Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: But before I knew it I was asleep.

Target: But before I knew it, I was asleep.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: I never stopped praying all along; in hope that somehow, somewhere, someone would come along to rescue me.

Target: I never stopped praying throughout, in the hope that somehow, somewhere, someone would come along to rescue me.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: Emphatically I reminded myself that I shouldn't have survived had it not been for God's help!

Target: Emphatically, I reminded myself that I wouldn't have survived had it not been for God's help!


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: A second thought crossed my mind telling me that I would miss my family and my best friends!

Target: A second thought crossed my mind, telling me that I would miss my family and my best friends!


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: My name is Alexandra kennedy.

Target: My name is Alexandra Kennedy.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: I was born in Russia, but lived in many different countries around the world.

Target: I was born in Russia, but I have lived in many different countries around the world.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: I have got a family of my own, so I am familiar with looking after children and taking care of them. I enjoy fitness-and can easily help organise children sport activities.

Target: I have got a family of my own, so I am familiar with looking after children and taking care of them. I enjoy fitness and can easily help organize children's sports activities.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: I am also quiet experienced in the kitchen. I am really into healthy nutrition and healthy cooking.

Target: I am also quite experienced in the kitchen. I am really into healthy nutrition and healthy cooking.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Due to the interest in protecting animals, people are eager to take part in organizations such as World Wide Fund for Nature (WWF) which is an international non-governmental organization working on issues regarding the conservation, research and restoration of the environment.

Target: Due to the interest in protecting animals, people are eager to take part in organizations such as the World Wide Fund for Nature (WWF), which is an international non-governmental organization working on issues regarding the conservation, research, and restoration of the environment.


Source: Fix grammar: This is clearly seen when driving in the route and suddenly you see a bull or a cow in the middle of the way.

Target: This is clearly seen when driving along the road, and suddenly you see a bull or a cow in the middle of the road.


Source: Fix grammar errors: this may cause not only the animal death by being run over but also the passengers' death if the driver tries to stop and lose the control of the car.

Target: This may cause not only the animal's death by being run over but also the passengers' death if the driver tries to stop and loses control of the car.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: First of all, I would like to say that the young people have worse health nowadays.

Target: First of all, I would like to say that young people have worse health nowadays.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: It is our fault because we have let the companies to profit from our own sins.

Target: It is our fault because we have let the companies profit from our own sins.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: You should take a look at the things your children have at their reach.

Target: You should take a look at the things your children have within their reach.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: The art of writing letters along with painting colorful mandalas were taught by her grandmother.

Target: The art of writing letters along with painting colorful mandalas was taught to her by her grandmother.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: A huge mirror in her bedroom made a child believe that one is able to travel through it anywhere.

Target: A huge mirror in her bedroom made the child believe that one was able to travel through it anywhere.


Source: Grammar improvements: She loved watching printer at work producing numerous results of psychology tests, which she had just passed.

Target: She loved watching the printer at work producing numerous results of psychological tests, which she had just passed.


Source: Fix grammar: She devoted all her free time to experiments on linking the math homework with programming of the music equalizer.

Target: She devoted all her free time to experiments on linking her math homework with the programming of a music equalizer.


Source: Grammar improvements: After taking part in numerous festivals and concerts she had finally entered a joint British-Russian program for training socio-cultural managers in the cultural sphere.

Target: After taking part in numerous festivals and concerts, she finally entered a joint British-Russian program for training socio-cultural managers in the cultural sphere.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: It may sound weird or even wrong for some people, because there are many of them that don't even consider dancing as a sport... but for me, and for everyone that has ever done dancing, it is not only a sport, but a very difficult one.

Target: It may sound weird or even wrong to some people because there are many that don't even consider dancing as a sport... but for me, and for everyone that has ever done dancing, it is not only a sport but a very difficult one.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: However, I would advise people who would like to start dancing to really take it serious, because even though I said it is fun, it really does require commitment and discipline.

Target: However, I would advise people who would like to start dancing to really take it seriously because even though I said it was fun, it really does require commitment and discipline.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: The influence of the grown-ups: great or not so?

Target: The influence of grown-ups: great or not so great?


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Recently I have listened to a discussion on how adults can be a good influence on young people.

Target: Recently I listened to a discussion on how adults can be a good influence on young people.


Source: Fix grammar errors: Think of celebrities for example.

Target: Think of celebrities, for example.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: So when admirable adults set good examples for youngsters, they can influence behaviour in a positive way.

Target: So, when admirable adults set good examples for youngsters, they can influence behavior in a positive way.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: Especially when they have to live under a great lot of rules.

Target: Especially when they have to live under a great number of rules.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: 2- If you believe that doing exercises worsens your condition, then that is another myth because frozen shoulder occurs to people who stop or decrease using their shoulder joint for a long time.

Target: 2- If you believe that doing exercises worsens your condition, then that is another myth because frozen shoulder occurs in people who stop or decrease using their shoulder joint for a long time.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: Usually after major operations, having a stroke or bone fracture.

Target: Usually, after major operations, having a stroke or bone fracture.


Source: Fix grammar errors: They ignore using full range of joint motion to avoid the pain sensation.

Target: They ignore using the full range of joint motion to avoid the pain sensation.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: So an inflammatory response starts leading to the joint stiffness, movement becomes painful and range of movement is limited by time.

Target: So an inflammatory response starts leading to joint stiffness, movement becomes painful, and the range of movement is limited over time.


Source: Fix errors in this text: The first treatment that your doctor will suggest is medications such as analgesics and paracetamol.

Target: The first treatment that your doctor will suggest is medication such as analgesics and paracetamol.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: In addition to this, physical therapy is also an important way of treatment to maintain a full range of movement.

Target: In addition to this, physical therapy is also an important method of treatment to maintain a full range of movement.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: - If you had a surgery or an injury, you should keep moving your shoulder joint within a limit even if it is painful.

Target: - If you have had surgery or an injury, you should keep moving your shoulder joint within a limit even if it is painful.


Source: Fix grammaticality: - Physiotherapy is not only about exercises, some physiotherapy techniques can decrease your pain and suffering.

Target: - Physiotherapy is not only about exercises; some physiotherapy techniques can decrease your pain and suffering.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: Besides the fact that adults were not as well taught as children in school, they are the most civilized and responsible.

Target: Despite the fact that adults were not as well taught as children in school, they are the most civilized and responsible.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: Every year we nominate a person that is responsible for supervising the dustman's work every single day.

Target: Every year, we nominate a person that is responsible for supervising the dustman's work every single day.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: However air pollution affects not only people health but also the whole environmental system.

Target: However, air pollution affects not only people's health but also the whole environmental system.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: China is a big industrial country so there are a great number of factories and trucks.

Target: China is a big industrial country, so there are a great number of factories and trucks.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: CO2 can destroy the ozone.

Target: CO2 can destroy the ozone layer.


Source: Fix grammar: While there are many things to appreciate and celebrate about the world in which we live many pressing environmental problems cry out for our attention.

Target: While there are many things to appreciate and celebrate about the world in which we live, many pressing environmental problems cry out for our attention.


Source: Fix grammaticality: It was dark outside, the weather was windy and the leaves fell from the trees.

Target: It was dark outside, the weather was windy, and the leaves were falling from the trees.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: When it was already 10 pm suddenly a car appeared in the dark.

Target: When it was already 10 pm, suddenly a car appeared in the dark.


Source: Fix grammar: Finally, she saw the lights of the approaching car and ran toward the car.

Target: Finally, she saw the lights of an approaching car and ran toward the car.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: Therefore, it would be incredible expensive to reunite all of them again for another film.

Target: Therefore, it would be incredibly expensive to reunite all of them again for another film.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: At that moment he seemed like the new Steven Spielberg.

Target: At that moment, he seemed like the new Steven Spielberg.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: Nowadays he has turned into another director.

Target: Nowadays, he has turned into another director.


Source: Fix grammar errors: It has a pair of good tunes and they use them.

Target: It has a couple of good tunes, and they use them.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: Moreover, in a position as a Medical Writer I wrote scientific documents for clients in the pharmaceutical industry.

Target: Moreover, in a position as a Medical Writer, I wrote scientific documents for clients in the pharmaceutical industry.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: I would be very motivated to contribute to the development of excellent education material for the Faculty of Health and Wellness of Think Education.

Target: I would be very motivated to contribute to the development of excellent educational materials for the Faculty of Health and Wellness of Think Education.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: I am a very dynamic, creative and proactive person and I possess a strong work ethic.

Target: I am a very dynamic, creative, and proactive person, and I have a strong work ethic.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: The modern times have raised the concern about the environment, climate change and energy.

Target: Modern times have raised concerns about the environment, climate change, and energy.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: In the recent years there has been a great change in consumption habits.

Target: In recent years, there has been a great change in consumption habits.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: In developing countries, there is still a low level of awareness about the side effects of using private polluting cars.

Target: In developing countries, there is still a low level of awareness about the side effects of using polluting private cars.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: But in modern countries, the environmental effects of one's behavior is becoming important and concerning.

Target: But in modern countries, the environmental effects of one's behavior are becoming important and concerning.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: In my opinion it is just a matter of time until all the transportation options will be public and the private cars will be left behind.

Target: In my opinion, it is just a matter of time until all the transportation options will be public and private cars will be left behind.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: We can know this just by comparing the life now and 50 years ago.

Target: We can know this just by comparing life now and 50 years ago.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: We will definitely have better drugs and also less incurable diseases.

Target: We will definitely have better drugs and also fewer incurable diseases.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: It cannot escape our minds that at this stage and age, children are exposed to sexual images from a very early age and some people would argue that our society is hyper sexualised, which is a reason why many parents see single sex schools as a means to protect their offspring from having sexual thoughts before they are ready to understand the complexity of sex and sexual relationships.

Target: It cannot escape our minds that, at this stage and age, children are exposed to sexual images from a very early age, and some people would argue that our society is hyper-sexualized, which is a reason why many parents see single-sex schools as a means to protect their offspring from having sexual thoughts before they are ready to understand the complexity of sex and sexual relationships.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: I absolutely agree with this statement. Travelling by car is not only much more convenient than public transport, it also grants one's independence to go wherever and whenever one might wish.

Target: I absolutely agree with this statement. Traveling by car is not only much more convenient than public transport, but it also grants one independence to go wherever and whenever one might wish.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: The car industry could also be considered one of the main driving engines of the Western economy.

Target: The car industry could also be considered one of the main driving forces of the Western economy.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: All things considered we might conclude that public transport will eventually disappear in the short term and in no time everyone will be driving their own clean-energy-driven flying cars to go everywhere.

Target: All things considered, we might conclude that public transport will eventually disappear and, in no time, everyone will be driving their own clean-energy-driven flying cars to go everywhere.


Source: Fix grammar errors: Currently I am working as a teacher of English in my city of Dnipropetrovsk.

Target: Currently, I am working as a teacher of English in my city of Dnipropetrovsk.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: I consider myself to be ideally suited for this job for several reasons.

Target: I consider myself to be ideally suited to this job for several reasons.


Source: Make the sentence fluent: First of all, I have considerable experience in working with teenagers (for more than 5 years) which I find really enjoyable.

Target: First of all, I have considerable experience of working with teenagers (for more than 5 years), which I find really enjoyable.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: Second, I am quite energetic, open, active and educated person.

Target: Second, I am quite an energetic, open, active, and educated person.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: As it is known, it is used to produce crops that are more resistant to insects and diseases.

Target: As is known, it is used to produce crops that are more resistant to insects and diseases.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: Supporters also claim that, it is vital for some countries which are struggling with famine.

Target: Supporters also claim that it is vital for some countries which are struggling with famine.


Source: Fix grammar: In spite of the benefits, there are also certain drawbacks of human genetic engineering.

Target: In spite of the benefits, there are also certain drawbacks to human genetic engineering.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: In conclusion, it seems the benefits outweigh the drawbacks of human genetic engineering.

Target: In conclusion, it seems the benefits of human genetic engineering outweigh the drawbacks.


Source: Fix grammar: In both novels the writers also dealt with the mistreatment of children in workhouses (" David Copperfield ") and Boarding Schools (" Jane Eyre ").

Target: In both novels, the writers also dealt with the mistreatment of children in workhouses (" David Copperfield ") and Boarding Schools (" Jane Eyre ").


Source: Fix errors in this text: In Dickens' novels Realism allows the readers to know how tough London society was in that period.

Target: In Dickens' novels, Realism allows the readers to know how tough London society was in that period.


Source: Fix grammar errors: What he didn't know, or just couldn't accept, was he was unwilling to tolerate other people's views, and jokes that's why he packed my things and asked me to find another place to stay.

Target: What he didn't know, or just couldn't accept, was he was unwilling to tolerate other people's views and jokes. That's why he packed my things and asked me to find another place to stay.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: The reason? I told him I found a job in another city and I was considering moving house.

Target: The reason? I told him I had found a job in another city and I was considering moving house.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: I must have seem cruel to him because, despite our daily disagreements, he adored me and was serious about settling down soon.

Target: I must have seemed cruel to him because, despite our daily disagreements, he adored me and was serious about settling down soon.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: I must say that not all of them are veru easy to work with.

Target: I must say that not all of them are very easy to work with.


Source: Fix grammar errors: The things some of them wanted, unbelievable!Luckily, I had some other students helping me find all the curious things for the famous.

Target: The things some of them wanted: unbelievable! Luckily, I had some other students helping me find all the curious things for the famous.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: Despite all the hard work I had to do, I would not have to think twice if they ask me to do it again.

Target: Despite all the hard work I had to do, I would not have to think twice if they asked me to do it again.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: Not to say that now I have some good connections in the world of the rich and famous!

Target: Not to mention that now I have some good connections in the world of the rich and famous!


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: Some assert that genetically modified technology can be applied to address this problem.

Target: Some assert that genetically modified food technology could be applied to address this problem.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: This essay will argue that genetically modified food can be the way out of the problem of food deficit and this will be done by focusing on its environmental benefits and increasing food yield.

Target: This essay will argue that genetically modified food could be the way out of the problem of food deficit, and this will be done by focusing on its environmental benefits and increased food yield.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: This reduction in the application of chemical materials can create a safer agricultural environment, ensuring food safety.

Target: This reduction in the application of chemical products can create a safer agricultural environment, ensuring food safety.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: Due to the various new traits resulting from the GM technology, such as drought tolerance and salinity tolerance, GM food can ensure the food production in the period of drought.

Target: Due to the various new traits resulting from GM technology, such as drought tolerance and salinity tolerance, GM food can ensure food production in a period of drought.


Source: Fix grammar errors: In views of this, it is reasonable to believe that GM food might be an ideal strategy to alleviate the problem of food shortage.

Target: In view of this, it is reasonable to believe that GM food might be an ideal strategy to alleviate the problem of food shortages.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: However, because there are some disadvantages in GM technology which is being developed, it is also recommended that governments should give more importance to the management of GM food.

Target: However, because there are some disadvantages to the GM technology which is being developed, it is also recommended that governments should give more importance to the management of GM food.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: The student didn't have the courage to interrupt his teacher and give him such a strong pain and disillusion: he slunk away while the old professor was still speaking enthusiastically to nobody.

Target: The student didn't have the courage to interrupt his teacher and give him such sharp pain and disillusioned him: he slunk away while the old professor was still speaking enthusiastically to nobody.


Source: Fix grammar: On 3th March 2014, a survey was conducted among 60 students.

Target: On 3rd March 2014, a survey was conducted among 60 students.


Source: Make the sentence fluent: The purpose of the survey was to discover popular leisure time activities of male and female students.

Target: The purpose of the survey was to discover the popular leisure time activities of male and female students.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: It has been found in the first section that a large percentage of the male respondents preferred to stay at home on holidays, while 90% of the female students would like to go to the seaside.

Target: It has been found in the first section that a large percentage of the male respondents preferred to stay at home on holidays, while 90% of the female students like to go to the seaside.


Source: Fix grammaticality: In the second section both the girls and the boys interrogated claimed that they don't spend their free time going to the theatre or the opera.

Target: In the second section, both the girls and the boys questioned claimed that they don't spend their free time going to the theatre or the opera.


Source: Fix grammar errors: Like the male respondents the girls interrogated go regularly to the cinema.

Target: Like the male respondents, the girls questioned go to the cinema regularly.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: For instance, 47% of the female respondents watch films on a big screen every week.

Target: For instance, 47% of the female respondents watch films on the big screen every week.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: 40% of the girls read books several hours a day, while 13% of the male students don't read in their free time at all.

Target: 40% of the girls read books for several hours a day, while 13% of the male students don't read in their free time at all.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: If any conclusions may be drawn from the data, they are as follows.

Target: If any conclusions can be drawn from the data, they are as follows.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: According to the findings, it is clear that nowadays going to nightclubs and cinemas are more popular than going to theatres and operas or visiting historical places.

Target: According to the findings, it is clear that, nowadays, going to nightclubs and cinemas is more popular than going to theatres and operas or visiting historical places.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: Please accept our dearest apologies; it was the least of our intentions to offend you with our release letter, which is a standard format authorized by our legal department.

Target: Please accept our sincere apologies; it was the least of our intentions to offend you with our release letter, which is a standard format authorized by our legal department.


Source: Fix grammar: Of course you can share your opinions and experiences about your stay wherever and with whoever you wish.

Target: Of course, you can share your opinions and experiences about your stay wherever and with whomever you wish.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: There has never been any intention of hiding the truth as you said.

Target: There has never been any intention of hiding the truth, as you said.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: We do know that the incident might have caused some inconveniences, but the most important thing is that none of our guests or staff was injured.

Target: We do know that the incident might have caused some inconvenience, but the most important thing is that none of our guests or staff were injured.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: We hope that our explanations and apologies will make you change your mind and that you give us another chance in the future to provide you with a much more delightful experience.

Target: We hope that our explanations and apologies will make you change your mind and that you will give us another chance in the future to provide you with a much more delightful experience.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: In my opinion many people depend on public transport to get to their place of work, university or school.

Target: In my opinion, many people depend on public transport to get to their place of work, university, or school.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: If you compare the price of petrol with the price of a bus ticket you can clearly see how much better it is to travel by bus.

Target: If you compare the price of petrol with the price of a bus ticket, you can clearly see how much better it is to travel by bus.


Source: Make the sentence fluent: However, I must agree that travelling by car can give you more freedomn, you can carry your shopping and pick up other people on the way.

Target: However, I must agree that traveling by car can give you more freedom; you can carry your shopping and pick up other people on the way.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: But despite all this there will always be people without a car who needs to commute every day so there is a long future for public transport.

Target: But despite all this, there will always be people without a car who need to commute every day, so there is a long future for public transport.


Source: Fix grammaticality: As long as people keep accepting this technology for communication, social media sites will also keep proceeding to the next step and affecting the society.

Target: As long as people keep accepting this technology for communication, social media sites will also keep proceeding to the next step and affecting society.


Source: Fix grammar errors: In terms of the communication society, they will possibly change the way in which people develop relationship with each other, and consequently, they will create two types of culture: communal and agentic.

Target: In terms of communication society, they will possibly change the way in which people develop relationships with each other, and consequently, they will create two types of culture: communal and agentic.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: These types of culture will oppositely exist in the future as an effect of social media sites.

Target: These types of culture will exist in opposition in the future as an effect of social media sites.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: It might be such a frustrating sensation that you couldn't want to go back again.

Target: It might be such a frustrating sensation that you might not want to go back again.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: This article deal with the benefits and drawbacks, if there are any, of learning another language.

Target: This article deals with the benefits and drawbacks, if there are any, of learning another language.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: This could be a drawback because not all the people are up to the task.

Target: This could be a drawback because not all people are up to the task.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: They are also the reason for many problems, which appear in private lives of some celebrities.

Target: They are also the reason for many problems which arise in the private lives of some celebrities.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: Everything that goes on in the famous person's life, including births, deaths, illness and divorces is fodder for the tabloids.

Target: Everything that goes on in a famous person's life, including births, deaths, illness, and divorces, is fodder for the tabloids.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: If the individual stumbles, whether figuratively or literally, speculation about him will end up on TV, on the Internet or the front page of the tabloids.

Target: If the individual stumbles, whether figuratively or literally, speculation about him will end up on TV, on the Internet, or on the front page of the tabloids.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: They think that due to scandals they will be able to get fame, live in the lap of luxury and have a lot of money.

Target: They think that, due to scandals, they will be able to get fame, live in the lap of luxury, and have a lot of money.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: On the other hand, not everybody prefers to reveal the secrets of the private life.

Target: On the other hand, not everybody wants to reveal the secrets of their private life.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: For these kinds of people it is important not to bring out family scenes and problems, as they don't want to be disputed in public.

Target: For these kinds of people, it is important not to bring out family scenes and problems, as they don't want to be discussed in public.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: When you clock out at work, no one has the right to make you keep working.

Target: When you clock off at work, no one has the right to make you keep working.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: I'm writing to tell you about my experience I gained during preparations for the last concert.

Target: I'm writing to tell you about the experience I gained during preparations for the last concert.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: Nowadays, anyone can take a photo from the web and assume it's theirs.

Target: Nowadays, anyone can take a photo from the web and claim it's theirs.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: The Soviet Union collapse has become one of the defining events in the world's history.

Target: The collapse of the Soviet Union has become one of the defining events in the world's history.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: It influenced the further development of post-Soviet countries as well geopolitical situation in the whole world.

Target: It influenced the further development of post-Soviet countries as well as the geopolitical situation in the whole world.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: It has also influenced the international relations not just within post-Soviet area, but also in the entire world, as the period after the collapse of the USSR was marked as crash of bipolar structure of international relations.

Target: It has also influenced international relations not just within the post-Soviet area but also in the entire world, as the period after the collapse of the USSR was marked by a crash of bipolar structure in international relations.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: So long as for fifty years the world lived under the shadow of the Cold War, fearing a fatal confrontation between the US and the Soviet Union, the dissolution of the USSR had a huge resonance not only in the US mass-media but also in the American society.

Target: Since for fifty years, the world lived under the shadow of the Cold War, fearing a fatal confrontation between the US and the Soviet Union, the dissolution of the USSR had a huge resonance not only in the US mass media but also in American society.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: On the August 20, "New York Times" published the article which contained the excerpts from the news conference held by Acting President Gennadiy Yanayev and four other members of the State Committee for the State of Emergency.

Target: On August 20, the "New York Times" published an article that contained excerpts from the news conference held by Acting President Gennadiy Yanayev and four other members of the State Committee for the State of Emergency.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: The buried secrets of past regimes and the foibles of the present one were exposed to public scrutiny by a press "-the New York Times wrote.

Target: The buried secrets of past regimes and the foibles of the present one were exposed to public scrutiny by the press, "-the New York Times wrote.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: The plotters have immediately encountered strong opposition from the leadership of the RSFSR leaders under the guidance of President Boris Yeltsin.

Target: The plotters immediately encountered strong opposition from the leadership of the RSFSR leaders under the guidance of President Boris Yeltsin.


Source: Fix grammar: Boris Yeltsin has gained international acclaim when he occupied the Russian White House and faced down the threats of the coup's leaders.

Target: Boris Yeltsin gained international acclaim when he occupied the Russian White House and faced the threats of the coup's leaders.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: The author lays the stress on the democratic processes in the country which have acquired broad and irreversible character.

Target: The author lays the stress on the democratic processes in the country, which acquired a broad and irreversible character.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: Also it shows the disposition of the soviet people towards the changes in the country. "

Target: Also, it shows the attitude of the soviet people towards the changes in the country. "


Source: Fix grammatical errors: This coup had a big resonance among the American society; consequently the US mass-media were eager to know the feelings of the US citizens about the situation in the Soviet Union.

Target: This coup had great resonance among American society; consequently, the US mass media were eager to know the feelings of US citizens about the situation in the Soviet Union.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: The reduction of Gorbachov's role and the growth of the Yeltsin's haven't been out of the attention in the US media sources.

Target: The reduction of Gorbachov's role and the growth of Yeltsin's were not out of the attention in US media sources.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Russian President Boris Yeltsin proposed a radical restructuring of the Soviet Union that would minimize the role of Mikhail Gorbachev and reduce the USSR to a loose confederation of nine republics. "

Target: The Russian President, Boris Yeltsin, proposed a radical restructuring of the Soviet Union that would minimize the role of Mikhail Gorbachev and reduce the USSR to a loose confederation of nine republics. "


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: The Communist Party, which has had control for 74 years, is rapidly dissolving-the Chicago Tribune wrote.

Target: The Communist Party, which has had control for 74 years, is rapidly dissolving ", the Chicago Tribune wrote.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: In the Washington Post the editorial remarks that the failure of the Moscow coup has finally broke the influence of the Communist Party over the power structures and the world outlook of Soviet people.

Target: In the Washington Post, the editorial remarks that the failure of the Moscow coup finally broke the influence of the Communist Party over the power structures and the world outlook of the Soviet people.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: The official collapse of the Soviet Union has occurred in December 1991.

Target: The official collapse of the Soviet Union occurred in December 1991.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: As requested I interviewed a large number of young people, trying to understand their main interests, especially as regards music, TV programmes and clothes.

Target: As requested, I interviewed a large number of young people, trying to understand their main interests, especially as regards music, TV programs, and clothes.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: Many people aged between fourteen and eighteen said that the most listened music among teenagers is definitely rock music.

Target: Many people aged between fourteen and eighteen said that the most listened-to music among teenagers is definitely rock music.


Source: Fix grammaticality: However, the realisation of English as a world language would certainly need an educational basis for everyone which might not be easy to accomplish but it would be possible.

Target: However, the realization of English as a world language would certainly need an educational basis for everyone, which might not be easy to accomplish, but it would be possible.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: While teaching everyone English it would also be profitable to instruct basic knowledge in mathematics, physics or other relevant topics which might be helpful.

Target: While teaching everyone English, it would also be profitable to teach basic knowledge of mathematics, physics, or other relevant topics which might be helpful.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: Such a standardised educational system for every single person on the world would therefore not only benefit the communication or existing businesses but also help third-world countries to start companies, trade and industrialise their countries so they can take care of themselves and emerge out of poverty.

Target: Such a standardized educational system for every single person in the world would, therefore, not only benefit communication or existing businesses but also help third-world countries to start companies, trade, and industrialize their countries so they can take care of themselves and get out of poverty.


Source: Fix grammar errors: In addition, civil wars or catastrophes like the Arab spring might also be avoided since there will be an educational standard which could teach different ways of political leadership.

Target: In addition, civil wars or catastrophes like the Arab spring might also be avoided since there will be an educational standard that could teach different types of political leadership.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: On the one hand there would be a great loss of cultures and in some cases the implementation of the educational system might be impossible, for instance the aboriginal people.

Target: On the one hand, there would be a great loss of culture, and in some cases, the implementation of the educational system might be impossible, for instance, with the aboriginal people.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: Is it really that the end of public transport is soon to come?

Target: Is it really possible that the end of public transport is soon to come?


Source: Improve the grammaticality: Yes, they are right in saying so and in fact, many people are second-hand car owners.

Target: Yes, they are right in saying so, and, in fact, many people are second-hand car owners.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: The cost of having a car is hence not as cheap as we think if we also take into account those avoidable extra cost.

Target: The cost of having a car is hence not as cheap as we think if we also take into account those unavoidable extra costs.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: From the reasons mentioned above, it is obvious that the doomsday of public transport is definitely not something down the line.

Target: For the reasons mentioned above, it is obvious that the doomsday of public transport is definitely not something down the line.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Simply by thinking of a specific location, we can go there in a split second.

Target: Simply by thinking of a specific location, we could go there in a split second.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: There's not much work you have to do on a normal day, but maybe this will be a special one, because of the match between Celta and Real Madrid that is going to be celebrated half a kilometre away.

Target: There's not much work you have to do on a normal day, but maybe this will be a special one, because of the match between Celta and Real Madrid that is going to be held half a kilometer away.


Source: Fix errors in this text: If there is any problem with the cash registrer (very common, actually), you have a phone number under it of a good technician.

Target: If there is any problem with the cash register (very common, actually), you have a phone number under it of a good technician.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Write back soon and let me know if you have any concern.

Target: Write back soon and let me know if you have any concerns.


Source: Fix grammar: However, it is one of the most motivating challenge in our lives.

Target: However, it is one of the most motivating challenges in our lives.


Source: Make the sentence fluent: They are in constant adaptation to new events or personal experiences.

Target: We are in constant adaptation to new events or personal experiences.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: For example, a close relationship or a serious illness make us look at the world around us through different eyes, and also they let us grow into more interesting and nicer human beings.

Target: For example, a close relationship or a serious illness makes us look at the world around us through different eyes, and they also let us grow into more interesting and nicer human beings.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: Even so, change can be perceived as a disturbing question due to the fact that it provokes a strong feeling of uncertainty.

Target: Even so, change can be perceived as a disturbing issue due to the fact that it provokes a strong feeling of uncertainty.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: In short, I consider that change is always the best way to develop our personality to become better people in any aspect of our lives because it represents a major challenge.

Target: In short, I consider that change is always the best way to develop our personality and to become better people in any aspect of our lives because it represents a major challenge.


Source: Fix grammaticality: Are you ok?

Target: Are you OK?


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: Classes are being held much more interactive than in the previous years, and also subjects are supposed to prepare pupils for adult life.

Target: Classes are being held much more interactively than in previous years, and also subjects are supposed to prepare pupils for adult life.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: In the following essay I want to discuss the most useful skills which should be taught in school from an early age on.

Target: In the following essay, I want to discuss the most useful skills which should be taught in school from an early age on.


Source: Fix grammar errors: However, there's still a more important area to have a good knowledge about-personal finance.

Target: However, there's still a more important area to have a good knowledge of personal finance.


Source: Fix grammaticality: To conclude, there are a lot of things worth considering to teach in school.

Target: To conclude, there are a lot of things worth considering teaching in school.


Source: Fix grammaticality: As a free lance, he has to invest in his ideas, hoping that someone will like his stories and buy them.

Target: As a freelancer, he has to invest in his ideas, hoping that someone will like his stories and buy them.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: A few months ago month he had been spending two weeks in Brussels.

Target: A few months ago, he had been spending two weeks in Brussels.


Source: Fix grammaticality: Access to sevreal public transport services (such as underground, buses, tram, etc.)

Target: Access to different public transport services (such as underground, buses, tram, etc.)


Source: Make the sentence fluent: let him reach his working meeting always on time.

Target: let him always reach his working meeting on time.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: He also had the chance to know more about the diverse atmosphere characterizing each and every Brussels' suburb.

Target: He also had the chance to know more about the diverse atmosphere characterizing each and every Brussels suburb.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: He was able to reach the South by a connection flight from Rome.

Target: He was able to reach the South by a connecting flight from Rome.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: It was spring, the prefect time to go and visit South of Italy.

Target: It was spring, the perfect time to go and visit the South of Italy.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: Nevertheless, his stay was not as pleasant as he had thought.

Target: Nevertheless, his stay was not as pleasant as he had expected.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: Jake's main challenge was to move around and reach the places he had planned to visit both for his research and for tourist purposes.

Target: Jake's main challenge was to get around and reach the places he had planned to visit both for his research and for tourist purposes.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: Stress-it makes your life easier since you avoid driving in the middle of traffic jam

Target: Stress-it makes your life easier since you avoid driving in the middle of traffic jams


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: Although, I have been struck by its major draws such as Plaza De Espana, Real Alcazar and El Torre del Oro, this is the relaxed and social way of living which has most impressed me.

Target: Although I have been struck by its major attractions, such as Plaza De Espana, Real Alcazar, and El Torre del Oro, it is the relaxed and social way of living which has most impressed me.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Consequently, what are the reasons of my change of heart?

Target: Consequently, what are the reasons for my change of heart?


Source: Grammar improvements: Luckily, this has not been the case so when it comes to Seville.

Target: Luckily, this has not been the case when it comes to Seville.


Source: Fix errors in this text: What's more, Seville is bright, colourful and lively which cheers me up and relaxes me.

Target: What's more, Seville is bright, colorful, and lively, which cheers me up and relaxes me.


Source: Fix grammar errors: In addition to this, I really like sharing tapas dishes with people, drinking a good fresh "draft beer" and going for a "tapas crawl" with friends as in Switzerland each one gets its own dish when eating out and only go for a "pub crawl".

Target: In addition to this, I really like sharing tapas dishes with people, drinking a good fresh "draft beer" and going for a "tapas crawl" with friends, as in Switzerland each person gets their own dish when eating out and they only go for a "pub crawl."


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: Thus, scouring Seville is like rewinding the time and being propelled in the past.

Target: Thus, scouring Seville is like rewinding time and being propelled into the past.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: It turns out to be now a very welcoming and relaxing place where warm-hearted people live and where I greatly enjoy spending some time.

Target: It turns out now to be a very welcoming and relaxing place where warm-hearted people live and where I greatly enjoy spending some time.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: Switzerland is a small country also take your time and spend enough time in each place.

Target: Switzerland is a small country, so take your time and spend enough time in each place.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: But if you prefer to work during a full three-month period, you should ask your employer a work permit.

Target: But if you prefer to work for a full three-month period, you should ask your employer for a work permit.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: Five more minutes went by, and he decided to get into the bungalow.

Target: Five more minutes went by, and he decided to go into the bungalow.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: This show is particularly good as it represents how people from different ethnic backgrounds can engage with each other.

Target: This show is particularly good, as it represents how people from different ethnic backgrounds can engage with each other.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: Although this soap involves a lot of cheating and plotting between characters, it also shows the importance of family values. I would definitely recommend this drama serial to other people.

Target: Although this soap involves a lot of cheating and plotting between characters, it also shows the importance of family values. I would definitely recommend this drama series to other people.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: It is important to gain awareness about different societies due to the fact that Britain is becoming such a multicultural society.

Target: It is important to gain awareness about different cultures due to the fact that Britain is becoming such a multicultural society.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: I am writing to complain about the suggested bar on smoking in public areas.

Target: I am writing to complain about the suggested ban on smoking in public areas.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: To support my argument against this proposal I would like to explain what happened when the authorities attempted to introduce a ban on smoking in my home town.

Target: To support my argument against this proposal, I would like to explain what happened when the authorities attempted to introduce a ban on smoking in my home town.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: In my opinion, introducing specific non-smoking areas in this type of establishments could be an excellent idea.

Target: In my opinion, introducing specific non-smoking areas in this type of establishment could be an excellent idea.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: It's not easy for me to talk about myself, but I'll give my best.

Target: It's not easy for me to talk about myself, but I'll do my best.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Before moving to Augsburg, I studied biology for two semesters in Erlangen, but soon noticed that it wasn't the right subject of study for me.

Target: Before moving to Augsburg, I studied biology for two semesters in Erlangen but soon realized that it wasn't the right subject of study for me.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: I am a 23-year-old student in a Sports Science degree, so I am interested in sports.

Target: I am a 23-year-old student doing a Sports Science degree, so I am interested in sports.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: I have no problem in being hired for three months because I do not go to the university in Summer.

Target: I have no problem with being hired for three months because I do not go to university in the summer.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: It demands physical effort, being and excellent way to keep fit.

Target: It demands physical effort, and being an excellent way to keep fit.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: If you play footbal, you know how to act when in a team.

Target: If you play football, you know how to act when in a team.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: In times of escalators and cars, it is refreshing to find an activity that involves movement, velocity and strenght.

Target: In times of escalators and cars, it is refreshing to find an activity that involves movement, velocity, and strength.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: In fact, it can be argued that the human virtues are a by-product of conflicts and fights; that they are that traces of character that we aknowledge as important for everybody engaged in a competition, be it for a trophy or for a country.

Target: In fact, it can be argued that human virtues are a by-product of conflicts and fights, they are those character traits that we acknowledge as important for everybody engaged in a competition, be it for a trophy or for a country.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: It is a sport that develops no only the body, but also the mind and the heart.

Target: It is a sport that develops not only the body but also the mind and the heart.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: In fact, if football has a downside, it is this, the fact that you need twenty-two people to set a match.

Target: In fact, if football has a downside, it is this fact that you need twenty-two people to set up a match.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: Please, find my CV and Letters of Reference attached.

Target: Please find my CV and Letters of Reference attached.


Source: Fix grammar errors: During my studies I doubled the conversion rate of a London based hotel's website, and improved the effectiveness of their e-mail campaign by 150%.

Target: During my studies, I doubled the conversion rate of a London-based hotel's website and improved the effectiveness of their e-mail campaign by 150%.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: Beyond my academic disciplines, I have consistently taken up some active roles at university and outside school to further develop my interpersonal and leadership skills.

Target: Beyond my academic subjects, I have consistently taken up some active roles at university and outside school to further develop my interpersonal and leadership skills.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: I was trained as a PASS (Peer Assisted Study Session) leader for econometrics to provide some academic support to some younger students at my final year of study at Manchester.

Target: I was trained as a PASS (Peer Assisted Study Session) leader for econometrics to provide some academic support to some younger students during my final year of study at Manchester.


Source: Fix errors in this text: I attended trainings and workshops to learn about the skills to be a good facilitator before the start of the academic year.

Target: I attended training sessions and workshops to learn about the skills to be a good facilitator before the start of the academic year.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: The regular meetings with my group of students to discuss their questions on econometrics have developed my empathy which is a crucial skill of being a leader.

Target: The regular meetings with my group of students to discuss their questions on econometrics have developed my empathy, which is a crucial skill for being a leader.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: Besides, I have undertaken an internship at the HSBC Risk in order to gain an insight into the banking industry and learn how to work with my peers in a business environment.

Target: In addition, I have undertaken an internship at HSBC Risk in order to gain insight into the banking industry and learn how to work with my peers in a business environment.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: In the next following days, we mostly had bread and sandwiches for our meals.

Target: In the following days, we mostly had bread and sandwiches for our meals.


Source: Grammar improvements: Even though I was in a romantic city, I couldn't enjoy my vacation in a romantic way due to the low budgets we had.

Target: Even though I was in a romantic city, I couldn't enjoy my vacation in a romantic way due to the low budget we had.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: When I am there, I would start my day by calling room service for a wonderful breakfast in bed.

Target: When I was there, I would start my day by calling room service for a wonderful breakfast in bed.


Source: Fix grammaticality: As the day goes on, I would also go swimming in the deep blue sea, go snorkeling or just lie on the beach.

Target: As the day went on, I would also go swimming in the deep blue sea, go snorkeling or just lie on the beach.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: This is the kind of dream vacation I want so bad.

Target: This is the kind of dream vacation I want so badly.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: There are always the differences between a real vacation and a dream vacation.

Target: There are always differences between a real vacation and a dream vacation.


Source: Fix grammaticality: Once I have enough money, I will have my dream vacations come true.

Target: Once I have enough money, I will make my dream vacations come true.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: When I finished the high school, I started working as accountant in my father's carpentry.

Target: When I finished high school, I started working as an accountant in my father's carpentry business.


Source: Fix grammaticality: At the beginning it was really difficult to me because I was a little shy with customers and I wasn't used to working among noisy machinery and shouting workers, but after a while time I learned to ignore all of that!

Target: In the beginning, it was really difficult for me because I was a little shy with customers and I wasn't used to working with noisy machinery and shouting workers, but after a while, I learned to ignore all of that!


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: Five years have passed and I'm still working for this company which has given me a lot and I've been learning many things about accounting.

Target: Five years have passed, and I'm still working for this company, which has given me a lot, and I've been learning many things about accounting.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Last but not least I'm a great fashion expert because I work near the shopping streets!

Target: Last but not least, I'm a great fashion expert because I work near the shopping streets!


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Dear sir/madam,

Target: Dear Sir/Madam,


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: I would like to apply for the job which includes working in summer camps all over the USA.

Target: I would like to apply for the job which involves working in summer camps all over the USA.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: Social Media such as Twitter, Facebook, Youtube and blogs illustrate surely that the definition or repercussion of digital technologies is created through the forms in which they are worn and the social relations and associations that expand around them.

Target: Social Media such as Twitter, Facebook, YouTube, and blogs illustrate clearly that the definition or influence of digital technologies is created through the forms in which they are used and the social relations and associations that expand around them.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: This essay will discuss the implications of social media for everyday life, emphasizing the problems which arose with the use of Facebook and Twitter.

Target: This essay will discuss the implications of social media for everyday life, emphasizing the problems which have arisen from the use of Facebook and Twitter.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: Finally it will look into possible future implications of this kind of technoogy.

Target: Finally, it will look into possible future implications of this kind of technology.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: Namen and Kinnison (2012) indicates that "the three types of social interactions that social networking enables include (1) creaction of an online identity, (2) establishment of relationships between users, and (3) development of layered communities defined by the lists of connections each user establishes".

Target: Namen and Kinnison (2012) indicate that "the three types of social interactions that social networking enables include (1) creation of an online identity, (2) establishment of relationships between users, and (3) development of layered communities defined by the lists of connections each user establishes".


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Additionally, a politician from Philadelphia, USA was elected after take advantage of his Twitter account appropriately during his campaign.

Target: Additionally, a politician from Philadelphia, USA, was elected after taking advantage of his Twitter account appropriately during his campaign.


Source: Fix grammar: We discussed about some sexist ideas that I don't agree with what the society demands on people and I noticed a little sexism of him, but I was fine with that because That can happen, but due to my profession he couldn't be like that for so long because I was in a man's shoes.

Target: We discussed some sexist ideas that I don't agree with about what society demands of people, and I noticed a little sexism in him, but I was fine with that because that can happen. But due to my profession, he couldn't be like that for so long because I was in a man's shoes.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: I learned a man says anything just to shut you up and not discuss just to have some love moments.

Target: I learned a man says anything just to shut you up and not discuss things, just to have some love moments.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: I also learned that men think in a different way from the women during the day.

Target: I also learned that men think in a different way from women during the day.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: But in my opinion this should be an excuse to think something that women shouldn't know anything about.

Target: But, in my opinion, this should be an excuse to think something that women shouldn't know anything about.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: They teach the same things over and over again and do not rethink if those beliefs and actions are really right to help the world change and be a better world for everyone.

Target: They teach the same things over and over again and do not rethink whether those beliefs and actions are really right to help the world change and be a better world for everyone.


Source: Fix errors in this text: Princess Sophie grew up, she was so unhappy because she couldn't do anything, she was condemned to live in a room of the castle until someone could find the cure for her cursed.

Target: Princess Sophie grew up; she was so unhappy because she couldn't do anything; she was condemned to live in a room of the castle until someone could find the cure for her curse.


Source: Fix grammaticality: I am Michael.

Target: I am Michael. "


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: The princess was a little scared of talking to someone she didn't know, because she never got to talk to anyone before, but still she answer him with a big smile-You are excused, my name is Sophie.- It truly was love at first sight.

Target: The princess was a little scared of talking to someone she didn't know because she had never got to talk to anyone before, but still, she answered him with a big smile. "You are excused, my name is Sophie." It truly was love at first sight.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: Michael closed the door and knew at that moment he has made a mistake.

Target: Michael closed the door and knew at that moment he had made a mistake.


Source: Fix grammar: One of the latest film I have seen is Silver Linings Playbook, played by Bradley Cooper and Jennifer Lawrence.

Target: One of the latest films I have seen is Silver Linings Playbook, played by Bradley Cooper and Jennifer Lawrence.


Source: Grammar improvements: It's a comedy with romantic features and at the same time very realistic.

Target: It's a comedy with romantic features and, at the same time, very realistic.


Source: Fix grammar errors: They meet by chance and started a tortuous relationship as friends.

Target: They meet by chance and start a tortuous relationship as friends.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: I personally think that the film transmit an interesting view of the psychiatric illnesses and the importance of the family in this type of problems.

Target: I personally think that the film shows an interesting view of psychiatric illnesses and the importance of the family in this type of problem.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Most teens tend to create their unique style, often managing to start a fashion of their own.

Target: Most teens tend to create their own unique style, often managing to start a fashion of their own.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: This information can help the organizers of next year's festival in choosing appropriate music and catering to a variety of tastes.

Target: This information could help the organizers of next year's festival in choosing appropriate music and catering to a variety of tastes.


Source: Fix grammar errors: My friend Peter recently told me that he was moving out from his flat, so I asked him if he was willing to rent it.

Target: My friend Peter recently told me that he was moving out of his flat, so I asked him if he was willing to rent it.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Furthermore you will increase the course fee by 15% from next month.

Target: Furthermore, you will increase the course fee by 15% from next month.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: In the future, you do not provide the Japanese course at convenient time.

Target: In the future, you do not provide the Japanese course at a convenient time.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: I am very sorry but I cannot accept this!

Target: I am very sorry, but I cannot accept this!


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: It's about the story of a little boy that is haunted by a big secret, he is visited by ghosts.

Target: It's about the story of a little boy that is haunted by a big secret; he is visited by ghosts.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: The boy soon becomes friends with the psychologist, and he started noticing plenty of things about this exceptional boy.

Target: The boy soon becomes friends with the psychologist, and he starts noticing plenty of things about this exceptional boy.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: I found this movie both exciting and emocional, both thumbs up for me!

Target: I found this movie both exciting and emotional. Both thumbs up for me!


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: As the secretary of the English Language club i am writing to propose that our club be given funding for the coming year.

Target: As the secretary of the English Language Club, I am writing to propose that our club be given funding for the coming year.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: We also believe the college benefits from our Club.

Target: We also believe the college benefits from our club.


Source: Fix grammaticality: We hope you will be ablte to take all thisinto account and will find it possible to help us continue and improve our club by funding us.

Target: We hope you will be able to take all this into account and will find it possible to help us continue and improve our club by funding us.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: Shopping centres are located in the city centres, so every road trip lasts ages (I live in a suburb). Thusly, when I get to the mall, I am already bent out of shape.

Target: Shopping centers are located in the city centers, so every road trip lasts ages (I live in a suburb). Thus, when I get to the mall, I am already bent out of shape.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: Afterwards the crowd of people is ramming me, when I'm trying to walk.

Target: Afterward, the crowd of people is ramming me when I'm trying to walk.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: People don't want to to contemplate Christ's suffering, but they want to move directly to the cheerful part of Easter celebration, so to Easter Sunday.

Target: People don't want to contemplate Christ's suffering, but they want to move directly to the cheerful part of the Easter celebration, so to Easter Sunday.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: 3. L'Oreal slogan "Because you're worth it" proves the author's thinking that we are unwilling to sacrifice ourselves.

Target: 3. The L'Oreal slogan "Because you're worth it" proves the author's thinking that we are unwilling to sacrifice ourselves.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: In a consumptive lifestyle we want more and more for ourselves, but not for other people, because it will require self-sacrifice.

Target: In a consumer lifestyle, we want more and more for ourselves but not for other people because it will require self-sacrifice.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: But this was not the case, time continued to pass by, ever so slowly, making Peter even more nervous.

Target: But this was not the case; time continued to pass by ever so slowly, making Peter even more agitated.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: He stopped at a great big building knowing that the fastest way to get to the top floor of the building was by taking the elevator, but what if the elevator stopped?

Target: He stopped at a great big building, knowing that the fastest way to get to the top floor of the building was by taking the elevator, but what if the elevator stopped?


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: He decided to take the stairs and so he did.

Target: He decided to take the stairs, and so he did.


Source: Grammar improvements: It is clear that most of them use computers and watch television almost every day, but while they are doing this they are sitting in a comfortable sofa.

Target: It is clear that most of them use computers and watch television almost every day, but while they are doing this, they are sitting on a comfortable sofa.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: In the market, you can find a wide range of computer games or video games to keep fit, such as dancing to the rhythm of last hits, playing tennis, doing aerobics, running...

Target: On the market, you can find a wide range of computer games or video games to keep fit, such as dancing to the rhythm of the latest hits, playing tennis, doing aerobics, running...


Source: Fix grammar errors: It seems to me that school programmes would make young people be encouraged to keep fit because in this way, they do their favourite sport in a routine way.

Target: It seems to me that school programs would make young people be encouraged to keep fit because, in this way, they do their favorite sport in a routine way.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Back in the time, when I successfully passed the third grade, my parents decided to let me pick the present that I want as a reward.

Target: Back in the time, when I successfully passed the third grade, my parents decided to let me pick the present that I wanted as a reward.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: I ran to the outdoor toys section and I picked the skate I liked.

Target: I ran to the outdoor toys section, and I picked the skates I liked.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: While skating was a whim for my friends and me in the beginning, I found myself in it.

Target: While skating was a whim for my friends and me in the beginning, I found myself through it.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: I learned how to jump over many items, such as chairs and the trashcans that my neighbors used to jump over.

Target: I learned how to jump over many things, such as chairs and the trashcans that my neighbors used to jump over.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: We decided to go skating on the next weekend at the park, which has a wide walk path by the sea.

Target: We decided to go skating the next weekend at the park, which has a wide path by the sea.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: When we met on the weekend, I noticed that they were different; they have different skates, and different methods of skating, they slid on edges and skated on the park benches.

Target: When we met on the weekend, I noticed that they were different; they had different skates, and different methods of skating; they slid on the edges and skated on the park benches.


Source: Fix grammaticality: I had to wait for two months to buy a new pair of skates, but this time it is aggressive skates.

Target: I had to wait for two months to buy a new pair of skates, but this time it was aggressive skates.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Once on a weekend, it was my last year in middle school, I was at the park practicing as usual.

Target: Once, on the weekend, it was my last year in middle school; I was at the park practicing as usual.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: I introduced myself, and as I thought, they were vising from a different city.

Target: I introduced myself, and as I thought, they were visiting from a different city.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: They started to put small cones in one line with a bit of space in between.

Target: They started to put small cones in line with a bit of space in between.


Source: Fix grammar: They played some music and started to skate with the rhythm. I was surprised, I had mixed feeling, and it was indescribable.

Target: They played some music and started to skate with the rhythm. I was surprised, I had mixed feelings, and it was indescribable.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: I knew at that moment that I want to change my style of skating.

Target: I knew at that moment that I wanted to change my style of skating.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: However, as the skaters suggested, I bought a pair of hockey skates.

Target: And, as the skaters suggested, I bought a pair of hockey skates.


Source: Make the sentence fluent: I did not have the ability to order the cones online back then, therefore, I went to IKEA, and bought small colored cups and used it as cones.

Target: I did not have the ability to order the cones online back then, so I went to IKEA, bought small colored cups, and used them as cones.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: After couple of hours of trying to get used to my new skates, I put the cups on.

Target: After a couple of hours of trying to get used to my new skates, I put the cups on.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: After almost 3 years of practicing to do tricks, to create a perfect match between my moves and the rhythm of the song I am playing, and to try to reach the perfection, I realized that slalom skating is more like a performing art than a sport.

Target: After almost 3 years of practicing to do tricks, creating a perfect match between my moves and the rhythm of the song I am playing, and trying to reach perfection, I realized that slalom skating is more like a performing art than a sport.


Source: Make the sentence fluent: However, I was not going to give up on skating that easy.

Target: However, I was not going to give up on skating that easily.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: What I learned in 10 years, I had the ability to learn it on ice in one month.

Target: What I learned in 10 years, I had the ability to learn on ice in one month.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Today, After 10 years of skating, I wonder sometimes what my life would be without skating. I believe that skating is a huge part of me, Mohammed, and I am positive that if this part was missing, my path in life would have changed and I will never be the same person I am now.

Target: Today, After 10 years of skating, I sometimes wonder what my life would be without skating. I believe that skating is a huge part of me, Mohammed, and I am positive that if this part was missing, my path in life would have changed, and I would never be the same person I am now.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: Lastly there are sports dedicated malls, which are velocity in Novena, Kallang mall and Queensway mall.

Target: Lastly, there are dedicated sports malls, which are Velocity in Novena, Kallang mall, and Queensway mall.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: I'm kind of person who used to think that every hour had a purpose, who had no time to waste, not even a single hour.

Target: I'm the kind of person who used to think that every hour had a purpose, who had no time to waste, not even a single hour.


Source: Fix grammar: He is the most important to me.

Target: He is the most important thing to me.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: But at the same time advertising has many features in common with art.

Target: But at the same time, advertising has many features in common with art.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: Like art it is intended to evoke emotions and feelings.

Target: Like art, it is intended to evoke emotions and feelings.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: Often people, who are watching a commercial, do not remember what details or elements of other visual art types they have seen before.

Target: Often, people who are watching a commercial do not remember what details or elements of other visual art types they have seen before.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: Someone designed all things around: a chair, shoes, clothes.

Target: Someone designed all the things around us: a chair, shoes, and clothes.


Source: Grammar improvements: Visual advertising like painting uses color, value, space and line.

Target: Visual advertising, like painting uses color, value, space, and line.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Also it uses balance, contrast, emphasis and proportion.

Target: Also, it uses balance, contrast, emphasis, and proportion.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Lastly, advertising like art originated a long time ago.

Target: Lastly, advertising, like art, originated a long time ago.


Source: Fix grammaticality: With the development of mass media, television and Internet advertising has become the strongest form of communication.

Target: With the development of mass media, television, and internet advertising has become the strongest form of communication.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: Now advertising is a big part of modern culture.

Target: Now, advertising is a big part of modern culture.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: On her left hand there was a large steaming cup of coffee that landed on Michael's new shirt when he bumpped into her.

Target: In her left hand, there was a large steaming cup of coffee that landed on Michael's new shirt when he bumped into her.


Source: Fix grammar: One second later, Michael was covered in coffee, burnt and sticky and his mobile phone screen was twinking until it finally turned off with a dying flash.

Target: One second later, Michael was covered in coffee, burnt and sticky, and his mobile phone screen was winking until it finally turned off with a dying flash.


Source: Make the sentence fluent: He screamed, shouted, waved his hands into the air, swore and insulted that stranger until his rage faded away.

Target: He screamed, shouted, waved his hands in the air, swore, and insulted that stranger until his rage faded away.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: In this article a teacher refltcts on his experiences of creating plays and using them to help motivate students to develop their English.

Target: In this article, a teacher reflects on his experiences of creating plays and using them to help motivate students to develop their English.


Source: Fix grammaticality: The author says that the pros far outweigh the cons and it is the main idea of the article.

Target: The author says that the pros far outweigh the cons, and that is the main idea of the article.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: Writing the play: first, you may ask learners to invent profiles and to tell you about their characters; second, learners can write the basic outline of the play or you can adapt a familiar story.

Target: Writing the play: first, you can ask learners to invent profiles and to tell you about their characters; second, learners can write the basic outline of the play, or you can adapt a familiar story.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: Reasons for doing a play: learners will learn whole chunks of language in a clear context and they will learn not only their parts.

Target: Reasons for putting on a play: learners will learn whole chunks of language in a clear context, and they will learn not only their parts.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: In a world of increasing environmental awareness improved public transport represents the way of the future.

Target: In a world of increasing environmental awareness, improved public transport represents the way of the future.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Although people do enjoy the convenience and privacy of travelling in their own private vehicles, in my opinion they may choose public transport if it fulfils certain conditions.

Target: Although people do enjoy the convenience and privacy of traveling in their own private vehicles, in my opinion, they might choose public transport if it fulfils certain conditions.


Source: Fix grammaticality: So far, I have recieved excellent grades in all sabjuects, and I am on course to graduate with distinction at the end of the semester.

Target: So far, I have received excellent grades in all subjects, and I am on course to graduate with distinction at the end of the semester.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: My future career in teaching would be greatly enhance by earning a degree at your university.

Target: My future career in teaching would be greatly enhanced by earning a degree at your university.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: Indeed, some places still need to improve the structures for bikes: sometimes they don't have a lot of bicycle paths.

Target: Indeed, some places still need to improve the structures for bikes: sometimes, they don't have a lot of cycle paths.


Source: Fix grammar: during the concert I was responsible for checking tickets.

Target: During the concert, I was responsible for checking tickets.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: I was working with two people and we were to check two thousand tickets!

Target: I was working with two people, and we had to check two thousand tickets!


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: She swiftly came beside my bed and gave me a letter.

Target: She swiftly came to my bed and gave me a letter.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: I met those boys next Friday and they told me that I had to pass the test initiation.

Target: I met those boys the next Friday, and they told me that I had to pass the initiation test.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: I went into the tiny shop and the shop keeper looked through me.

Target: I went into the tiny shop, and the shopkeeper looked through me.


Source: Fix grammar: The shop keeper nodded and pointed at a grey fridge at the end of the shop.

Target: The shopkeeper nodded and pointed at a grey fridge at the end of the shop.


Source: Fix grammar errors: " Thank you ", I mumbled and went straight to the fridge.

Target: " Thank you, "I mumbled and went straight to the fridge.


Source: Fix grammar: My hands were sweating and the other boys were waiting outside ecstatic.

Target: My hands were sweating, and the other boys were waiting outside, ecstatic.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: I thought it was the perfect moment and at the speed of light I put a whole box of sweets into my old bag.

Target: I thought it was the perfect moment and at the speed of light, I put a whole box of sweets into my old bag.


Source: Fix grammar errors: "Dear me! How can you be so cheeky?" he uttered dismissively taping his feet.

Target: "Dear me! How can you be so cheeky?" he uttered dismissively, tapping his feet.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: After watching this, I returned to my house hoping the man forgives the child.

Target: After watching this, I returned to my house, hoping the man would forgive the child.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: That was the first crime I comited and here I am now, in jail.

Target: That was the first crime I committed, and here I am now, in jail.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: In a few sentences we can get an idea of what it is.

Target: In a few sentences, we can get an idea of what it is.


Source: Fix errors in this text: And we can find different reasons to be interested in this type of events.

Target: And we can find different reasons to be interested in this type of event.


Source: Fix grammar: If you like to bet and you're not used to doing at horse races, maybe you're looking forward to trying to bet on the nose or each way.

Target: If you like to bet and you're not used to doing it at horse races, maybe you're looking forward to trying to bet on the nose or each way.


Source: Make the sentence fluent: And if you love fashion and you have the chance to go to Ascot, you may run into the Queen and greet her, and at the same time enjoy the fabulous view of all those extravagant hats the ladies wear.

Target: And if you love fashion and you have the chance to go to Ascot, you may run into the Queen and greet her, and at the same time enjoy the fabulous sight of all those extravagant hats the ladies wear.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: Meanwhile you can have a good time drinking some bubbly.

Target: Meanwhile, you can have a good time drinking some bubbly.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Today it is fact that there is a target group for mobile banking: people who are living in remote areas of the world.

Target: Today it is a fact that there is a target group for mobile banking: people who are living in remote areas of the world.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: On the one hand there are hardly any banks in these regions, so they don't have access to bank services.

Target: On the one hand, there are hardly any banks in these regions, so they don't have access to bank services.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: But on the other hand the number of mobile phones has risen.

Target: But on the other hand, the number of mobile phones has risen.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: So now the most important factor is that mobile nets are reaching the remotest areas in the world.

Target: So now the most important factor is that mobile networks are reaching the remotest areas in the world.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: Through this many people would have access to mobile banking and in addition to that it makes money available so it can be used in shops.

Target: Through this, many people would have access to mobile banking and, in addition to that, it makes money available so it can be used in shops.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: According to Hannah Dideck the largest potential is that migrants con use mobile banking to send money home.

Target: According to Hannah Dideck, the largest potential is that migrants can use mobile banking to send money home.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: Therefore you don't have any time to relax, which is essential, even from your leisure duties.

Target: Therefore, you don't have any time to relax, which is essential, even from your leisure commitments.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: The same is valid for business life: if employees are available all the time, they take the worries of the daily business with them to their home which means a lot of stress.

Target: The same is valid for business life: if employees are available all the time, they take the worries of the daily business with them to their home, which means a lot of stress.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: However, I personally think that it should not be regarded too critically but should only be handled responsably, according to one's personal needs.

Target: However, I personally think that it should not be regarded too critically but should only be handled responsibly, according to one's personal needs.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: The first 30 years all was going good, but suddenly something bad happened.

Target: The first 30 years, all was going well, but suddenly something bad happened.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: It was such a hot summer that it was impossible to turn off the ventilator and I was a bored child with a laptop. I had signed in on the social network Tuenti and I liked passing all the time chatting.

Target: It was such a hot summer that it was impossible to turn off the ventilator, and I was a bored child with a laptop. I had signed in on the social network, Tuenti, and I liked spending all the time chatting.


Source: Fix grammar errors: He send an e-mail to the tour company explaining his situation and sudden interest in this project.

Target: He sent an e-mail to the tour company explaining his situation and sudden interest in this project.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: They told that it was alright if he was interested in other projects, but he still needed to give the same working performance.

Target: They said that it was alright if he was interested in other projects, but he still needed to give the same working performance.


Source: Make the sentence fluent: The company told Louis that they didn't want to bother him, but that they were interested in investing in this kind of projects, because it was related to the purpose of the company: exploring.

Target: The company told Louis that they didn't want to bother him but that they were interested in investing in this kind of project because it was related to the purpose of the company: exploring.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: The company told Louis that they wanted to compromise in this project and help Louis.

Target: The company told Louis that they wanted to invest in this project and help Louis.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: Later, that same day, Louis went cave diving in the mainland.

Target: Later that same day, Louis went cave diving on the mainland.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: He wanted to conquest as much territory down the sea level as he could.

Target: He wanted to conquer as much territory down the sea level as he could.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: What happens to the rubbish

Target: What happens to the rubbish?


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Although citizens usually obey those rules, in some cases they are completely neglected.

Target: Although citizens usually obey those rules, in some cases, they are completely neglected.


Source: Fix errors in this text: However, people who have bigger houses tend to compost the organic waste and that makes up for the disobedient.

Target: However, people who have bigger houses tend to compost the organic waste, and that makes up for the disobedience.


Source: Grammar improvements: Authorities make sure that rubbish bins are placed in small distances since this is the most common reason why people throw litter on the ground.

Target: Authorities make sure that rubbish bins are placed at short distances apart since this is the most common reason why people throw litter on the ground.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Firstly, a car could carry only 5 people at a time.

Target: Firstly, a car can carry only 5 people at a time.


Source: Fix grammaticality: A bus or an underground wagon can carry from 30 to 100 people at a time.

Target: A bus or an underground train can carry from 30 to 100 people at a time.


Source: Grammar improvements: If a person constantly uses his/her car, he/she shall need to pay for more petrol.

Target: If a person constantly uses his/her car, he/she will need to pay for more petrol.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: Finally, if every person drives his/her own car, pollution shall considerably increase affecting air conditions.

Target: Finally, if every person drives his/her own car, pollution will considerably increase, affecting air conditions.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: I had to stand because we were shifting our house and had just sold almost all of our furniture on OLX.

Target: I had to stand because we were moving house and had just sold almost all of our furniture on OLX.


Source: Fix errors in this text: My mother said that it would be rude to go at that time.

Target: My mother said that it would be rude to go out at that time.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: When I opened my eyes I saw a beautiful chair with orange and green stripes.

Target: When I opened my eyes, I saw a beautiful chair with orange and green stripes.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: Suddenly the chair jerked up and went straight out of the window while I was still sitting on it.

Target: Suddenly, the chair jerked up and went straight out of the window while I was still sitting on it.


Source: Fix grammar errors: It swerved beautifully avoiding a tree and landed on the ground as softly as a butterfly.

Target: It swerved, beautifully avoiding a tree, and landed on the ground as softly as a butterfly.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: It would certainly be counterproductive and a waste of time if the time would be spent doing nothing and just passing the time like it were a long vacation, but if it is used to make new experiences, a year off can change the future of a person.

Target: It would certainly be counterproductive and a waste of time if the time is spent doing nothing and just passing the time as if it were a long vacation, but if it is used to have new experiences, a year off can change the future of a person.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Or maybe during the year off somebody could also decide that they don't want to continue their studies, because they already found what they want to do or be.

Target: Or maybe, during the year off, somebody could also decide that they don't want to continue their studies because they have already found what they want to do or be.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Sale promotion, which is the set of marketing activities undertaken to boost sales of the product or service, has become a vital tool for marketing and its importance has been increasing significantly over the years.

Target: Sales promotion, which is the set of marketing activities undertaken to boost sales of a product or service, has become a vital tool for marketing, and its importance has been increasing significantly over the years.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: The aim of this presentation will be to analyse the aims and approaches of sales promotion as well as to evaluate both benefits and drawbacks sales promotions provide.

Target: The aim of this presentation will be to analyze the aims and approaches of sales promotion as well as to evaluate both the benefits and the drawbacks sales promotions provide.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: Then the presentation will focus on a specific case study------the utilization of Flybuys loyal reward program.

Target: Then the presentation will focus on a specific case study------the utilization of Flybuys loyalty reward program.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: I am writing in order to apply for the position of a volunteer in a summer camp in the USA as written in the advertisement.

Target: I am writing in order to apply for the position of volunteer in a summer camp in the USA as written in the advertisement.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: This summer I would like to come to one of your camps around the USA.

Target: This summer I would like to come to one of your camps in the USA.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: All of this abilities make me think I'm the perfect man for your job.

Target: All of these abilities make me think I'm the perfect man for your job.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: With any new course, there are some certain expectations one will have.

Target: With any new course, there are certain expectations one will have.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: By attending the first three lectures, I soon realized that my general concept about mechanical design is quite simple as my thoughts about mechanical design is purely just creating new products.

Target: By attending the first three lectures, I soon realized that my general concept of the mechanical design is quite simple, as my thoughts about mechanical design are purely just creating new products.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: This is because despite having experience in industrial design, I was never taking part in the design process from the initial stage.

Target: This is because, despite having experience in industrial design, I never took part in the design process from the initial stage.