Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: However, the fate of dedicated researched innovations and serendipitous innovations can differ greatly.

Target: However, the fate of dedicated research innovations and serendipitous innovations can differ greatly.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: Innovations however profitable should not be dismissed but sell to a higher platform where it could spark other ideas or satisfy needs that are not foreseen by the parent organization.

Target: Innovations, however profitable, should not be dismissed but sold to a higher platform where they could spark other ideas or satisfy needs that are not foreseen by the parent organization.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: Given the fact that most households in Singapore share a common block, if the solar panels are fixed on the top of the buildings, will there be enough to provide sufficient electricity for the whole block, which may consists of up to eighty household users.

Target: Given the fact that most households in Singapore share a common block, if the solar panels are fixed on the top of the buildings, will there be enough to provide sufficient electricity for the whole block, which may consist of up to eighty household users?


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: This current situation may seems favorable theoretically for innovations such as the electric car industries to flourish.

Target: This current situation may seem favorable theoretically for innovations such as the electric car industries to flourish.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: Besides giving financial aid to R&D departments which helps to initiate the start of the project on electric cars, subsides and incentive may also be given to citizens who use electric cars which would increase the demand for more electric cars.

Target: Besides giving financial aid to R&D departments which helps to initiate the start of the project on electric cars, subsidies and incentives may also be given to citizens who use electric cars, which would increase the demand for more electric cars.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: This is one of the reasons why marketing strategies such as the use of promotions and advertisements is extremely important in rising the awareness and creating a need for new technologies, thus allowing a new technology to survive.

Target: This is one of the reasons why marketing strategies such as the use of promotions and advertisements are extremely important in raising awareness and creating a need for new technologies, thus allowing new technology to survive.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: In the initial stage, the process allows engineer to identify the needs and subsequently, define the problems involved.

Target: In the initial stage, the process allows an engineer to identify the needs and, subsequently, define the problems involved.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: However, there are limitations in the design process in meeting the need of safety.

Target: However, there are limitations in the design process in meeting the needs of safety.


Source: Fix errors in this text: Most of the time, an individual cannot think of all of the safety aspect of a design over few years.

Target: Most of the time, an individual cannot think of all of the safety aspects of a design over a few years.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Secondly, generating good solutions to safety issues require creativity and, often, risking safety in the first place to better understand it.

Target: Secondly, generating good solutions for safety issues requires creativity and, often, risking safety in the first place to better understand it.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Lastly, determining which safety solution is feasible comes with experiences instead of being able to learn it of a book.

Target: Lastly, determining which safety solution is feasible comes with experience instead of being able to learn it from a book.


Source: Fix errors in this text: It met the many challenges once faced by people and safety is one of the challenges faced.

Target: It met many challenges once faced by people, and safety was one of the challenges faced.


Source: Fix grammar: The final step is to test whether the solution is executable.

Target: The final step is to test whether the solution can be executed.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: This test is still under the experimentation, because of the rigorous reaction condition.

Target: This test is still under experimentation because of the rigorous reaction condition.


Source: Fix errors in this text: It has also brought about much convenience and is now consider an asset to most people.

Target: It has also brought about much convenience and is now considered an asset to most people.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: It was because at that time, the technology was not yet advance enough for manufacturers to come up with cool and sleek designs like the mobile phones nowadays.

Target: It was because, at that time, the technology was not advanced enough for manufacturers to come up with cool and sleek designs like the mobile phones nowadays.


Source: Fix grammar: Manufacturers of mobile phones have found out the disadvantages and hassles of the mobile phones in the past.

Target: Manufacturers of mobile phones found out the disadvantages and hassles of mobile phones in the past.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: Hence, phone manufacturers decided to take a risk by adding a few new features into the mobile phone to see whether is it acceptable in the market.

Target: Hence, phone manufacturers decided to take a risk by adding a few new features to the mobile phone to see whether it is acceptable in the market.


Source: Grammar improvements: Economic factors also played an important role in this technological innovation.

Target: Economic factors also play an important role in this technological innovation.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: Hence, as the cost is now lower, manufacturers are then more willing to produce and come up with more features to be added to the mobile phone to attract consumers to purchase it.

Target: Hence, as the cost is now lower, manufacturers are more willing to produce and come up with more features to be added to the mobile phone to attract consumers to purchase it.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: This thus lead to the vast production of 3 G phones, bringing technology to the next level.

Target: This thus leads to the vast production of 3 G phones, bringing technology to the next level.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: In conclusion, the transformation of mobile phones from a black-grey screen to one that is so highly sophiscated is indeed something remarkable.

Target: In conclusion, the transformation of mobile phones from a black-grey screen to one that is so highly sophisticated is indeed remarkable.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: Technological advancement of a country also affects the development of the electric vehicle.

Target: The technological advancement of a country also affects the development of electric vehicle.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: It is only natural that nobody would want an electric car that needs recharging for every few miles it travel.

Target: It is only natural that nobody would want an electric car that needs recharging for every few miles it travels.


Source: Grammar improvements: Therefore the society also plays an important role on technological innovation.

Target: Therefore the, society also plays an important role in technological innovation.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: As a big country with huge amount of population, implementing a new aspect will not be done easily.

Target: As a big country with a huge amount of population, implementing a new aspect will not be done easily.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: Since they only have one way to solve an obstacle, they will be fear of problems.

Target: Since they only have one way to solve an obstacle, they will be fearful of problems.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: The second problem is limited amount of qualified human resources and fund.

Target: The second problem is the limited amount of qualified human resources and funds.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: Consequently, these problems also impact the stages of engineering design, such as generate solutions, product safety and liability, technical, and economic analysis.

Target: Consequently, these problems also impact the stages of engineering design, such as generating solutions, product safety, and liability, and technical and economic analysis.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Following the solution generation step, analyzing and selecting a design ensures that the ultimate solution suits best for implementation.

Target: Following the solution generation step, analyzing and selecting a design ensures that the ultimate solution best suited for implementation.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: Political, social, economic changes during this period would affect the process of innovation.

Target: Political, social, and economic changes during this period would affect the process of innovation.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: Furthermore, in 1994, as the cold war had ended, the US government then decided to fully open the GPS for public use.

Target: Furthermore, in 1994, since the cold war had ended, the US government decided to fully open the GPS for public use.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: The turning point for GPS for civilian use happened at 1983, when a civilian Korean aircraft was shot down by the Soviet Union for territory trespassing.

Target: The turning point for GPS for civilian use happened in 1983 when a Korean civilian aircraft was shot down by the Soviet Union for territory trespassing.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: Soon after this, when the surveying market boomed in 1980s, the demand for GPS and the money generated also contributes to the development of GPS for civilian use.

Target: Soon after this, when the surveying market boomed in The 1980'ss, the demand for GPS and the money generated from it also contributed to the development of GPS for civilian use.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: The development of advanced technology mainly was carried out by government agencies.

Target: The development of advanced technology was mainly carried out by government agencies.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: In conclusion, political, economic, and social situation normally determine an innovation as shown in GPS.

Target: In conclusion, political, economic, and social situations normally determine an innovation, as shown in GPS.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: Plagiarism makes university students or even graduated researchers lazy to come up with their own ideas.

Target: Plagiarism makes university students or even graduate researchers lazy to come up with their own ideas.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: After they search out the information for their academic use, they simply follow the original train of thought and give up thinking about a different solution on their own.

Target: After obtaining the information for their academic use, they simply follow the original train of thought and give up thinking about a different solution on their own.


Source: Fix grammar errors: For example, an engineering student who is doing a designing project do not have to analyze or select solutions, which is the fourth step in the engineering design process, if he wants to plagiarize from other articles.

Target: For example, an engineering student who is doing a design project does not have to analyze or select solutions, which is the fourth step in the engineering design process, if he chooses to plagiarize from other articles.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: Therefore, it cuts away all the experience of encountering problems during the solution analyzing and selecting and all the innovative skills he can gain from the process.

Target: Therefore, it removes all the experience of encountering problems during the solution analyzing and selecting phase and all the innovative skills he can gain from the process.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: If the university cannot afford engineering students to do further testing or create an entire product, all the efforts that have been made in the previous steps become zero.

Target: If the university cannot afford engineering students to do further testing or create an entire product, all the efforts that have been made in the previous steps come to naught.


Source: Fix grammaticality: Its effects can be felt at almost every corner of the world and in our daily lives.

Target: Its effects can be felt in almost every corner of the world and in our daily lives.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: Technological innovations can range from household appliances to industrial equipment.

Target: Technological innovations can range from household appliances to industrial equipment,


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: Smallpox vaccine was first tested by Jenner in 1796.

Target: The smallpox vaccine was first tested by Jenner in 1796.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: One similarity of smallpox vaccine and penicillin is that they are life-saving discoveries in medicine.

Target: One similarity between The smallpox vaccine and penicillin is that they are life-saving discoveries in medicine.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: In the eighteen century before Jenner discovered smallpox vaccine, smallpox was a widespread killer disease.

Target: In the eighteen century, before Jenner discovered The smallpox vaccine, smallpox was a widespread killer disease.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: After penicillin was discovered, the death rate of infection was largely decreased.

Target: After penicillin was discovered, the death rate by infection largely decreased.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Smallpox vaccine is the first vaccine that people used to improve immunity to a certain disease.

Target: The smallpox vaccine was the first vaccine that people used to improve immunity to a certain disease.


Source: Fix grammar errors: Similarly, penicillin is the first antibiotic people used to cure infections.

Target: Similarly, penicillin was the first antibiotic people used to cure infections.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Although smallpox vaccine and penicillin have those similarities, the procedure and development of these two discoveries are different.

Target: Although the smallpox vaccine and penicillin have similarities, the procedure and development of these two discoveries are different.


Source: Fix grammar errors: After testing his theory, he successfully discovered smallpox vaccine.

Target: After testing his theory, he successfully discovered the smallpox vaccine.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Refrigerators with better mechanism as well as working capacity are demanded by the market.

Target: Refrigerators with a better mechanism as well as working capacity are demanded by the market.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: What the customers are willing to buy gave rise to the preference of companies.

Target: What the customers were willing to buy gave rise to the preference of companies.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: And the driving force beyond this is the purpose of saving energy and protecting limited resources on our planet.

Target: And the driving force behind this is the purpose of saving energy and protecting limited resources on our planet.


Source: Make the sentence fluent: Next step will be gathering information.

Target: The next step will be gathering information.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: After collecting useful information, multiple solutions can be generated and this is the third phase for design process.

Target: After collecting useful information, multiple solutions can be generated, and this is the third phase of the design process.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: The final step is implementation including testing, building and producing the solution based on design problem.

Target: The final step is implementation, including testing, building, and producing the solution based on the design problem.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: Hence the sales of the laptops increased substantially and the companies make profits.

Target: Hence the sales of the laptops increased substantially, and the companies made profits.


Source: Grammar improvements: The demands by not just the SAF but also other big militaries around the world also shaped at how the laptop was able to adapt to be just in the extreme conditions.

Target: The demands by not just the SAF but also other big militaries around the world also shaped how the laptop was able to adapt to be just as reliable in extreme conditions.


Source: Grammar improvements: Moreover, the technology that resulted from developing the toughbooks can be applied and used to some extend in the commercial world.

Target: Moreover, the technology that resulted from developing the Toughbook can be applied and used to some extent in the commercial world.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: The laptop is indeed an important technology that is shaped by economic and military factors, and consumer demands.

Target: The laptop is indeed an important technology that is shaped by economic, military factors, and consumer demands.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: Electric cars have a very obvious shortage in their technique design.

Target: Electric cars have a very obvious shortage in their technical design.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Instead, Hydrogen fuel cell was brought up to substitute the electric battery.

Target: Instead, a Hydrogen fuel cell was brought in to substitute the electric battery.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: And since the electric cars did not have engines and some other complements, the car companies could no longer benefit from the maintenances of those cars.

Target: And since the electric cars did not have engines and some other components, the car companies could no longer benefit from the maintenance of those cars.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: As for the oil companies, apparently, they could not make money from oil, if all the engine cars were substituted by electric cars.

Target: As for the oil companies, apparently, they could not make money from oil if all the engine-driven cars were substituted by electric cars.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Furthermore, other social factors contribute to the non-adoption of electric cars.

Target: Furthermore, other social factors contributed to the non-adoption of electric cars.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: During the Cold War period, the world politics was divided between democracy and communism.

Target: During the Cold War period, world politics was divided between democracy and communism.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: The packets were then be forwarded from one computer to another computer until the information arrived at its final destination computer.

Target: The packets would then be forwarded from one computer to another computer until the information arrived at its final destination computer.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: This was important part of a computer network.

Target: This was an important part of a computer network.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: As a result of decentralization, packet switching, unlike the telephone system, will not break down when one part of the network systems is faulty since the packets can be rerouted until it arrived at its intended destination.

Target: As a result of decentralization, packet switching, unlike the telephone system, will not break down when one part of the network system is faulty since the packets can be rerouted until it arrives at their intended destination.


Source: Fix errors in this text: Although there were over 230 ARPANET sites in 1982, Usenet take less than two years to reach that number.

Target: Although there were over 230 ARPANET sites in 1982, Usenet took less than two years to reach that number.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: This resulted in hundreds of discussion groups, each discussing different subjects, which range from politics to daily life experience.

Target: This resulted in hundreds of discussion groups, each discussing different subjects, which range from politics to daily life experiences.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: In conclusion, it was the historical background during the era of Cold War that prompted the US government to consider new ways of creating indestructible communication to enable the political and military leaders to communicate with each other during a nuclear attack.

Target: In conclusion, it was the historical background during the era of the Cold War that prompted the US government to consider new ways of creating indestructible communication to enable the political and military leaders to communicate with each other during a nuclear attack.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: Through the works of brilliant researchers, the Internet, which has limited to a few users at first, was improvised to accommodate increase electronic traffic and finally commercialize to be available to each and individual of us.

Target: Through the works of brilliant researchers, the Internet, which was limited to a few users at first, was improvised to accommodate increase electronic traffic and finally commercialized to be available to each and every individual.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Such cases are typical examples of how a technological invention is shaped by economic factor, in which the technology made available to the consumer was directed by corporations' profits earned instead of offering the one that benefits consumer most.

Target: Such cases are typical examples of how a technological invention is shaped by economic factors, in which the technology made available to the consumer was directed by earned profits of corporations instead of offering the one that benefits the consumer most.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: Therefore, it can be concluded that functionality may not be only determining factor to the success of technology since it may not be the priority of consumer's concern, but rather how the technology is commercialized and diffused to the public or society.

Target: Therefore, it can be concluded that functionality may not be the only determining factor to the success of technology since it may not be the priority of the consumer's concern, but rather how the technology is commercialized and diffused to the public or society.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: Due to the flourishing of construction industries over the years, the construction industries worldwide consume resources equivalent to more than what the nature are able to produce on Earth.

Target: Due to the flourishing of construction industries over the years, construction industries worldwide consume resources equivalent to more than what nature is able to produce on Earth.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: However, few considerations should be taken into account during the design process.

Target: However, considerations should be taken into account during the design process.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: Moreover, recycling which need reprocessing may not be economically feasible because it requires a facility using recycled resources to be located near the source.

Target: Moreover, recycling, which needs reprocessing, may not be economically feasible because it requires a facility using recycled resources to be located near the source.


Source: Fix grammar errors: For a technology that is deliberately invented, it generally requires much a longer time frame as compared to those fortuitous discoveries.

Target: For a technology that is deliberately invented, it generally requires a much longer time frame as compared to fortuitous discoveries.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Much research has to be prepared so that the best solution could be found.

Target: Much research has to be prepared so that the best solution can be found.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: In the case of the tomato harvesting machine, there are plenty of factors that need to be consider.

Target: In the case of the tomato harvesting machine, there are plenty of factors that need to be considered.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: However in the case of the serendipitous discoveries, identifying a problem or need as well as selecting the best solution are eliminated.

Target: However, in the case of serendipitous discoveries, identifying a problem or need as well as selecting the best solutions are eliminated.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: In the case of a deliberate technology, inventors must not restrict themselves to only one solution but exposed themselves to the various possible solutions.

Target: In the case of deliberate technology, inventors must not restrict themselves to only one solution but expose themselves to various possible solutions.


Source: Fix errors in this text: If luck is presence with coincidence, the best solution will be generated in a shorter time.

Target: If luck is present with coincidence, the best solution will be generated in a shorter time.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: Since fortuitous discovery often occurs while research was carried out in a totally unrelated field, they must be able to identify the technology that came by accidentally.

Target: Since fortuitous discovery often occurs while research is carried out in a totally unrelated field, scientists must be able to identify the technology that was come by accidentally.


Source: Fix grammar errors: However, the products in market are not updating as fast as the innovation introduced to the public.

Target: However, the products in the market are not updating as fast as the innovation introduced to the public.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Because of these overwhelming advantages, people expected that gas refrigerator would dominate the consumer market.

Target: Because of these overwhelming advantages, people expected that gas refrigerators would dominate the consumer market.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: To sum up, in the generation of innovation, the development of technology is not just technologically decisive, but more socially decisive.

Target: To sum up, in the generation of innovation, the development of technology is not just technologically decisive but also more socially decisive.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: This process and system assist in the growing of crops in dry area especially during periods of inadequate rainfall.

Target: This process and system assist in the growing of crops in dry areas, especially during periods of inadequate rainfall.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: Engineers in recent years have been working creatively and innovatively to properly treat and managed water.

Target: Engineers in recent years have been working creatively and innovatively to properly treat and manage water.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: In certain countries, dried-out lands are even brought alive through water irrigation, where water are stored up somewhere and constantly transported through pipes to these lands.

Target: In certain countries, dried-out lands are even brought alive through water irrigation, where water is stored up somewhere and constantly transported through pipes to these lands.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Nevertheless, both of the inventions require time and effort to create miracles in the world.

Target: Nevertheless, both of the inventions required time and effort to create miracles in the world.


Source: Grammar improvements: In singapore, the local society and education system produces problems that hinder the usage of the engineering design process.

Target: In Singaporengapore, the local society and education system produces problems that hinder the usage of the engineering design process.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Whether students learned or not depends on the outcome of major examinations such as GCE 'O' and 'A' levels.

Target: Whether students learn or not depends on the outcome of major examinations such as GCE 'O' and 'A' levels.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: These skills are critical to the two stages of the design process, but is lacking in locals due to the effect of the education system.

Target: These skills are critical to the two stages of the design process but are lacking in locals due to the effect of the education system.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Moreover, majority of the locals are apathetic to their surroundings.

Target: Moreover, the majority of the locals are apathetic to their surroundings.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: To be able to define a problem, the innovator must be observant enough to see the problem, and bothers to do something to improve it, hence creating an innovation.

Target: To be able to define a problem, the innovator must be observant enough to see the problem and be bothered to do something to improve it, hence creating an innovation.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: Therefore, it can be seen that the government's involvement in promoting environmentally-friendly vehicles affected how marketable electric vehicles are.

Target: Therefore, it can be seen that the government's involvement in promoting environmentally-friendly vehicles has affected how marketable electric vehicles are.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: In short, there are several factors that could have shaped the electric vehicles.

Target: In short, there are several factors that could have shaped electric vehicles.


Source: Grammar improvements: However, there is a close relationship between the social factors and the technical challenges that the electric vehicles face.

Target: However, there is a close relationship between social factors and the technical challenges that electric vehicles face.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Hence, the recognition of electric vehicles by society could be affected by both social factors and challenges faced in the present technology of the electric vehicle.

Target: Hence, the recognition of electric vehicles by society could be affected by both social factors and challenges faced by the present technology of electric vehicle.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: In Singapore, and other countries next to the equator, air conditioners and electric fans have greatly contributed to people's life and people are able to enjoy cool and refreshing in burning hot days.

Target: In Singapore, and other countries next to the equator, air conditioners and electric fans have greatly contributed to people's lives, and people are able to enjoy cool and refreshing air on burning hot days.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: The advent of electric fan was a great success and it was implemented around the world.

Target: The advent of the electric fan was a great success, and it was implemented around the world.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: It cannot really cool the temperature and do not control humidity.

Target: It cannot really cool the temperature and does not control humidity.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: The air conditioner was so effective that despite its relatively high price, it was integrated to people's life and installed everywhere.

Target: The air conditioner was so effective that despite its relatively high price, it was integrated into people's lives and installed everywhere.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: The design was initiated by people's needs, and they ultimately met people's needs.

Target: The design was initiated by people's needs, and it ultimately met people's needs.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: More developed and enhanced functions will be added and improve people's life better and better.

Target: More developed and enhanced functions will be added to improve people's lives better and better.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: Without it, our society could not have progressed, nor would our life become convenient.

Target: Without it, our society could not have progressed, nor would our lives become convenient.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: So during the process, they encounter different obstacles, such as political issues, financial issues.

Target: So during the process, they encounter different obstacles, such as political issues and financial issues.


Source: Fix grammar: Moreover, more efforts are need if they want to commercialize the product from their research.

Target: Moreover, more efforts are needed if they want to commercialize the product from their research.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: The mismatch between still low levels of technological development on the one hand, and enormous velocity of the catch-up process on the other makes company unwilling to innovate on their own.

Target: The mismatch between low levels of technological development on the one hand and the enormous velocity of the catch-up process on the other makes companies unwilling to innovate on their own.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: Entrepreneurs' main aim is to bring higher profits in a shorter time to their company.

Target: The main aim of entrepreneurs is to bring higher profits in a shorter time to their company.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: Hopefully, these problems can be eliminated in future and situation can become better and better.

Target: Hopefully, these problems can be eliminated in the future, and the situation can become better and better.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: The release of information is usually done by companies which wanted to flaunt their superiority over other similar companies competing in the same market.

Target: The release of information is usually done by companies that want to flaunt their superiority over other similar companies competing in the same market.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: Second, products that emerge from both technologies can be used for a long time.

Target: Secondly, products that emerge from both technologies can be used for a long time.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: Using the previous examples, the P-80 jet was used for close to 30 years before being replaced completely, while the HIV vaccine may be in use forever if the vaccine undergoes successful researches.

Target: Using the previous examples, the P-80 jet was used for close to 30 years before being replaced completely, while the HIV vaccine may be in use forever if the vaccine undergoes successful research.


Source: Fix grammar errors: The main steps to consider in a good and proper housing system are the affordability, durability and safe living conditions.

Target: The main steps to consider in a good and proper housing system are affordability, durability, and safe living conditions.


Source: Fix grammaticality: Hence the main solution to the problem of improper housing would be the reduction of housing cost without compromising on quality.

Target: Hence the main solution to the problem of improper housing would be the reduction of housing costs without compromising on quality.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: On being unable to obtain a proper home, squatters are the next and only alternative that the homeless can approach to.

Target: On being unable to obtain a proper home, shanty houses are the next and only alternative that the homeless can approach.


Source: Make the sentence fluent: In meeting this need, engineering design processes takes an important role.

Target: In meeting this need, engineering design processes play an important role.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: As we know, the storage and transport of hydrogen have been two major factors that restrict the wide use of hydrogen.

Target: As we know, the storage and transportation of hydrogen have been two major factors that restrict the wide use of hydrogen.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: Engineers need to find right materials and design a suitable container for hydrogen so that it can be safely transported and stored.

Target: Engineers need to find the right materials and design a suitable container for hydrogen so that it can be safely transported and stored.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: In addition, deep processing of fossil fuels also needs engineering design to improve utilization of fossil fuels.

Target: In addition, deep processing of fossil fuels also needs engineering design to improve the utilization of fossil fuels.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: For example, during the process of exploiting oil, the byproducts like natural gas are often burned since it is hard to collect and stored.

Target: For example, during the process of exploiting oil, the byproducts like natural gas are often burned since it is hard to collect and store.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Engineers are trying to find a superconducting material that can work in room temperature to take place of traditional conducting material.

Target: Engineers are trying to find a superconducting material that can work at room temperature to take the place of traditional conducting materials.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Furthermore, the energy- saving appliances designed by engineers have saved inestimable energy for the world.

Target: Furthermore, energy-saving appliances designed by engineers have saved inestimable energy for the world.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: The survival of humanity in this century is heavily dependent on the role of Engineers and we should be prepared for potential threats and challenges.

Target: The survival of humanity in this century is heavily dependent on the role of Engineers, and they should be prepared for potential threats and challenges.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: Although a complete ban on RFID is impossible, its usage on individual tracking should be banned as it intrudes our privacy and compromises our security.

Target: Although a complete ban on RFID is impossible, its usage on individual tracking should be banned as it intrudes upon our privacy and compromises our security.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Similarly, since the disease might not manifest itself even if one is tested positive, no one should have the right to reveal the results as it is difficult to verify the exactitude of the result.

Target: Similarly, since the disease might not manifest itself even if one is tested positive, no one should have the right to reveal the results as it is difficult to verify the exactitude of the results.


Source: Fix grammaticality: In conclusion, the results of genetic testing do have big impacts of people's life in terms of emotional impacts and genetic discrimination.

Target: In conclusion, the results of genetic testing do have big impacts on people's lives in terms of emotional impacts and genetic discrimination.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Therefore, the individual requesting genetic testing should have the final say in whether to reveal the results, and this is also in agreement of protecting human rights.

Target: Therefore, the individual requesting genetic testing should have the final say in whether to reveal the results, and this is also in agreement with protecting human rights.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: Furthermore, it is also unfair to the insurance companies if the individual with genetic disease decided to buy life insurance policies without revealing that they have such genetic disorder.

Target: Furthermore, it is also unfair to the insurance companies if the individual with a genetic disease decides to buy life insurance policies without revealing that they have a such a genetic disorder.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: It allows for more effective tracing of an individual through an instant identification approach.

Target: This technology allows for more effective tracing of an individual through an instant identification approach.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: The RFID wrist tags also codes for information regarding the patient.

Target: The RFID wrist tags also code for information regarding the patient.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: Important data such as the appropriate medication, meal requirements can be easily retrieved, thereby facilitating the job of the nurses.

Target: Important data such as the appropriate medication and meal requirements can be easily retrieved, thereby facilitating the job of the nurses.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: RFID may revolutionize our society in future but at the very moment, it is still in its infant stage where its benefits have yet to warrant a widespread implementation while its disadvantages are surmountable.

Target: RFID may revolutionize our society in the future, but at the very moment, it is still in its infant stage where its benefits have yet to warrant a widespread implementation while its disadvantages are insurmountable.


Source: Fix grammar: First of all, RFID has played an important role in preventing criminal.

Target: First of all, RFID has played an important role in preventing crimes.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: From security view, RFID can provide more precise and complete information on suspects or criminals, which results in the reduction in time and manpower for an investigation.

Target: From a security point of view, RFID can provide more precise and complete information on suspects or criminals, which results in a reduction in time and manpower for an investigation.


Source: Fix grammar: Another key application from RFID is that RFID helps to improve the healthcare sector.

Target: Another key application of RFID is that RFID helps to improve the healthcare sector.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: For instance, it is more safe now for patients who have mental lost or mental diseases if they are lost, because they are being tracked all the time in the hospital under the surveillance system like RFID.

Target: For instance, it is safer now for patients who have mental diseases if they are lost because they are being tracked all the time in the hospital under a surveillance system like RFID.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: And the fact is that most of people will choose safety and security between security and privacy.

Target: And the fact is that most people will choose safety and security between security and privacy.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: To conclude, it is indisputable that the advantages of surveillance technology outweigh the negative effect.

Target: To conclude, it is indisputable that the advantages of surveillance technology outweigh the negative effects.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: However, as argued before, everybody genes may be linked to their relatives' genes, so it is possible for the relatives particularly their sibling to inherit the same defective gene.

Target: However, as argued before, everybody's genes may be linked to their relatives' genes, so it is possible for the relatives, particularly their siblings, to inherit the same defective gene.


Source: Fix errors in this text: To conclude, individual requesting for genetic testing should not have the final say as it is unfair to the medical insurance company and the person's relative who may be at also at risk of inheriting the same genetic defects.

Target: To conclude, the individual requesting genetic testing should not have the final say as it is unfair to the medical insurance company and the person's relatives, who may also be at risk of inheriting the same genetic defects.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Since the attack on the London Underground on July 2005, surveillance technology has generated a lot of attention after they were used to track the movements of the terrorists responsible for the attack.

Target: Since the attack on the London Underground on July 2005, surveillance technology has generated a lot of attention after it was used to track the movements of the terrorists responsible for the attack.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: Reports and articles have shown that the use of surveillance technology to track people can be beneficial to us, particularly in the healthcare and crime prevention sector and enhancing the security area.

Target: Reports and articles have shown that the use of surveillance technology to track people can be beneficial to us, particularly in the healthcare and crime prevention sectors and in the enhancement of security.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: By that time, her life would be in danger and this would most probably bring about dire consequences such as death.

Target: By that time, the patient's life would be in danger, and this would most probably bring about dire consequences such as death.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: Not only that, if indeed that a crime happened, the prison guards will be able to investigate and know who is the culprit.

Target: Not only that, if indeed a crime happens, the prison guards will be able to investigate and know who the culprit is.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Thirdly, surveillance technology can also be use to keep track of our children and prevent kidnapping.

Target: Thirdly, surveillance technology can also be used to keep track of our children and prevent kidnapping.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: The main issue pertaining to this is that when an individual choose not to disclose the result of the genetic testing, it is actually unfair to and has adverse impacts on both his family and employer.

Target: The main issue pertaining to this is that when an individual chooses not to disclose the result of the genetic testing, it is actually unfair to and has adverse impacts on both his family and his employer.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: The result of the genetic testing concerns parties other than the individual alone, and therefore, the individual requesting for genetic testing should not have the final say to whether the results should be revealed to others.

Target: The result of the genetic testing concerns parties other than the individual alone, and therefore, the individual requesting genetic testing should not have the final say on whether or not the results should be revealed to others.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: Firstly, often, when an individual is tested to be positive for genetic disorder, he will be reluctant to share the result with others, even the closest kin.

Target: Firstly, when an individual is tested to be positive for a genetic disorder, he would be reluctant to share the result with others, even his closest kin.


Source: Fix grammar: One reason for revealing the result to the family members is that the result is not only applicable to the individual but also to other family members, as they may also have inherited the diseases.

Target: One reason for revealing the result to family members is that the result is not only applicable to the individual but also to his family members, as they may also have inherited the disease.


Source: Make the sentence fluent: Even though the individual may have the responsibility to inform the others about the possibility of them inheriting the genes, one should have the right to decide whether to tell.

Target: However, even though the individual may have the responsibility to inform others about the possibility of them inheriting the genes, he should have the right to decide whether or not to tell.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: Moreover, the test result may be faulty and some people carrying the gene may never develop the disease.

Target: Moreover, the test result may be faulty, and some people carrying the gene never develop the disease.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: Furthermore, the testing only gives the percentage but not the definitive results.

Target: Furthermore, the testing only gives the percentage and not the definitive results.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: However, there are also several problems attributed from the use of RFID.

Target: However, there are also several problems arising from the use of RFID.


Source: Fix grammaticality: Most concerns revolve around the fact that RFID invades one's privacy and violates human rights when they are used for tracking people.

Target: Most concerns revolve around the fact that RFID invades one's privacy and violates human rights when it is used for tracking people.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: Companies which specialise in RFID tags may pass the information obtained from the RFID tags to any buyer if government does not intervene or control.

Target: Companies that specialize in RFID tags may pass the information obtained from the RFID tags to any buyer if the government does not intervene or control such access.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: In conclusion, RFID tracking should not be banned as it does not inflict the privacy of people and gives advantages in many aspects in human life.

Target: In conclusion, RFID tracking should not be banned as it does not infringe on the privacy of people and gives advantages in many aspects of human life.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: As genetic diseases can be inherited among family members, anxiety and fear of inheriting the genetic diseases that the individual has been diagnosed will be created.

Target: As genetic diseases can be inherited among family members, anxiety and fear of inheriting the genetic diseases that the individual has been diagnosed with will be created.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: However, one should not forget that once the genetic result of the individual is disclosed, it might be difficult for the individual to integrate into the society as they may be discriminated.

Target: However, one should not forget that once the genetic result of the individual is disclosed, it might be difficult for the individual to integrate into society as he may be discriminated against.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: Hence, the individual should bear in mind the impacts that may arise and decide if they should reveal such results.

Target: Hence, the individual should bear in mind the impacts that may arise and decide if he should reveal such results.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Depending on the seriousness of the disease, the individual decides whether to reveal his diagnosis.

Target: Depending on the seriousness of the disease, the individual decides whether or not to reveal his diagnosis.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: Moreover, forcing the individual to publicize his result will bring about a new caste system where people are grouped according to the genome.

Target: Moreover, forcing the individual to publicize his result could bring about a new caste system where people are grouped according to their genomes.


Source: Fix errors in this text: In conclusion, due to the serious impact in one's life, we should let the individual to decide his revealing genetic results.

Target: In conclusion, due to the serious impact on one's life, we should let the individual decide whether or not to reveal genetic results.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: The unborn child may have the chance to get the disorder from his parents.

Target: Thus, the unborn child may have the chance to get the disorder from his parents.


Source: Fix grammar errors: They may be denied insurance due to their disorder.

Target: For instance, they may be denied insurance due to their disorder.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: This has brought about many debates on whether the individual who undergo genetic testing should have the final say in revealing the results.

Target: This has brought about many debates on whether the individual who undergoes genetic testing should have the final say in revealing the results.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: While some proponents suggest that it is the privacy of the individual who undergoes the genetic testing, but the test results might also have adverse effects to those who are closely related to that person.

Target: While some proponents suggest that this involves the privacy of the individual who undergoes the genetic testing, the test results might also have adverse effects on those who are closely related to that person.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: Hence, this affects not only the person with genetic disease, but also the life partner.

Target: Hence, it affects not only the person with the genetic disease but also his life partner.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Employers can use the information acquired from genetic testing to ensure that their employees are not exposed to environmental agents that might caused them to have increase risk in genetic disorders.

Target: Employers can use the information acquired from genetic testing to ensure that their employees are not exposed to environmental agents that might cause them to have an increased risk for genetic disorders.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: The second reason is an obligation to tell his employer about his diseases.

Target: The second reason is an obligation to tell his employer about his genetic condition.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Therefore, the use of RFID to track people should be banned as it would bring about negative impacts to the society.

Target: Therefore, the use of RFID to track people should be banned as it would bring about negative impacts on society.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: Criminals may have access to these information and this may put our life in danger as these criminals can easily harm us once they know our exact location.

Target: Criminals may have access to such information, and this may put our lives in danger as these criminals can easily harm us once they know our exact location.


Source: Make the sentence fluent: As such, patient's medical information may leak out, which in turn may result in social discrimination and loss of health care coverage.

Target: As such, patients' medical information may leak out, which in turn may result in social discrimination and loss of health care coverage.


Source: Make the sentence fluent: In conclusion, the use of RFID to track people should be banned as it will cause invasion in privacy, security breaches as well as health problems when RFID chips are implanted.

Target: In conclusion, the use of RFID to track people should be banned as it will cause an invasion of privacy, security breaches as well as health problems when RFID chips are implanted into individuals.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: However, critics have been quick to point out that it is an intrusion of privacy and are calling for it to be banned.

Target: However, critics have been quick to point out that this is an intrusion of privacy and are calling for it to be banned.


Source: Fix grammar errors: I believe that the benefits of RFID used in tracking people far outweigh the 'uncertain' disadvantages and thus it should not be banned.

Target: However, I believe that the benefits of RFID used in tracking people far outweigh the 'uncertain' disadvantages, and thus, it should not be banned.


Source: Fix errors in this text: In conclusion, I believe that the usage of RFID in tracking human should not be banned as the advantages of its usage outweigh its disadvantages.

Target: In conclusion, I believe that the usage of RFID in tracking humans should not be banned as the advantages of its usage outweigh its disadvantages.


Source: Fix grammar: Genetic testing is used to examine the genes of a patient or a latent patient, in order to analysis the causes of some diseases.

Target: Genetic testing is used to examine the genes of a patient or a latent patient in order to find out the causes of some diseases.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: However, with the application of genetic testing, some problems are revealed gradually, such as whether the patients should tell their families about their testing results.

Target: However, with the application of genetic testing, some problems are revealed gradually, such as whether patients should tell their families about their testing results.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: Firstly, a couple who is planning get marry and one of them or a close relative of them has an inherited disease is advised to take up genetic testing.

Target: Firstly, a couple who is planning to get married and one of them or a close relative has an inherited disease is advised to take up genetic testing.


Source: Fix grammaticality: Others argued that it is unfair for the individual as the result is a kind of confidential information.

Target: Others argue that it is unfair for the individual as a result is a kind of confidential information.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: The risk of giving birth to inherit genetic disease child is high and also endanger the individual by exposing himself to work environment that may be hazardous to his health.

Target: The risk of giving birth to a child with an inherited genetic disease is high and also endangers the individual by exposing himself to a work environment that may be hazardous to his health.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: Thus many will say the results must also be make known to his relatives even without his consent.

Target: Thus, many will say the results must also be made known to his relatives, even without his consent.


Source: Grammar improvements: In conclusion, there could be some laws pass down to settle all these ethical issues.

Target: In conclusion, there could be some laws passed down to settle all these ethical issues.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Ultimately, it still does not solve the root of these problems and the unforeseen situations in the future.

Target: Ultimately, it still does not solve the root of these problems and unforeseen situations in the future.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: Thus, such use of RFID to track people should be banned.

Target: Thus, the use of RFID to track people should be banned.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: Health concerns are also related with the use of RFID to track people.

Target: Health concerns are also related to the use of RFID to track people.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: Furthermore, ifthe microchips react with a strong electrical or magnetic field, the implant could be destroyed and cause serious burns.

Target: Furthermore, if the microchips react with a strong electrical or magnetic field, the implant could be destroyed and cause serious burns.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: Another social consequence would be when individuals are discriminated against in Health coverage based on their genetic make-up.

Target: Another social consequence would be when individuals are discriminated against in health coverage based on their genetic makeup.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: While it may be difficult even for the individual to accept the results of the test, sharing the news with their relatives and friends may be the larger concern.

Target: While it may be difficult even for the individual to accept the results of the test, sharing the news with his or her relatives and friends may be the larger concern.


Source: Fix grammar errors: Therefore, with these concerns, it is important that the individual requesting genetic testing should have the final say in whether to reveal the results of such testing.

Target: Therefore, with these concerns, it is important that the individual requesting genetic testing should have the final say in whether or not to reveal the results of such testing.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: Firstly privacy is one of the worries one will have while considering whether or not to carry out genetic testing.

Target: Firstly, privacy is one of the worries one will have while considering whether or not to carry out genetic testing.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: This is generally known as discrimination.

Target: This is generally known as discrimination


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: One of them is about the privacy and confidentiality of the individual who undergo genetic testing, whether he or she should reveal the results of the testing to third parties or not.

Target: One of them is about the privacy and confidentiality of the individual who undergoes genetic testing, whether he or she should reveal the results of the testing to third parties or not.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: There are several advantages by revealing the results of genetic testing to third parties.

Target: There are several advantages to revealing the results of genetic testing to third parties.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: If the genetic testing is revealed to the relatives and they end up having the same disease, they could be saved by preventing the disease to develop further more.

Target: If genetic testing is revealed to relatives and they end up having the same disease, they could be saved by preventing the disease from developing further.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: By allowing proper usage of surveillance technology, one could increase the level of security and safekeeping in a country as well as improving work efficiency at a workplace.

Target: By allowing proper usage of surveillance technology, one could increase the level of security and safekeeping in a country as well as improve work efficiency at the workplace.


Source: Fix grammaticality: The cubicles allows employees to do things unrelated to work and employers are unable to push the employees to get the work done when they spend more than half the time using the facilities available for their own indulgence.

Target: The cubicles allow employees to do things unrelated to work, and employers are unable to push employees to get the work done when the latter spend more than half the time using the facilities available for their own indulgence.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: Genetic testing is a medical test, which is used to diagnose the disorder in the genome of a person and determine if this mutation can cause a specific disease.

Target: Genetic testing is a medical test used to diagnose the disorder in the genome of a person and determine if this mutation can cause a specific disease.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: To protect the welfare of patients with genetic problem, their genetic information should not be disclosed over their objection or even without their permission.

Target: To protect the welfare of patients with genetic problems, their genetic information should not be disclosed over their objection or even without their permission.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: Whereas advocates of such surveillance technologies emphasize on the benefit as to promote work efficiency and secure communal settings, opponents strike back by stating intensified concerns related to individual privacy.

Target: Whereas advocates of such surveillance technologies emphasize the benefits as to promote work efficiency and secure communal settings, opponents strike back by stating intensified concerns related to individual privacy.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: Sometimes criminals will be deterred if they are aware of the hidden surveillance.

Target: Sometimes criminals will be deterred if they are aware of hidden surveillance.


Source: Fix grammaticality: While not compromising the benefits it brings, the ethical and moral issues regarding surveillance technology far outweighs the benefits it bring.

Target: While not compromising the benefits it brings, the ethical and moral issues regarding surveillance technology far outweigh the benefits it brings.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: They are visual, audio and data surveillance.

Target: They are visual, audio, and data surveillance


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: This causes the employee to have low morale during work, and thus reduces work efficiency when the aim of the CCTV is otherwise.

Target: This causes employees to have low morale during work and thus reduces work efficiency when the aim of the CCTV is otherwise.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: Therefore surveillance technology should be banned.

Target: Therefore, surveillance technology should be banned.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: The individual requesting genetic testing should have the final say in whether to reveal the results of such testing.

Target: The individual requesting genetic testing should have the final say on whether to reveal the results of such testing.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: With the outreach of the mass media, reports of genetic disorder of an individual could be known to the world in minutes.

Target: Given the outreach of the mass media, reports of a genetic disorders of an individual could be known to the world in minutes.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: When they are informed by the potential risk of the mutation that could lead to a genetic disease that is also hereditary, they can undergo their own genetic test in order to determine the extent of the mutation risk as soon as possible.

Target: When they are informed of the potential risk of the mutation that could lead to a genetic disease that is also hereditary, they can undergo their own genetic tests in order to determine the extent of the mutation risk as soon as possible.


Source: Grammar improvements: Secondly, when the result of a particular genetic test is beneficial to the whole society, researchers have the very right to disclose such outcome.

Target: Secondly, when the result of a particular genetic test is beneficial to the whole society, researchers have the right to disclose the outcome.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: As we know, scientists all over the world are working together to make people life better by studying the genome of human and other organisms.

Target: As we know, scientists all over the world are working together to make people's life better by studying the genome of humans and other organisms.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: In contrary, the results should be shared among scientists and researchers for the whole world's sake.

Target: On the contrary, the results should be shared among scientists and researchers for the whole world's sake.


Source: Make the sentence fluent: The use of surveillance technology should not be banned because it is useful in ensuring the public safety and monitoring workplace in a company.

Target: The use of surveillance technology should not be banned because it is useful in ensuring public safety and monitoring the work in a company.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: Employees might seem to be surfing the web for business purposes at all time, but what they actually doing is personal business such as online banking, shopping and chatting.

Target: Employees might seem to be surfing the web for business purposes at all times, but what they are actually doing is a personal business, such as online banking, shopping, and chatting.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: However, monitoring can take place under suitable circumstances and to an appropriate extend.

Target: However, monitoring can take place under suitable circumstances and to an appropriate extent.


Source: Fix grammaticality: Development and advancement in the field of genetic research has challenged the scientists and the public on a wide range of issues especially issue relating ethical concerns.

Target: Development and advancement in the field of genetic research have challenged scientists and the public on a wide range of issues, especially issues relating to ethical concerns.


Source: Fix grammar errors: Therefore, result of genetic testing should be revealed without the consent of the person who requested it.

Target: Therefore, the result of genetic testing should be revealed without the consent of the person who requested it.


Source: Fix grammar errors: Genetic testing is able to analyze whether a subject is confirm to develop or inherit a particular genetic disease.

Target: Genetic testing is able to analyze whether a subject is likely to develop or inherit a particular genetic disease.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: But are they able to inform the family members to safeguard their personal health yet not breaching the issues of confidentiality and privacy?

Target: But are they able to inform the family members to safeguard their personal health and yet not breach the issues of confidentiality and privacy?


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: Firstly, the ethical aspect of privacy and confidentiality, need to be preserved.

Target: Firstly, the ethical aspect of privacy and confidentiality need to be preserved.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Genetic discrimination has place privacy and confidentiality in jeopardy, because subjects have no control over their genetic makeup.

Target: Genetic discrimination has placed privacy and confidentiality in jeopardy because subjects have no control over their genetic makeup.


Source: Fix grammaticality: While the use of this seemingly intrusive technology is shrouded by concerns over privacy, morality and health issues, its benefits?

Target: While the use of this seemingly intrusive technology is shrouded in concerns over privacy, morality, and health issues, its benefits,


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: One pivoting reason to why RFID should not be banned includes its application to augment public and national security.

Target: One pivoting reason why RFID should not be banned is its application to augment public and national security.


Source: Fix grammar errors: There are severe consequences if the results are not handled and communicate properly by third parties.

Target: There are severe consequences if the results are not handled and communicated properly by third parties.


Source: Make the sentence fluent: In conclusion, the individual requesting genetic testing should have the final say in whether to reveal the results of genetic testing.

Target: In conclusion, the individual requesting genetic testing should have the final say on whether to reveal the results of genetic testing.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: In doing so, time could be greatly minimized and many more innocent lives will be saved.

Target: In doing so, waiting time could be greatly minimized, and many more innocent lives will be saved.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: Secondly, implanting RFID tags into ex-offenders facilitates the authorities in monitoring their activities.

Target: Secondly, implanting RFID tags into ex-offenders aids the authorities in monitoring their activities.


Source: Make the sentence fluent: This helps to save innocent lives and reduce crime rate in the country.

Target: This helps to save innocent lives and reduce crime in the country.


Source: Grammar improvements: Expediting the cracking of criminal cases is another point to why surveillance technology should not be banned.

Target: Expediting the cracking of criminal cases is another point why surveillance technology should not be banned.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: The storage of key medical records and information in a radio-transmitting chip will cut down time spent on registration and thus, allowing patients to receive prompt treatment.

Target: The storage of key medical records and information in a radio-transmitting chip will cut down time spent on registration, thus, allowing patients to receive prompt treatment.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: This can prove to be vital in saving a person's live.

Target: This can prove to be vital in saving a person's life.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: With the use of RFID to locate a victim, it will allow the authorities to capture the people behind such activities and provides a solution to the problem of human trafficking.

Target: With the use of RFID to locate a victim, it will allow the authorities to capture the people behind such activities and provide a solution to the problem of human trafficking.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: Therefore, the use of surveillance technology on tracking people should be banned.

Target: Therefore, the use of surveillance technology for tracking people should be banned.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: RFID tags can be easily put on one's clothing which information could be easily available to marketers, government agencies and criminals.

Target: RFID tags can be easily put on one's clothing, so information could be easily available to marketers, government agencies, and criminals.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Furthermore, some research has shown RFID computer chips may be linked to cancer based on animal studies.

Target: Furthermore, some research has shown RFID computer chips may be linked to cancer, based on animal studies.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: For instance, a ten years-old child could undergo a genetic testing and predict the risk of getting Huntingdon's disease in middle age.

Target: For instance, a ten-year-old child could undergo genetic testing and predict the risk of getting Huntingdon's disease in middle age.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: This is obvious and could be imagined that when the individual discloses the information to his brother who is doing preparation for the A-level final examination, for example, the latter would be overwhelmed with stresses whereby affecting his performance during the examination.

Target: This is obvious and could be imagined that when the individual discloses the information to his brother, who is doing preparation for the A-level final examination, for example, the latter would be overwhelmed with stress whereby affecting his performance during the examination.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Admittedly, employers and insurers would always make a decision that benefits their corporation.

Target: Admittedly, employers and insurers would always make a decision that benefits their cooperation.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: Firstly, all individuals should have the rights to make decisions that will affect their future.

Target: Firstly, all individuals should have the right to make decisions that will affect their future.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: Thus, the individual requesting genetic testing should not have the final say in whether to reveal the results of such thing.

Target: Thus, the individual requesting genetic testing should not have the final say on whether to reveal the results of such a thing.


Source: Grammar improvements: In fact, large amount of government grants on surveillance technology implementation can be alternatively invested on issues of greater importance namely eradication of poverty, famine and diseases control.

Target: In fact, large amounts of government grants on surveillance technology implementation can be alternatively invested in issues of greater importance, namely the eradication of poverty, famine, and disease control.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: By planting this device into their body, we can detect where they are in case some urgent diseases break out.

Target: By planting this device in their body, we can detect where they are in case some urgent diseases break out.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: It was reported that during the September 11 terrorist attacks, fire fighters wrote their names on their arms for fear that they would be unidentified by their family members if they are disfigured.

Target: It was reported that during the September 11 terrorist attacks, firefighters wrote their names on their arms for fear that they would be unidentified by their family members if they were disfigured.


Source: Grammar improvements: Nonetheless, it is more persuasive to believe that surveillance technology helps in tracking of properties and improvements in medical care.

Target: Nonetheless, it is more persuasive to believe that surveillance technology helps in the tracking of properties and improvements in medical care.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: The tagging system is also a measure to deter the problems of having Alzheimer patients lost wandering at other places or patients collapsing outside of hospital area.

Target: The tagging system is also a measure to deter the problems of having Alzheimer patients lost wandering in other places or patients collapsing outside of the hospital areas.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: Hence, with such surveillance technology, the risk of patients getting injured while getting lost outside can be reduced to a minimal percentage.

Target: Hence, with such surveillance technology, the risk of patients getting injured while getting lost outside can be reduced to a minimum.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Since most couples in this competitive era have their own business or enterprise, home surveillance is then installed in order to guard their residence.

Target: Since most couples in this competitive era have their own business or enterprise, home surveillance is installed in order to guard their residence.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: In conclusion, the effects of surveillance technology surrounding us are based on both major and minor premises, which are privacy and right of freedom of individuals, as well as the psychological condition.

Target: In conclusion, the effects of surveillance technology surrounding us are based on both major and minor premises, which are privacy and the right of freedom of individuals, as well as psychological condition.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: Patient with this disease can be easily disoriented, hence, causing them to lose their way.

Target: A patient with this disease can be easily disoriented, hence, causing them to lose their way.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: Although the use of surveillance technology will raised ethical concerns, to obtain important information that might save thousands of lives, there is no choice but to do it.

Target: Although the use of surveillance technology will raise ethical concerns, to obtain important information that might save thousands of lives, there is no choice but to do it.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: In conclusion, we can impose law and limit the use of surveillance technology but we cannot ban it.

Target: In conclusion, we can impose a law and limit the use of surveillance technology, but we cannot ban it.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: In light of this ubiquitous and accessible availability of genetic testing, many have started to question the problems that are associated to the results.

Target: In light of this ubiquitous and accessible availability of genetic testing, many have started to question the problems that are associated with the results.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Patients with positive test results will be susceptible to physical and emotional stress and thus will need support from his loved ones.

Target: Patients with positive test results will be susceptible to physical and emotional stress and thus will need support from their loved ones.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Genetic testing is the examination of the fundamental human genetic information, so as to access an individual's risk of contracting diseases.

Target: Genetic testing is the examination of fundamental human genetic information so as to assess an individual's risk of contracting diseases.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: However the same technology can also be used to track people and intrude private information.

Target: However, the same technology can also be used to track people and steal private information.


Source: Fix grammar errors: The application of tracking technology has spurned heated debates from both public and private sectors.

Target: The application of tracking technology has spurred heated debates from both the public and private sectors.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: Behavioural advertising on the other hand has invaded the individual's right to safeguard their personal information and browsing habits.

Target: Behavioral advertising, on the other hand, has invaded the individual's right to safeguard their personal information and browsing habits.


Source: Make the sentence fluent: Genetic tests are laboratory techniques used to determine whether a person has or probability of getting a genetic disorder.

Target: Genetic tests are laboratory techniques used to determine whether a person has the probability of getting a genetic disorder.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Individuals should maintain their rights in whether to reveal the results of such testing is so that they can protect themselves from genetic discrimination.

Target: Individuals should maintain their rights in whether to reveal the results of such testing so that they can protect themselves from genetic discrimination.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: Thus, to protect themselves from genetic discrimination, individuals should maintain their rights in having the final say whether to reveal results of genetic testing.

Target: Thus, to protect themselves from genetic discrimination, individuals should maintain their rights to have the final say on whether to reveal the results of genetic testing.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Even with the improvement of the technologies related to genetic diseases, these individuals are denied of the opportunities to prevent, or even treat the genetic disease that could be present.

Target: Even with the improvement of the technologies related to genetic diseases, these individuals are denied the opportunities to prevent or even treat the genetic disease that could be present.


Source: Fix grammar errors: If the results of genetic testing are to be forcefully revealed, less people will be willing to even go for the test.

Target: If the results of genetic testing are to be forcefully revealed, fewer people will be willing to even go for the test.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: The concerns for safety and security have increased the number of use of the surveillance systems.

Target: The concerns for safety and security have increased the extent of the use of surveillance systems.


Source: Fix grammaticality: Genetic testing allows early detection of diseases which may be useful to mankind.

Target: Genetic testing allows early detection of diseases, which may be useful to mankind.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: This is supported by the fact that most people with disabilities or diseases are discriminated.

Target: This is supported by the fact that most people with disabilities or diseases are discriminated against.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: Critics of this position claim that insurer will also be at a disadvantage if such results are not revealed to them.

Target: Critics of this position claim that insurers will also be at a disadvantage if such results are not revealed to them.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Genetic testing is a test performed to allow genetic diagnose of inherited diseases.

Target: Genetic testing is a test performed to allow genetic diagnosis of inherited diseases.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: It will be unfair if the spouse kept the truth from their spouse.

Target: It would be unfair if the one kept the truth from their spouse.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Those with genetic diseases like mental retardation and Down syndrome are asked to be enrolled in school like MINDS and bright sparks.

Target: Those with genetic diseases like mental retardation and Down syndrome are asked to be enrolled in schools like MINDS and bright sparks.


Source: Fix grammaticality: Some may debate that this is a form of discrimination and violate the human rights of these children.

Target: Some may debate that this is a form of discrimination and violates the human rights of these children.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: It makes privacy lose its meaning and is unhealthy to our society.

Target: It makes privacy lose its meaning and is unhealthy for our society.


Source: Fix grammar errors: However, the advent of genetic testing does not bring unanimous consents from the public.

Target: However, the advent of genetic testing does not bring unanimous consent from the public.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: There are uproars regarding the moral and ethical issues which overwhelm the topic of genetic testing from time to time.

Target: There are uproars regarding the moral and ethical issues which cloud the topic of genetic testing from time to time.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: After that, parents who request genetic testing for their children must provide the genetic information of their child to school authorities for the enrollment.

Target: After that, parents who request genetic testing for their children must provide the genetic information of their children to school authorities for enrollment.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: This is because individual oneself is less capable of making a suitable decision.

Target: This is because the individual is less capable of making a suitable decision.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: Then, who will be the one who holds the right to do it?

Target: In that situation, who will be the one who holds the right to do it?


Source: Make the sentence fluent: However, in the reality, the result of genetic testing is so important and could give impact to all his family as it may comprise information about hereditary disease.

Target: However, in reality, the result of genetic testing is so important and could give impact all his family as it may comprise information about the hereditary diseases.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: In conclusion, the result of genetic testing that informs us about our hereditary disease, will not only affect us as individual but also our family.

Target: In conclusion, the result of genetic testing that informs us about our hereditary disease will affect not only us as individuals but also our family.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: Its general purpose is to check if one has potential to develop certain genetic diseases.

Target: Its general purpose is to check if one has the potential to develop certain genetic diseases.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: By revealing genetic test result to companies, employers can determine if the job applicant is suitable for the job and assign them to environment that will not have any exposure to lead.

Target: By getting employees to reveal their genetic test results, employers can determine if the job applicant is suitable for the job and therefore assign them to a job environment that will not have any exposure to lead.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: Thus, the individuals should not have the final say about revealing their genetic test results.

Target: Thus, individuals should not be given the final say about revealing their genetic test results.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Many will think that insurance companies used the test results as the excuse to deny them from claiming or even buying certain medical policies.

Target: Many may think that the insurance companies used the test results as excuses to deny them from claiming or even buying certain medical policies.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: Moreover, many insurance companies used the test result to encourage the clients to buy certain policies that can maximize their benefits.

Target: Moreover, many insurance companies use the test results to encourage clients to buy certain policies that can maximize their benefits.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: After September 11, 2001, surveillance became important as it become one of the tools to prevent terrorism.

Target: After September 11, 2001, surveillance became important as it is one of the tools to prevent terrorism.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: In my view, surveillance technology should be banned as the disadvantages clearly outweigh the advantage.

Target: In my view, surveillance technology should be banned as the disadvantages clearly outweigh the advantages.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: Hence our privacy is being invaded as our very personal information is being known by a lot of people.

Target: Hence, our privacy is being invaded as our very personal information is being known by a lot of people.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: Opposition might argue that surveillance technology should not be banned as it provides security.

Target: Some might argue that surveillance technology should not be banned as it provides security.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: With the help modern technology, humans are able to create increasingly efficient devices which are able to store relevant personal information or to trace one's location.

Target: With the help of modern technology, humans are able to create increasingly efficient devices which are able to store relevant personal information or trace one's location.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: This argument is flawed, as there is no concrete evidence showing existence of such crimes.

Target: This argument is flawed, as there is no concrete evidence showing the existence of such crimes.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: In conclusion, tracking devices should be allowed in tracking people, as it is able to change human lives for the better, and even prevent or reduce crime rates.

Target: In conclusion, tracking devices should be allowed to track people, as it is able to change human lives for the better, and they may even prevent or reduce crime rates.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: There are two main benefits that the use of surveillance technology has brought to.

Target: There are two main benefits that the use of surveillance technology has brought.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: GPS tracking device helps in the investigation of crimes.

Target: The GPS tracking device helps in the investigation of crimes.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Law enforcement agencies are able to identify terrorists and put a stop to their plan.

Target: Law enforcement agencies are able to identify terrorists and put a stop to their plans.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Besides that, surveillance technology also enables tracking of criminals who are on run or even kidnappers.

Target: Besides that, surveillance technology also enables the tracking of criminals who are on the run and even kidnappers.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: However, the unfounded argument is not adequate to outlaw the use of human tracking technology.

Target: However, this unfounded argument is not adequate to outlaw the use of human tracking technology.


Source: Fix grammar errors: In conclusion, the use of surveillance technology to track people should not be banned as it helps preventing terrorism and crimes.

Target: In conclusion, the use of surveillance technology to track people should not be banned as it helps to prevent terrorism and crimes.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: For instance, genetic information that falls into the hands of insurers and employers without consent will be used to prejudice against the tested individual.

Target: For instance, genetic information that falls into the hands of insurers and employers without the consent of individuals will be used to prejudice against the tested individual.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Until proper steps such as enactment and reinforcement of laws are taken by the governments, genetic information of individuals should be kept private and confidential to avoid exploitation by unscrupulous parties and also to avoid disintegration of family relations.

Target: Until proper steps such as enactment and reinforcement of laws are taken by the governments, the genetic information of individuals should be kept private and confidential to avoid exploitation by unscrupulous parties and also to avoid the disintegration of family relations.


Source: Fix grammar errors: However, if the result of the test can be easily access by third party, a lot of problems will be occurred.

Target: However, if the result of the test can be easily assessed by a third party, a lot of problems will occur.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: The privacy and confidentiality of a person will be affected in revealing undesirable genetic testing results.

Target: The privacy and confidentiality of a person will be affected by revealing his or her undesirable genetic testing results.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: These people have to look for other alternative to earn a living.

Target: These people have to look for other alternatives to earn a living.


Source: Fix grammar: Hence, results should not be revealed to protect employees from environment that might harm them.

Target: Hence, results should not be revealed to protect employees from environments that might harm them.


Source: Make the sentence fluent: Another difficulty involves disclosure of genetic information to insurance companies.

Target: Another difficulty involves the disclosure of genetic information to insurance companies.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: Secondly, being able to access one's genetic information will reveal the list of diseases one is susceptible to, and the one who possesses the information may have ulterior interest.

Target: Secondly, being able to access one's genetic information will reveal the list of diseases one is susceptible to, and the one who possesses the information may have an ulterior interest.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: Thus, it is still up to the discretion of individual to go for genetic testing if they are at high risk.

Target: Thus, it is still up to the discretion of individuals to go for genetic testing if they are at high risk.


Source: Grammar improvements: Therefore, individuals whom requested for genetic testing should have the final say in whether to reveal the results of such testing.

Target: Therefore, individuals who have requested genetic testing should have the final say in whether to reveal the results of such testing.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: Hence, such use of surveillance technology to track people should not be banned.

Target: Hence, the use of such surveillance technology to track people should not be banned.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Firstly, the use of biometric surveillance in the form of a biometric passport will make it more difficult for terrorists to travel in and out of countries, due to increasing passport security and border surveillance.

Target: Firstly, the use of biometric surveillance in the form of a biometric passport will make it more difficult for terrorists to travel in and out of different countries due to increasing passport security and border surveillance.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: This has brought about a wild debate on the banning of the use of surveillance technology to track person.

Target: This has brought about a wild debate on the banning of the use of surveillance technology to track the movement of people.


Source: Grammar improvements: Next, those who were under home quarantined during the SARS period were instructed to install a camera in their isolation zone to make sure they are always visible and contactable to prevent further spread of the disease.

Target: Next, those who were under home quarantine during the SARS period were instructed to install a camera in their isolation zone to make sure that they are always visible and contactable to prevent the further spread of the disease.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: Also, the use of infrared fever sensing system in Changi airport and along borders allows mass surveillance of body temperature, which can detect and isolate feverish passengers.

Target: Also, the use of an infrared fever sensing system in Changi airport and along borders allows mass surveillance of body temperature, which can detect and isolate feverish passengers


Source: Fix grammar errors: Through the use of the permission-based location tracking service, which is provided by our local telecommunication provider, SingTel, the location of our loved ones can be detected readily by this new surveillance technology.

Target: Through the use of the permission-based location tracking service, which is provided by our local telecommunication provider, SingTel, the location of our loved ones can be detected readily by this new surveillance technology


Source: Fix errors in this text: This is very useful towards families with young juveniles and aging parents because their location could be tracked easily if they are lost in the crowd and thus preventing them from any possible harm they may encounter.

Target: This is very useful for families with young juveniles and aging parents because their location could be tracked easily if they are lost in the crowd, and thus, this may prevent them from any possible harm they may encounter.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: Firstly, an individual should not be robbed of their basic right to privacy.

Target: Firstly, an individual should not be robbed of his basic right to privacy.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Although, it cannot be denied that it is ethical to inform family members about their risk of hereditary disease however one do not have any obligation to reveal their genetic status since this information could be exploited and misused by others, threatening their welfare.

Target: Although it cannot be denied that it is ethical to inform family members about their risk of hereditary, one does not have any obligation to reveal their genetic status since this information could be exploited and misused by others, thus threatening their welfare


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Secondly, revelation of one's genetic status subjects the individual to many social issues related to genetic discrimination.

Target: Secondly, the revelation of one's genetic status subjects the individual to many social issues related to genetic discrimination