to suffer from age-related diseases such as Alzheimer's and Parkinson's disease.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Thus, the government is investing large amount of money into medical research on age-related diseases and bringing in new medical technology.

Target: Thus, the government is investing large amounts of money into the medical research on age-related diseases and bringing in new medical technology.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: In addition, in the case of Singapore, the people can fully utilise their Medisave funds, which they have saved up from their working lives, to pay for their medical bills.

Target: In addition, in the case of Singapore, people can fully utilize their Medisave funds, which they have saved up from their working lives, to pay for their medical bills.


Source: Fix grammaticality: So, more efforts from the government is needed in this area such that affordable healthcare will be accessible to everyone who needs it.

Target: So, more efforts from the government are needed in this area so that affordable healthcare will be accessible to everyone who needs it.


Source: Fix errors in this text: Aging population is a problem that no country can escape, so what we can do is to reduce this aging process with the help of the research and policies.

Target: The aging population is a problem that no country can escape, so what the government can do is to reduce this aging process with the help of research and policies.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: Furthermore, if it is not properly handled, more issues relating to aging population will arise causing serious consequences to the growth of the country.

Target: Furthermore, if it is not properly handled, more issues relating to the aging population will arise, causing serious consequences to the growth of the country.


Source: Make the sentence fluent: However, at times these services are not fully utilized as it lack of publicity and the location may not be accessible to some of the elderly who do not stay near the health care centres.

Target: However, at times these services are not fully utilized as they lack publicity, and the location may not be accessible to some of the elderly who do not stay near the health care centers.


Source: Fix grammar errors: These services are a great support and assistance to the working age people who are taking care of the elderly while they are busy working.

Target: These services are a great support and assistance to working-age people who are taking care of the elderly while they are busy working.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: But, on the other hand, companies do save up a lot in their training costs as these employees are more experienced, and retaining them will cut down on the recruitment costs.

Target: But, on the other hand, companies do save a lot in their training costs as these employees are more experienced, and retaining them will cut down on recruitment costs.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: By working longer, there is more time to ensure that the valuable experience and knowledge are passed on to the younger members of the workforce.

Target: By working longer, there is more time to ensure that valuable experience and knowledge are passed on to the younger members of the workforce.


Source: Fix grammar errors: In addition, with still a good medical condition and good working performance, these people can be a great asset in contributing to the economy.

Target: In addition, still having good medical conditions and good working performance, these people can be a great asset in contributing to the economy.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: In addition, beautifying with modern design and interior improvements of older housing estates is a strategy to prevent outflow of younger people.

Target: In addition, beautifying older housing estates with modern design and interior improvements is a strategy to prevent the outflow of younger people.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: Therefore, with the continual support from the government is important to promote children to stay with their elderly parents.

Target: Therefore, continual support from the government is important to encourage children to stay with their elderly parents.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: These issues are also faced by other developed countries such as Japan and United States.

Target: These issues are also faced by other developed countries such as Japan and the United States.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: In order to deal with these rising issues, government is currently taking active measures to help ease the aging process.

Target: In order to deal with these rising issues, the government is currently taking active measures to help ease the aging process.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: However, there can only be so much that the government can help in terms of the health care services and policies.

Target: However, there can only be so much that the government can help in terms of health care services and policies.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: After World War II, we saw a rapid increase in the birth rate across the globe and Singapore too, faces the same problem.

Target: After World War II, there was a rapid increase in the birth rate across the globe, and Singapore, too, faces the same problem.


Source: Fix grammar: For instance, civil servants are not entitled for paid maternity leave for the third and subsequent child.

Target: For instance, civil servants are not entitled to paid maternity leave for the third and subsequent child.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: In order to combat the shrinking workforce, caused by the rapid ageing population and a declining fertility rate, the Health authorities must first gear up their medical field and prepare for an aging population.

Target: In order to combat the shrinking workforce caused by the rapidly aging population and a declining fertility rate, the Health authorities must first gear up their medical field and prepare for an aging population.


Source: Fix grammar: However, to develop the medical sector, huge sum of funds has to be involved which may in turn hamper the development of other sectors.

Target: However, to develop the medical sector, huge sums of funds have to be involved, which may, in turn, hamper the development of other sectors.


Source: Grammar improvements: Moreover, the drugs have to be tested so as to ensure the effectiveness of the medicine and are safe for consumption.

Target: Moreover, the drugs have to be tested so as to ensure the effectiveness of the medicine and that they are safe for consumption.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: On the other hand, with the rise in aging population, it is inevitable to invest heavily in the medical sector as poor medical facilities will lead to more health problems within the country.

Target: On the other hand, with the rise in the aging population, it is necessary to invest heavily in the medical sector, as poor medical facilities will lead to more health problems within the country.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: This will then result in an increase in the amount spent on medications, thus adding greater financial burden to the shrinking workforce.

Target: This will then result in an increase in the amount spent on medication, thus adding a greater financial burden to the shrinking workforce.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: With the constant rise in cost of living, families can no longer rely on a sole breadwinner as they need to support both their parents as well as their children in terms of food, shelter and education.

Target: With the constant rise in the cost of living, families can no longer rely on a sole breadwinner as they need to support both their parents as well as their children in terms of food, shelter, and education.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: To ensure that the elderly maintain a healthy lifestyle, the government starts to build elderly fitness corners around the neighborhood.

Target: To ensure that the elderly maintain a healthy lifestyle, the government has started to build elderly fitness corners around the neighborhood.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Occasionally, the neighborhood polyclinics would also provide free medical checkups for the elderly.

Target: Occasionally, neighborhood polyclinics also provide free medical checkups for the elderly.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: Then again, even though it is the health authorities who are responsible in providing a better medical care to the citizens, senior citizens have to also play a part in ensuring their own well being.

Target: Then again, even though it is the health authorities who are responsible for providing better medical care to the citizens, senior citizens also have to play a part in ensuring their own well-being.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: Hence, even though the government and health authorities offer facilities to ease the aging effect, the people must also take the initiative to utilize them and be more proactive in keeping a healthy lifestyle.

Target: Hence, even though the government and health authorities offer facilities to ease the aging effect, people must also take the initiative to utilize them and be more proactive in keeping a healthy lifestyle.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: Thus, if the elderly are able to take advantage of the advanced medical facilities offered to them, it will certainly play a big role in helping the society to ease the aging process.

Target: Thus, if the elderly are able to take advantage of the advanced medical facilities offered to them, it will certainly play a big role in helping society to ease the aging process.


Source: Fix errors in this text: Longer life expectancy and continuous falling population have caused the aging population in Singapore to increase.

Target: Longer life expectancy and a continuous fall in population have caused the aging population in Singapore to increase.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: The second policy development is in economic field.

Target: The second policy development is in the economic field.


Source: Fix grammar errors: The purpose is to provide a compulsory and comprehensive saving plan for Singaporeans.

Target: The purpose is to provide a compulsory and comprehensive savings plan for Singaporeans.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Some of the changes are the increase of CPF minimum sum and the partial withdrawal of the retirement savings upon reaching retirement age.

Target: Some of the changes are the increase in the CPF minimum sum and the partial withdrawal of retirement savings upon reaching retirement age.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: However, critics have pointed out that it is the motivation of individuals, instead of policies, helped to ease the aging process.

Target: However, critics have pointed out that it is the motivation of individuals, instead of policies, that has to ease the aging process.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: They also have not point out that Singapore has taken basic measures to ensure the general well-being of its citizens.

Target: They also have not pointed out that Singapore has taken basic measures to ensure the general well-being of its citizens.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Besides, if more are able to slow down or even prevent themselves from getting the diseases, the aged can lessen their medical cost which will lead to a reduced cost of living.

Target: Besides, if more are able to slow down or even prevent themselves from getting the disease, the aged can lessen their medical costs, which will lead to a reduced cost of living.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: However, it is also not guaranteed that the saving in CPF will be sufficient, especially with the prolong life expectancy of many.

Target: However, it is also not guaranteed that the saving in CPF will be sufficient, especially with the prolonged life expectancy of many.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: In the past, a lump sum will be given to the recipients, but now the recipients will get the money in their CPF account on a monthly basis till they pass on.

Target: In the past, a lump sum was given to the recipients, but now the recipients will get the money in their CPF account on a monthly basis till they pass on.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: The breakthrough in the medical research field, not only provide a cushion for the aged with regards to old age illnesses but also help to reduce their future medical expenditure.

Target: Breakthroughs in the medical research field not only provide a cushion for the aged with regard to old age illnesses but also help to reduce their future medical expenditure.


Source: Fix grammar errors: Aging process as defined by Wikipedia is the process of physical, psychological, and social change.

Target: Aging, as defined by Wikipedia, is the process of physical, psychological, and social change.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: Social change in general points to the change in attitudes towards life.

Target: Social change, in general, points to the change in attitude towards life.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Elderly individuals, who lack access and training needed to familiarize with modern technology like the internet, may find themselves at a disadvantage.

Target: Elderly individuals, who lack access to and training needed to familiarize themselves with modern technology like the internet, may find themselves at a disadvantage.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: In addition, there will also be concentrated efforts towards educating the elderly individuals to use the internet.

Target: In addition, there will also be concentrated efforts toward educating elderly individuals to use the internet.


Source: Make the sentence fluent: For example in Japan, mobile phone manufacturer has come up with mobile phone that has large key pad so that the elderly can use it without straining their eyes.

Target: For example, in Japan, a mobile phone manufacturer has come up with a mobile phone that has a large keypad so that the elderly can use it without straining their eyes.


Source: Fix errors in this text: As a result, elderly individuals can enjoy their retirement without having much financial worries.

Target: As a result, elderly individuals can enjoy their retirement without having many financial worries.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: In addition to that, they are more likely to be plagued with old age diseases like Parkinson or dementia.

Target: In addition to that, they are more likely to be plagued with old age diseases like Parkinson's or dementia.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Therefore, they do not have to worry for medical expenses when they are old.

Target: Therefore, they do not have to worry about medical expenses when they are old.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: Social policies are also implemented to ease the process of aging.

Target: Social policies have also been implemented to ease the process of aging.


Source: Grammar improvements: For example in Singapore, the government has set up a $ 10million Golden Opportunities Fund to create more programmes, activities and learning opportunities for the elderly individuals.

Target: For example, in Singapore, the government has set up a $ 10 million Golden Opportunities Fund to create more programs, activities, and learning opportunities for elderly individuals.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: Therefore, through this policy, they can pursue the lifestyle of their choice, be it sports, learning, or contributing through volunteering in non-profit organizations.

Target: Therefore, through this policy, elderly people can pursue the lifestyle of their choice, be it sports, learning, or contributing through volunteering in non-profit organizations.


Source: Fix errors in this text: In conclusion, advancement in technology, economic policies and social policies implemented by the government has helped to ease the process of aging.

Target: In conclusion, advancements in technology, economic policies, and social policies implemented by the government have helped to ease the process of aging.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: Yes it is undeniable that there have been many policies implemented to ease the aging process.

Target: It is undeniable that there have been many policies implemented to ease the aging process.


Source: Grammar improvements: And children can only abide to the obligations if they are financially stable.

Target: And children can only abide by the obligations if they are financially stable.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: In conclusion, the two policies have shown the ineffectiveness in easing the problems of ageing population.

Target: In conclusion, the two policies have shown their ineffectiveness in easing the problems of the aging population.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: Existing developments by private entities still do not have better accessibility.

Target: Existing developments by private entities still do not have desirable levels of accessibility.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: Despite this effort, private sectors are still not incorporating desirable features in their design to help make the buildings in Singapore to be 100% user friendly to all intended users by only meeting the basic standards of accessibility needed by a building.

Target: Despite this effort, the private sectors are still not incorporating desirable features in their designs to help make the buildings in Singapore to be 100% user-friendly to all intended users because they only meet the basic standards of accessibility needed by a building.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Budget to the health sector is essential in every country as reduced healthcare facilities and equipments will lead to reduced man-hours as people fall sick and they are unable to receive adequate medical attention.

Target: The budget allocated to the health sector is essential in every country as reduced healthcare facilities and equipment will lead to reduced productivity as people fall sick and they are unable to receive adequate medical attention.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: However, I think that this is an oversimplification and is not practical.

Target: However, I think that this is an elderly issue and is not practical.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: Emphasis should also be place on the education sector as it is crucial to the country's development.

Target: Emphasis should also be placed on the education sector as it is crucial to the country's development.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: However, educating the old will spend a considerate amount of money as most of their minds are not as active as the young and they will take a longer time to absorb new knowledge.

Target: However, educating the old will require a considerable amount of money as most of their minds are not as active as the younger ones, and they will take a longer time to absorb new knowledge.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: However, there have to be a limitation on how much we spend on them so that the money can be diverted into areas like health, education and defense which are much more important areas and crucial to the country's development.

Target: However, there has to be a limit as to how much we spend on them so that the money can be diverted into areas like health, education, and defense, which are much more important and crucial to the country's development.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: In addition, it assists us in the development of our virtues and values, and it also cultivates us into mature individuals, who are able of planning for our futures and taking the correct steps.

Target: In addition, it assists us in the development of our virtues and values, and it also cultivates us into mature individuals who are capable of planning for our futures and taking the correct steps.


Source: Fix grammaticality: When the efficiency of the workforce is high, it will benefit the economic growth of the country greatly.

Target: When the efficiency of the workforce is high, it will benefit the economic growth of the country.


Source: Fix errors in this text: Aging process means process of growing old and getting more matured.

Target: An aging process means the process of growing old and getting more mature.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Singaporeans are required to save a certain amount of their salaries into their CPF accounts.

Target: Singaporeans are required to deposit a certain amount of their salaries into their CPF accounts.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: If compared to other countries, Singapore has a much higher rate of contribution.

Target: Compared to other countries, Singapore has a much higher rate of contribution.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: Some people might complain that the CPF is ripping away their money so much that they did not have enough money to spend.

Target: Some people might complain that the CPF is ripping away so much of their money that they do not have enough to spend.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: This is the intention of the government to protect his people.

Target: This is the intention of the government to protect its people.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: The recent bombings in Indonesia hotels and the escape and recapture of Mas Selamat show that Singapore is in danger all the time.

Target: The recent bombings in Indonesian hotels and the escape and recapture of Mas Selamat have shown that Singapore is in danger all the time.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: The government needs to help to solve ageing issues and plan ahead for the country so that the country will not suffer when the crises arrive.

Target: The government needs to help solve aging issues and plan for the country so that the country will not suffer when crises arrive.


Source: Fix errors in this text: If all the problems have to be solved by the government, then the work load to the government will be extremely heavy.

Target: If all the problems have to be solved by the government, then the workload of the government will be extremely heavy.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: And when most of the focus and attention of the government is on the ageing issues, the development of the country might be neglected which in the long run, ruins the country.

Target: And when most of the focus and attention of the government is on the aging issues, the development of the country might be neglected, which in the long run would ruin the country.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: It is understandable that the public and the elderly are worried that if the government does not spend much on the ageing issues, the elderly will be forgotten by the society.

Target: It is understandable that the public and the elderly are worried that if the government does not spend enough on the aging issues, the elderly will be forgotten by society.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: If the government takes all the responsibility, the public will take granted of the problem just like how most of the people take safety of Singapore as an easy thing to achieve.

Target: If the government takes all the responsibilities, the public will take the problem for granted, just like how most people take the safety of Singapore as an easy thing to achieve.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: First and foremost, the elderly remain financially vulnerable in the society and need the public funding for their health care.

Target: First and foremost, the elderly are financially vulnerable in society and need public funding for their health care.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: If a limit was to be uniformly drawn across the public-funded health care, some elderly could consequently be cut off from the treatment that they need.

Target: If a certain limit were to be uniformly drawn across the public-funded health care, some elderly could be cut off from the treatment that they need.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Hence, the public spending on the healthcare of the aged should be practised flexibly and should not be viewed as a hindrance to the development and progress of a nation.

Target: Hence, public spending on healthcare for the aged should be carried out flexibly and should not be viewed as a hindrance to the development and progress of a nation.


Source: Fix grammar: In the modern individualistic culture, a person should be conscious and prepared for his post-retirement.

Target: In modern individualistic culture, a person should be conscious and prepared for his post-retirement.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: He should strive for independency and accumulate a surplus of wealth for his old when he is working.

Target: He should strive for independence and accumulate a surplus of wealth for his old age when he is working.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: Poor elderly who have no children or whose children have deserted them are only going to live on their depleting savings.

Target: The elderly who are poor, and have no children, or whose children have deserted them is only going to live on their depleting savings.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: They would end up living on the streets if no help is given to them.

Target: They would end up living on the streets if no help was given to them.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Hence, help is heavily needed from the government to keep the poor aged to survive.

Target: Hence, help is heavily needed from the government to keep the poor aged alive.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: Everyday provision of living facilities and food is also needed for those very poor as we should not leave them on the streets.

Target: Everyday provision of living facilities and food is also needed for those who are poor, as we should not leave them on the streets.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: While it is very unfortunate to have any of these illnesses, every old people are prone to falling to them as their bodies weaken.

Target: While it is very unfortunate to have any of these illnesses, every old person is prone to falling prey to them as their bodies weaken.


Source: Fix grammaticality: While the wealthy could struggle to keep the illness in fight, the average man and below would not be able keep up with the medical bills if no subsidies on medical treatment from the government are given.

Target: While the wealthy could struggle to fight the illness, the average man and below would not be able to keep up with the medical bills if no subsidies on medical treatment from the government were given.


Source: Fix grammar: It is also against human rights to leave a helpless person to be tortured by illnesses and die.

Target: It is also against human rights to leave a helpless person to be tortured by illnesses and then leave him to die.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: Selfishness undermines unity and cooperation which ultimately leads to failure of a society.

Target: Selfishness undermines unity and cooperation, which ultimately will lead to the failure of a society.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: It is ethically not right and impractical to lift off public spending on the aged to spend on other areas of development.

Target: It is ethically not right and impractical to limit public spending on the aged to spend on other areas of development.


Source: Fix grammar: This seems to be a very popular trend, as a lot of developed countries, such as Spain and the United States of America, tend to increase the public spending on the elderly.

Target: This seems to be a very popular trend, as a lot of developed countries, such as Spain and the United States of America, tend to increase their public spending on the elderly.


Source: Fix errors in this text: Another thing they can do is improve the conditions of the busses.

Target: Another thing they can do is improve the conditions of the buses.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: Another way the government could use the public spending more effectively is to spend more on the Ministry of Community Development, Youth and Sports, which is also known as the MCYS.

Target: Another way the government could use public spending more effectively is to spend more on the Ministry of Community Development, Youth and Sports, which is also known as the MCYS.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: This policy clearly shows why the Government should limit its spending on the elderly, and spread it around to other more useful sectors.

Target: This policy clearly shows why the government should limit its spending on the elderly and spread it around to other more useful sectors.


Source: Fix grammaticality: Many people would use these figures to support their claims that public spending on the aged shouldn't be limited.

Target: Many people would use these figures to support their claims that public spending on the aged should not be limited.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: The money should instead go to the country's health care expenses.

Target: The money should go instead to the country's health care expenses.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Countries like Sweden and the United Kingdom face no problems when it comes to healthcare, as over 80% of Health Care expenses are covered by the public spending of both respective nations.

Target: Countries like Sweden and the United Kingdom face no problems when it comes to healthcare, as over 80% of Health Care expenses are covered by the public funds of both nations.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: To conclude, it would be very wise of the government to limit its spending on the aging, and to divert the money to other areas of the country's development.

Target: To conclude, it would be very wise of the government to limit its spending on the aged and to divert the money to other areas of the country's development.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: By looking into these factors, the country can greatly decrease the impact of the liabilities these elderly has on the country.

Target: By looking into these factors, the country can greatly decrease the impact of the liabilities these elderly have on the country.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: Under this act, the minimum retirement age in Singapore is 62 years, thus allowing them to stay longer in the workforce.

Target: Under this act, the minimum retirement age in Singapore is 62 years old thus allowing the elderly to stay longer in the workforce.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: This is possible through communication with their colleagues, which can help them to stay optimistic.

Target: This is made possible through communication with their colleagues, which can help them to stay optimistic.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: Thirdly, by working longer, they also help to ease the financial stress of their family members.

Target: Thirdly, by working longer, they may also help to ease the financial stress of their family members.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: However, little did they know that medisave account might be exhausted after a week.

Target: However, little did they know that the Medisave account might be exhausted after a week.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: These can be seen from the willingness of people to stay longer in the workforce, and to people enrolling in the services and programmes provided by MCYS.

Target: These can be seen from the willingness of people to stay longer in the workforce and to be enrolled in the services and programs provided by MCYS.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: We will also expect the life expectancy to increase due to better healthcare facilities and technology.

Target: We will also expect the life expectancy of people to increase due to better healthcare facilities and technology.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: Infrastructure is one of the areas that the government can develop on.

Target: Infrastructure is one of the areas that the government can develop.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: However, as constructing is in progress, it often causes high pollution level and is unsightly.

Target: However, as construction is in progress, it often causes high pollution level and is unsightly.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: Another instance could be the upgrading of roads to cater to the increasing amount of vehicles, to reduce road congestion.

Target: Another instance could be the upgrading of roads to cater to the increasing number of vehicles and to reduce road congestion.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: It also facilitates the driving within Singapore by making it smoother and providing alternatives road which were lesser as compared to the past.

Target: It also facilitates driving within Singapore by making it smoother and providing alternative roads, which were lesser as compared to the past.


Source: Fix grammaticality: However at times, people may be reluctant to take up such programme which they perceive as useless.

Target: However, at times, people may be reluctant to take up such programs which they perceive as useless.


Source: Fix grammar errors: In conclusion, although money spent on the elderly can ease the problem of aging population, it is only for a short term and is not a feasible solution.

Target: In conclusion, although money spent on the elderly can ease the problem of an aging population, it is only effective for the short term and is not a feasible solution.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: Therefore, we should take into consideration the effects that we will encounter in the long run.

Target: Therefore, we should take into consideration the problems that we will encounter in the long run.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: As people are having a higher life expectancy today, more spending is expected to provide better healthcare facilities and other services for the aged.

Target: As people are enjoying higher life expectancy today, more spending is expected to provide better healthcare facilities and other services for the aged.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: However, the increased health costs should not be depended solely by the government.

Target: However, the increased health costs should not be borne solely by the government.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: People are more educated and can work longer to better support themselves today.

Target: People are more educated and can work longer to support themselves today.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: Furthermore, to stimulate economic growth, the government needs to work out carefully on the national budget for different sectors in the country.

Target: Furthermore, to stimulate economic growth, the government needs to work out carefully the national budget allocated to different sectors in the country.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: The Government will increase public sector construction spending to between $ 18 billion and $ 20 billion in 2009.

Target: The government will increase public sector construction spending to between $ 18 billion and $ 20 billion in 2009.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: A recent development will be the introduction of circle line to the existing MRT networks.

Target: A recent development will be the introduction of the Circle Line to the existing MRT network.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: For example, the south Korean government plans to increase investment in research and development by more than 10 percent on year in 2010.

Target: For example, the South Korean government planned to increase investment in research and development by more than 10 percent a year in 2010.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: Moreover, since such a trend is only likely to happen in the short run, much has been done to buffer its negative impact on society.

Target: Since such a trend is likely to happen in the short run, much has been done to buffer its negative impact on society.


Source: Fix grammar errors: Demographic changes such as a growing population will have a serious consequence on health issues in developed countries.

Target: Demographic changes such as a growing population will have serious consequences on health issues in developed countries.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: By lowering the barriers and making it easier for the elderly to be employed, more elderly people would have jobs and be able to generate income for the country.

Target: By lowering the barriers and making it easier for the elderly to be employed, more elderly people would have jobs and would be able to generate income for the country.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: However, research has shown that for many diseases like diabetes, kidney failure, heart diseases and so forth, the chances of recovery are much higher if the disease was diagnosed in the early stages.

Target: However, research has shown that for many diseases like diabetes, kidney failure, heart diseases, and so forth, the chances of recovery are much higher if the disease were diagnosed in the early stages.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: In conclusion, I feel that no matter how much research is being done, it will not completely solve the aging population crisis.

Target: In conclusion, I feel that no matter how much research is being done, it will not completely solve the aging problem.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: Hence, the public spending on the aged will increase.

Target: Hence, public spending on the aged will increase.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: For instance, facilities such as Day Care Centres and Old Folks Homes will be in high demand as the ratio of elderly to the younger generation is higher in the near future.

Target: For instance, facilities such as Day Care Centres and Old Folks Homes will be in high demand as the ratio of the elderly to the younger generation becomes higher in the near future.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: In Singapore, the government has strongly upheld the belief that familial support of the elderly is ideal, but if the individual family could not handle their aged, the government would then interfere to help.

Target: In Singapore, the government has strongly upheld the belief that familial support of the elderly is ideal, but if the individual family could not handle their age, the government would have to interfere to help.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: However, solely focusing on the aged population would not be the best approach.

Target: However, focusing solely on the aged population would not be the best approach.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: However, too much help from government can lead to its people being too dependent on the government.

Target: However, too much help from the government can lead to its people being too dependent on the government.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: In conclusion, public spending on the aged should have a limitation.

Target: In conclusion, public spending on the aged should have a limit.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: Take for instance, in the past, due the lack of current research and developments available, most elderly who are diagnosed with illness were unlikely to recover and in most cases, they would have to stay in bad for the rest of their lives.

Target: Take, for instance, in the past; due to the lack of current research and developments available, most elderly who were diagnosed with illnesses were unlikely to recover, and in most cases, they would have to stay in bed for the rest of their lives.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: Furthermore, in the past, elderly especially spinsters and bachelors whom they have no family members to turn to in their old age often faced financial problems after they stopped working.

Target: Furthermore, in the past, elderly spinsters and bachelors, of whom they have no family members to turn to in their old age, often faced financial problems after they had stopped working.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: This may suggest that the current medical technologies have not help to ease the aging process.

Target: This may suggest that the current medical technologies have not helped to ease the aging process.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: For example, the invention of high blood pressure and diabetes monitors helped people especially the elderly to be more aware of and to be more able to monitor their own health conditions.

Target: For example, the invention of high blood pressure and diabetes monitors helped people, especially the elderly, to be more aware of and to be more able to monitor their own health conditions.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: For instance, one such facility development which the elderly would be able to seek help from would be the REACH Elderly Care Centre where the elderly would be able to receive day care, supervision and supportive help.

Target: For instance, one such facility development from which the elderly would be able to seek help would be the REACH Elderly Care Centre, where the elderly would be able to receive daycare, supervision, and supportive help.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: As such, with the different types of facilities and medical developments available, the elderly no longer has to suffer in silence.

Target: As such, with the different types of facilities and medical developments available, the elderly no longer have to suffer in silence.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: With the help of the technologies and policies, the elderly would definitely be able to manage their lives in their old age better.

Target: With the help of the technology and various, the elderly would definitely be able to better manage their lives in old age.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Singapore's transportation system is well-known as one of the best in the world.

Target: Singapore's transportation system is well-known to be one of the best in the world.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: The increase in life expectancy and decline in fertility are two main causes of ageing population.

Target: The increase in life expectancy and decline in fertility are the two main causes of an aging population.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: Hence, the government can intervene by supporting the elderly using public spending to make sure they are self-sufficient.

Target: Hence, the government can intervene by supporting the elderly using public spending to make sure that they are self-sufficient.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: In order to achieve the target, Singapore has recently invested a substantial amount of money into the major development of the two integrated resorts in order to remain competitive among Asian countries and other popular tourist attractions.

Target: In order to achieve the target, Singapore has recently invested a substantial amount of money into the development of the two integrated resorts in order to remain competitive among Asian countries and other popular tourist attractions.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: In addition, money could also be expended on local or overseas training to ensure that the warriors are trained with relevant knowledge to defend the country.

Target: In addition, money could also be expended on local or overseas training to ensure that the military men are trained with relevant knowledge to defend the country.


Source: Fix grammaticality: Hence, providing sustainable solutions to the aging problem have to start by tackling the root cause of the problem, that is looking at the children who is supposed to take care of them.

Target: Hence, sustainable solutions to the aging problem start by tackling the root cause of the problem, that is, looking at the children who are supposed to be taking care of them.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: The root cause starts from children who have no wish to take care of their parents.

Target: The root cause starts with children who have no wish to take care of their parents.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: This approach not only brings awareness to the country, but also educating on the people on what will happen to the elderly when they are neglected.

Target: This approach not only brings awareness to the people but also educates them people on what will happen to the elderly when they are neglected.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: That is also why so many countries are engaging in setting up effective systems to encourage or compel people to save money for later use.

Target: That is also why so many countries are engaged in setting up effective systems to encourage or compel people to save money for later use.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: This policy is implemented smoothly, since both the government and citizens can benefit from it.

Target: This policy has been implemented smoothly since both the government and citizens can benefit from it.


Source: Fix grammar errors: To certain extent, it also can inspire individual enthusiasm for work.

Target: To a certain extent, it can also inspire individual enthusiasm for work.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: Due to the increase in the standard of living, better medical treatment is available and this has caused the life expectancy of the people to increase.

Target: Due to an increase in the standard of living, better medical treatment is available, and this has caused the life expectancy of people to increase.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Therefore, government should devote more capital to ensure that the education system remain relevant in today's dynamic global economy.

Target: Therefore, the government should devote more capital to ensure that the education system remains relevant in today's dynamic global economy.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: Some may say that it is more important that a country have an excellent research and development sector than healthy, happy senior citizens.

Target: Some may say that it is more important for a country to have an excellent research and development sector than for healthy, happy senior citizens.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Research and development will very likely increase the levels of overseas investment as foreign multinational companies will see that country as a good place for business.

Target: Research and development will very likely increase the levels of overseas investment as foreign multinational companies will see the country as a good place for business.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: Thus, public spending on the elderly does provide important benefits to the country and should not be limited thus.

Target: Thus, public spending on the elderly does provide important benefits to the country and should not be limited.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: Lastly, a country that does not take care of its elderly sufficiently runs the risk of having it younger population abandoning it and migrating to other countries.

Target: Lastly, a country that does not take care of its elderly sufficiently runs the risk of having its younger population abandon it and migrate to other countries.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: In this way, younger generation will then work harder for the nations in the future.

Target: In this way, the younger generation will then work harder for the nation in the future.


Source: Fix grammaticality: The people are the asset of Singapore and they have contributed to the country's strong economic position.

Target: The people are the assets of Singapore, and they have contributed to the country's strong economic position.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: The improvement in medical research has lengthened the life expectancy of the society.

Target: The improvement in medical research has lengthened the life expectancy of people.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: Hence, there is a need for the government to intervene by using part of the public funds to care for this aged population and ease the burden on the working population.

Target: Hence, there is a need for the government to intervene by using part of the public funds to care for the aged population and ease the burden on the working population.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: Although these areas of development are necessary for the continual development of Singapore, we should not neglect the importance of public spending for the aged.

Target: Although these areas of development are necessary for the development of Singapore, we should not neglect the importance of public spending for the aged.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: By providing more for the elderly and improvising health care polices, the government can actually improve the living conditions of the aged which will reduce possible social issues.

Target: By providing more for the elderly and improvising, health care policies, the government can actually improve the living conditions of the aged, which will, in turn, reduce possible social issues.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: Furthermore, if the government can maintain social stability in its country, government may then focus on other aspects such as defence.

Target: Furthermore, if the government can maintain social stability in its country, it may then focus on other aspects, such as defense.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: When more work is available, more people will be able earn and save more which means that the standard of living for the working people will improve and they will be able to support the elderly as they are more affluence.

Target: When more work is available, more people will be able to earn and save more, and this means that the standard of living for working people will improve, and they will be able to support the elderly as they are more affluent.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: This helps to encourage working people to work and play better giving them a better standard of living.

Target: This helps to encourage working people to work and play better and gives them a better standard of living.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: When one grows old, his body will be going through adjustments and soon, he will not be as fast or agile as he was before.

Target: When one grows old, his body will go through many, and soon; he will not be as fast or agile as he was before.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: Other than relying on the police and military forces, the government has to educate the public on the dangers of terrorism and the importance in preventive them.

Target: Other than relying on the police and the military forces, the government has to educate the public on the dangers of terrorism and the importance of preventing them.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: As such, I agree that public spending on the aged should be limited so that funds can be diverted to other areas like Ministry of Finance, Education, Health and National Development.

Target: Therefore, I agree that public spending on the aged should be limited so that funds can be diverted to other areas like the Ministry of Finance, Education, Health, and National Development.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Funds from the government are also needed to aid the voluntary welfare organizations.

Target: Funds from the government are also needed to aid voluntary welfare organizations.


Source: Fix errors in this text: However, if public spending on the aged is not limited, more financial aid could be given to them, and in turn lessen the burden of the younger generation to provide for the elderly.

Target: However, if public spending on the aged is not limited, more financial aid could be given to them, and this, in turn, will lessen the burden of the younger generation to provide for the elderly.


Source: Fix grammar: Each factor has its own way of contributing to the society as a whole and the elderly will benefit directly or indirectly from the development as well.

Target: Each factor has its own way of contributing to society as a whole, and the elderly will benefit directly or indirectly from the developments as well.


Source: Grammar improvements: Due to globalization, training of workers is important to develop and maintain a highly skilled workforce.

Target: Due to globalization, the training of workers is important to develop and maintain a highly skilled workforce.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: Firstly, some older workers have weak command of English or are English illiterate as they are school dropouts.

Target: Firstly, some older workers have weak command of English or are English illiterates as they are school dropouts.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: This has discourages them from attending the training course as it is conducted in English.

Target: This has discouraged them from attending the training course as it is conducted in English.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: Secondly government expenditure is needed to expand and maintain economic structure.

Target: Secondly, government expenditure is needed to expand and maintain the economic structure.


Source: Fix errors in this text: As a result, the country is able to maintain their economic competitive edge, as well as create more jobs for the people and enjoy higher standard of living.

Target: As a result, the country is able to maintain its competitive economic edge, as well as to create more jobs for the people and enjoy a higher standard of living.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: Investing in education is like investing in the future so the future generations are able to meet future challenges.

Target: Investing in education is like investing in the future so that future generations are able to meet future challenges.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: This is to ensure that school fees are affordable and allowing every citizen to receive a proper education.

Target: This is to ensure that school fees are affordable and every citizen is allowed to receive a proper education.


Source: Make the sentence fluent: The process of gaining knowledge is of paramount importance in developing countries as it would reduce the level of poverty and increase their ability to find quality jobs.

Target: The process of gaining knowledge is of paramount importance in developing countries as it would reduce the level of poverty and increase the ability of their people to find quality jobs.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Thus, it is crucial for countries to invest in the form of education that is desirable for its people to ensure greater economic development.

Target: Thus, it is crucial for countries to invest in the form of education that is desirable for their people to ensure greater economic development.


Source: Fix errors in this text: Through the process of upgrading, individuals are empowered with the relevant skills and knowledge demanded by the job market.

Target: Through the processes of upgrading, individuals are empowered with the relevant skills and knowledge demanded by the job market.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Nonetheless, it could be refuted that this might promote job hoping.

Target: Nonetheless, it could be refuted that this might promote job hopping.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Expenditure should not be spent solely on the elderly as it would hinder the growth of other areas like education, trainings and national security.

Target: Funds should not be spent solely on the elderly as it would hinder the growth of other areas like education, training, and national security.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: As the proportion of elder persons in the world continues to increase, there is a need for the government to intervene as there will be many elderly who cannot support themselves.

Target: As the proportion of elderly persons in the world continues to increase, there is a need for the government to intervene as there will be many elderly who cannot support themselves.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Though there may be uncertainties that positive results will be yielded, it is still important to limit public spending on the aged so that some money can still be diverted to other important areas.

Target: Though there may be uncertainties about the results, it is still important to limit public spending on the aged so that some money can still be diverted to other important areas.


Source: Fix grammaticality: An elderly-friendly built environment is a key principle to which an elderly can adjust and integrate themselves into the community.

Target: An elderly-friendly built environment is a key principle to which the elderly can adjust and integrate themselves into the community.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: Hence, with these schemes, it is proven that elderly in Singapore are given top priority in the community.

Target: Hence, with these schemes, it is proven that the elderly in Singapore are given top priority in the community.