Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: If countries are to increase their public spending on the aged further, it may cause the proportion of public spending to be spent on other important areas, such as infrastructure and education, to be even lesser.

Target: If countries are to increase their public spending on the aged further, it may cause the proportion of public spending to be spent on other important areas, such as infrastructure and education, to be lessened.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: However, when public spending on the aged is not limited and allowed to be raised continuously, everyone in the country is going to suffer in long term.

Target: However, when public spending on the aged is not limited and allowed to be raised continuously, everyone in the country is going to suffer in the long run.


Source: Fix grammar errors: By investing more money in these areas, a country may generate higher return and has higher GDP growth.

Target: By investing more money in these areas, a country may generate a higher return and has a higher GDP growth.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Even though this trend would most likely affect Singapore negatively, the government must not only concern themselves with the increasing expenditures on the aged and try to divert the budget for the aged to other areas of development.

Target: Even though this trend would most likely affect Singapore negatively, the government must concern themselves with not only the increasing expenditures on the aged but also try to divert the budget for the aged to other areas of development.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: The limited public spending will increase financial burden for working population in Singapore.

Target: The limited public spending will increase the financial burden on the working population in Singapore.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: On top of the increasing cost of living, the younger generations have to bear this high expense of taking care of the elderly.

Target: On top of the increasing cost of living, the younger generations have to bear the high expenses of taking care of the elderly.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: This situation might result in elderly being neglected by their children due to the excess pressure caused by the large amount of expenditures.

Target: This situation might result in the elderly being neglected by their children due to the excessive pressure caused by a large amount of expenditure.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: In the past, the aged have been through the difficult years of struggling for Singapore's development such as the racial riots of the 1960s.

Target: In the past, the aged have been through difficult years of struggling for Singapore's development, such as the racial riots of the 1960s.


Source: Grammar improvements: As a result, the elderly are likely to be assets to our society, by providing invaluable sources of advice and knowledge.

Target: As a result, the elderly are likely to be assets in our society by providing invaluable sources of advice and knowledge.


Source: Fix errors in this text: Additionally, senior workers have immense experience that would help them serve as advisors to the companies they belong to.

Target: In addition, senior workers have immense experience that would help them serve as advisors to the companies they belong to.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: All of these show that the elderly could still contribute to the development of Singapore.

Target: All these show that the elderly could still contribute to the development of Singapore.


Source: Fix grammar: Aging population could be a burden, but they are still a part of a county.

Target: The aging population could be a burden, but they are still a part of the country.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: Despite this progress, there still are not enough openings for the baby boomers.

Target: Despite this progress, there are still not enough openings for the baby boomers.


Source: Fix grammaticality: Although many beneficial services has been provided to the elderly, this program still does not seem to be so effective as volunteers may or may not render their services whenever the elderly need them.

Target: Although many beneficial services have been provided to the elderly, this program does not seem to be so effective as volunteers may or may not render their services whenever the elderly need them.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Medical advancement allows people to live longer, and as a result, the number of elderly people has been on the increase.

Target: Medical advancements allow people to live longer, and as a result, the number of elderly people has been on the increase.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: Then, they worked hard to rebuild and develop the war-torn country into what we are living in now.

Target: They worked hard to rebuild and develop the war-torn country into what we are living in now.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: And how do you feel if the younger generation does this to you?

Target: And how do you feel if the younger generation did this to you?


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: With all the extra expenses, the children may not be able to save up for their own retirement.

Target: With all the extra expenses, the children may not be able to save enough for their own retirement.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: The country's social stability will inevitably be disrupted if such policy is applied forcibly without any consent from the elderly.

Target: The country's social stability will inevitably be disrupted if such a policy is applied forcibly without any consent from the elderly.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: However, in times of difficulties, old people have no one but their families and relatives to rely on, and we are back in the situation we discussed above.

Target: However, in times of difficulty, old people have no one but their families and relatives to rely on, and we are back to the situation that we discussed earlier.


Source: Grammar improvements: The change in the age structure of a country's population will has a profound impact on the political, social and economical conditions of that country.

Target: The change in the age structure of a country's population will have a profound impact on the political, social, and economic conditions of that country.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: While this may be true, such measures are ineffective in reducing old-age poverty as many elderly have little understanding of how the system work and do not possess the necessary financial knowledge to manage their savings and allowance.

Target: While this may be true, such measures are ineffective in reducing old-age poverty as many elderly have little understanding of how the system works and do not possess the necessary financial knowledge to manage their savings and allowance.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Despite the changes that are implemented, such measures are insufficient to help the aged as the root problems of rising cost and increasing inaccessibility are not addressed.

Target: Despite the changes that are being implemented, such measures are insufficient to help the aged, as the root problems of rising costs and increasing inaccessibility are not addressed.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Many elderly are uninsured as they fail to realise that many of the illness that can be prevented or treated cheaply in the early stages very often worsen into critical conditions.

Target: Many elderly are uninsured as they fail to realize that many of the illnesses that can be prevented or treated cheaply in the early stages very often worsen into critical conditions.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Older workers are often viewed as less dynamic and less creative as compared to the younger workers, thus they are less preferred.

Target: Older workers are often viewed as less dynamic and less creative as compared to the younger workers, and thus, they are less preferred.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: A possible solution for this is to scrap national default retirement age which often give the power to employers to retrench those above this retirement age.

Target: A possible solution for this is to scrap the national default retirement age, which often gives the power employers to retrench those above this retirement age.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Public spending is the amount of taxation collected by the government to provide services for its people such as education, health care and law and order maintenance.

Target: Public spending is the amount of tax collected by the government to provide services for its people, such as education, health care, and law and order maintenance.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: If the number of elders continues to increase, pertinent problems will definitely escalate.

Target: If the number of elderly continues to increase, pertinent problems will definitely escalate.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: Therefore, government should spend more on the aged not only to ease their aging process but also to tackle problems arising from a growing population.

Target: Therefore, the government should spend more on the aged not only to ease their aging process but also to tackle problems arising from a growing population.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Despite the government consistent spending on the old, public spending on the aged should not be limited but should be used accordingly based on the circumstances.

Target: Despite the government's consistent spending on the old, public spending on the aged should not be limited but should be used accordingly based on the circumstances.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: They should at least be compensated for the efforts put in for the younger generations to live more comfortably.

Target: They should at least be compensated for the efforts that they have put in for the younger generations to live more comfortably.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: However, the elders constitute only a small portion of the whole aging population.

Target: However, these elderly constitute only a small portion of the whole aging population.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: This shows that employers will have to resort in employing the aged.

Target: This shows that employers will have to resort to employing the aged.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: Due to that, the government is advised to lend a hand in helping them and by limiting its spending does not assist the aged.

Target: Due to that, the government is advised to lend a hand in helping them, and limiting its spending does not assist the aged.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: If nothing's to be done to protect them, the aged will continue suffer and the situation may even worsen in the next few decades.

Target: If nothing were to be done to protect them, the aged would continue to suffer, and the situation may even worsen in the next few decades.


Source: Make the sentence fluent: What is recommended is the government should probably help only those elders whose children are not financially capable of supporting their parents.

Target: What is recommended is the government should probably help only those elderly whose children are not financially capable of supporting their parents.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: To ensure effectiveness, the government may have to create a new policy stating that those children who have stable income of certain amount have to take care of their parents.

Target: The government may have to create a new policy stating that those children who have a stable income of a certain amount will have to take care of their parents.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: The government is able to buffer the effects if the government place more attention on the aged.

Target: The government is able to buffer the effects if it places more attention on the aged.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: There are always some controversies over the aging future which is one of the most concerning subjects nowadays.

Target: There are always some controversies over the future of aging which is one of the most interesting subjects nowadays.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: Our Government has played a huge role in implementing and improving our policies to maximize the aid for the elderly.

Target: Our government has played a huge role in implementing and improving our policies to maximize aid for the elderly.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: They are encouraged to save a portion of their salary into a special account when they are most active in the workforce.

Target: They are encouraged to save a portion of their salaries into a special account when they are most active in the workforce.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: However, these aids have proven to be essential despite the costly structures.

Target: However, these aids have proven to be essential despite their costly structures.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: Tiles or pavements with better friction have been placed in toilets to prevent elderly from slipping.

Target: Tiles or pavements with better friction have been placed in toilets to prevent the elderly from slipping.


Source: Fix grammaticality: In conclusion, all the research and developments and policies the government has invested in have made aging a more joyous and less terrifying journey.

Target: In conclusion, all the research and developments, as well as policies that the government has invested in, have made aging a more joyous and less terrifying journey.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Thus, there are an increasing number of concerns as to how to solve the problems of an aging population.

Target: Thus, there is an increasing number of concerns as to how to solve the problems of an aging population.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: This was much higher than the average of 100 in previous years.

Target: This is much higher than the average of 100 in previous years.


Source: Fix grammar: They will not create a habit of relying too much on the government.

Target: They will not form a habit of relying too much on the government.


Source: Fix grammar: If the government spending on the aged is not limited, the other sectors will be neglected.

Target: If the government's spending on the aged is not limited, the other sectors will be neglected.


Source: Fix grammaticality: Taxes may have to increase and takes a bigger toil on the people.

Target: Taxes may have to increase and takes a bigger toll on the people.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: Hence, it is important to limit the public spending on the aged so as to divert it to other areas in the country's development.

Target: Hence, it is important to limit public spending on the aged so as to divert it to other areas of the country's development.


Source: Make the sentence fluent: They should also be aware that the elderly are now healthier and so are capable of supporting themselves.

Target: They should also be aware that the elderly are now healthier and are capable of supporting themselves.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: Population in the world is aging rapidly and the number of persons aged 60 or over is expected almost to triple, increasing from 737 million in 2009 to 2 billion by 2050 globally.

Target: The population in the world is aging rapidly, and the number of persons aged 60 or over is expected almost to triple, increasing from 737 million in 2009 to 2 billion by 2050 globally.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: All these have indeed helped to alleviate the aging process and allow the elderly to enjoy their sunset years to the fullest.

Target: All these have helped to alleviate the aging process and allow the elderly to enjoy their twilight years to the fullest.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: CPF in Singapore has played a crucial role in helping to reduce the fiscal cost of elder dependency as it compels citizens to save in advance for their old age.

Target: The CPF in Singapore has played a crucial role in helping to reduce the fiscal cost of elder dependency as it compels citizens to save in advance for their old age


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: Additionally, to allow the aged to move about conveniently, many places including public transportations have been made wheel-chair accessible.

Target: Additionally, to allow the aged to move about conveniently, many places, including public transportation, have been made wheel-chair accessible.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: Implementation of Tax Relief Scheme such as Aged Parent Relief is also an important step to improve the retirement security as they encourage children to take care of their parents, thereby easing the aging process.

Target: Implementation of the Tax Relief Schemes such as The Aged Parent Relief is also an important step to improve retirement security as it encourages children to take care of their parents, thereby easing the aging process


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: Expenditure on the elderly is taking up more of the government budget due to the aging population.

Target: Expenditure on the elderly is taking up more of the government budget due to the rapidly aging population.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: Due to this, the country's development in other areas has to take a step back, thus resulting in the inability to attain her potential.

Target: Due to this, the country's development in other areas has to take a step back, thus resulting in the inability to attain its potential.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: This is done by implementing policies like the Medisave system, where Singaporeans have to put aside a certain percentage of their income into the Medisave account.

Target: This is done by implementing policies like the Medisave system, where Singaporeans have to put aside a certain percentage of their income into the Medisave account


Source: Make the sentence fluent: In cases, where the elderly are childless or physically ill due to aging, then it will be the government's duty to take care of them.

Target: In cases where the elderly are childless or physically ill due to aging, it will be the government's duty to take care of them.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: As the living conditions improve and technology advances, people are able to lead a healthier lifestyle and live longer as compared to the past.

Target: As living conditions improve and technology advances, people are able to lead healthier lifestyles and live longer as compared to the past.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: In summary, public spending on the aged should be limited because the fact that the elderly should have planned for their old age when they were young and they might still be able to support them if the need arises.

Target: In summary, public spending on the aged should be limited because of the fact that the elderly should have planned for their old age when they were young, and they might still be able to support themselves if the need arises.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: Even though the world is facing aging population, public spending should not only be spent on the aged as there are many other factors that need to be taken care of in the country's future development.

Target: Even though the world is facing an aging population, public spending should not be spent only on the aged, as there are many other areas that need to be taken care of in a country's development.


Source: Make the sentence fluent: However, due to the practical reasons, a country has its limitations on supporting the aged.

Target: However, due to practical reasons, a country has its limitations in supporting the aged.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: Hence, countries should assess other important areas that public spending should be focused on as well.

Target: Hence, countries should assess the other important areas that public spending should be focused on as well.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: In conservative countries such as Singapore, children are expected to take care of their parents by providing them with allowance to meet their daily needs.

Target: In conservative countries such as Singapore, children are expected to take care of their parents by providing them with allowances to meet their daily needs.


Source: Grammar improvements: Other areas of development included addressing social issues such as the decrease in the birthrate and the increase in child abuse cases.

Target: Other areas of development include addressing social issues such as the decrease in the birthrate and the increase in child abuse cases.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Hence, public spending could be used to introduce more programs and subsidies to encourage having larger families instead.

Target: Hence, public spending could be used to introduce more programs and subsidies to encourage people to have larger families instead.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: In conclusion, public spending should be used on the aged but also not neglecting other problems arising which hinders the country's development.

Target: In conclusion, public spending should be used on the aged but also not neglecting other problems which hinder the country's development.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Too much of the nation's budget is spent on aiding the elderly and the government should limit and channel these funds to other more important areas for country's development.

Target: Too much of the nation's budget is being spent on aiding the elderly, and the government should limit and channel these funds to other more important areas for the country's development.


Source: Grammar improvements: Excess funds should then be channeled to other areas for country's development.

Target: Excess funds should then be channeled to other areas for the country's development.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: Elderly nowadays are able to support themselves.

Target: Nowadays, the elderly are able to support themselves.


Source: Fix grammaticality: Policies such as compulsory CPF and Medisave savings both require citizens to set aside part of their salary to meet their future retired needs.

Target: Policies such as compulsory CPF and Medisave savings both require citizens to set aside part of their salaries to meet their future needs.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: The aged should still continue to work even beyond their retirement age when they are still capable of supporting themselves.

Target: The aged should continue to work beyond their retirement age when they are still capable of supporting themselves.


Source: Fix grammaticality: With elderly returning to the workforce, they are less dependent on the government subsidies and thus, less funds should be set aside for the elderly.

Target: With the elderly returning to the workforce, they will be less dependent on government subsidies, and thus, fewer funds should be set aside for the elderly.


Source: Grammar improvements: All in all, funds should be limited and directed to other more important areas for country's development so that the country will be able to remain competitive in the economy and achieve sustained economic growth.

Target: All in all, funds should be limited and directed to other more important areas for the country's development so that the country will be able to remain competitive in the economy and achieve sustained economic growth.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: Countries like Singapore and Japan have a social security system in place to help the aged, and at the same time, a substantial sum of public spending is put into their health and welfare.

Target: Countries like Singapore and Japan have a social security system in place to help the aged, and at the same time, a substantial sum of public spending is allocated to look after their health and welfare


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: Therefore, the public spending on the aged should be limited so that money can be diverted to other areas of the country's development to strike a balance and tackle the aging issues.

Target: Therefore, public spending on the aged should be limited so that money can be diverted to other areas of the country's development to strike a balance while tackling the aging issues.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: One nation's economy success depends on the quality of the workforce.

Target: One nation's economic success depends on the quality of the workforce


Source: Fix grammaticality: The CPF Education Scheme allows people to use the ordinary account to pay for the tertiary education in the local institutions, and at the same time, encourages more people to further their education.

Target: The CPF Education Scheme allows people to use the ordinary account to pay for tertiary education in local institutions and at the same time, encourages more people to further their education


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: This allows the workforce to start accumulating their wealth until the retirement age and at the same time, especially for the aged to remain productive through skill upgrading.

Target: This allows the workforce to start accumulating their wealth until retirement age and, at the same time, especially for the aged, to remain productive through skill upgrading


Source: Grammar improvements: The various schemes aim to help the SMEs increase their revenue and attract investors through upgrading the existing business operations and creating gateway and funding opportunities.

Target: The various schemes aim to help the SMEs increase their revenue and attract investors through upgrading the existing business operations and creating a gateway and funding opportunities


Source: Fix grammar: Scheme, which motivates SMEs to recruit older workers.

Target: Scheme, which motivates SMEs to recruit older workers


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: Enhancing and upgrading of common places such as sport facilities, schools, public housing estates, roads and parks are to satisfy the needs and convenience of the public.

Target: Enhancing and upgrading common places such as sports facilities, schools, public housing estates, roads, and parks are to satisfy the needs of the public.


Source: Fix errors in this text: In 2009, Singapore Senior Minister of State for National Development announced that the government plans to spend between S $ 18 and S $ 20 billion on infrastructure projects and another S $ 15 to S $ 17 billion in 2010 and 2011 respectively.

Target: In 2009, the Singapore Senior Minister of State for National Development announced that the government plans to spend between S $ 18 and S $ 20 billion on infrastructure projects and another S $ 15 to S $ 17 billion in 2010 and 2011, respectively.


Source: Fix grammaticality: Twinning the current general hospitals with the community hospitals, which are run by charitable organizations, will make healthcare affordable for all, especially the aged.

Target: Twinning the current general hospitals with community hospitals, which are run by charitable organizations, will make healthcare affordable for all, especially the aged.


Source: Fix grammar: For all nations, wise planning on public spending and wise policy planning are very crucial as they influence one's future.

Target: For all nations, wise planning on public spending and wise policy planning is very crucial as they influence one's future


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: Instead, it should be used on other areas of development to tackle the roots of the issues and improve the quality of life.

Target: Instead, it should be used in other areas of development to tackle the roots of the issues and improve the quality of life for the aged.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: But the stable development of society as a whole needs the balance of public spending on all aspects.

Target: But the steady development of society as a whole needs a balance of public spending on all aspects.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: Compared to long-term economic development they may more concern about their own welfare.

Target: Compared to long-term economic development, they may be more concerned about their own welfare.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: Another is the government.

Target: Another group is the government.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Thirdly, normal doctor's prescription prefers newer and more inclined to expensive, but not necessarily more effective drugs.

Target: Thirdly, normal doctors' prescription prefers newer drugs, and the drugs are inclined to be expensive but not necessarily more effective.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: For example, in the Korea, there is pressure for increased outlays on pensions, healthcare.

Target: For example, in Korea, there is pressure on the government for increased outlays on pensions and healthcare.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: As a conclusion, the public spending on the aged should be limited, so that money can be diverted to other areas of the country's development.

Target: In conclusion, public spending on the aged should be limited so that money can be diverted to other areas of the country's development.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Many countries including Singapore are facing the issue of the aging population.

Target: Many countries, including Singapore, are facing the issue of the aging population.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: There are many implications to this issue and one of such implication is that the spending by the government on the aged has increased in order to deal with this issue.

Target: There are many implications for this issue, and one of them is that the spending by the government on the aged has increased in order to deal with this issue.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Another reason to limit public spending on the aged is that there is a need to set aside larger amount of money for economic area especially currently when there is global economic downturn.

Target: Another reason to limit public spending on the aged is that there is a need to set aside a larger amount of money for economic development, especially when there is a global economic downturn.


Source: Grammar improvements: Moreover, this group of elderly had work hard for years when they were young and had contributed to the economy and society.

Target: Moreover, this group of elderly had worked hard for years when they were young and had contributed to the economy and society.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: A country budget would be spent in a few key areas such as defense, healthcare, environment, transport, research and development, education.

Target: A country's budget would be spent on a few key areas such as defense, healthcare, environment, transport, research and development, and education.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: Public spending on the aged is necessary but should be limited in order for money to be diverted to other areas of the country's development.

Target: Public spending on the aged is necessary but should be limited in order for the money to be diverted to other areas of the country's development.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Firstly with a shrinking workforce and increase in expenditure required in welfare, the country needs to focus on developing the further generation.

Target: Firstly, with a shrinking workforce and an increase in expenditure required for welfare, the country will need to focus on developing the further generations.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: With proper education system the young will be more productive when they enter the workforce.

Target: With a proper education system, the young will be more productive when they enter the workforce.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Effective medication would translate into a shorter time spent in hospital.

Target: The effective medication would translate into a shorter time spent in hospitals.


Source: Grammar improvements: It may be objected that the amount invested in research does not produce equal rewards.

Target: It may be argued that the amount invested in research does not produce equal rewards.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: Children might be grow up to be ineffective workers as their education had been disrupted.

Target: Children might grow up to be ineffective workers as their education has been disrupted.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: With appropriate distributed spending on key areas such as education, research and development and healthcare it could allow the country to progress despite additional demand of aging population.

Target: With appropriate spending on key areas such as education, research, and development, and healthcare, it could allow the country could progress despite the additional demand of an aging population.


Source: Fix grammaticality: Sectors like housing and consumers' market had to be carefully taken care of.

Target: Sectors like housing and consumers market had to be carefully taken care of.


Source: Fix grammaticality: The economy underwent a series of revolutionary changes due to the positive surge in population, hitting greater heights as the trend continued.

Target: The economy underwent a series of revolutionary changes due to the surge in population, hitting greater heights as the trend continued.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: Although spending on the elderly is inevitable in the face of aging population, careful spending is necessary in diluting the effect of fiscal consequences.

Target: Although spending on the elderly is inevitable in the face of an aging population, careful spending is necessary to dilute the effect of fiscal consequences.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: It is about coming out with a permanent solution which would curb the spending in the long run.

Target: It is about coming out with a permanent solution that would curb spending in the long run.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: After all, the benefits of this measure will definitely outweigh the expense, and is able to cut down the amount spent in the medical sector in the future.

Target: After all, the benefits of this measure will definitely outweigh the limitations, and the measure is able to cut down the amount spent in the medical sector in the future.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: However, in the future, bulk of the working population will have to come from the retiring baby boomers.

Target: However, in the future, the bulk of the working population will have to come from the retiring baby boomers.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: There are several limitations to the extent of how the productivity can be increased among these workers.

Target: There are several limitations to the extent of how productivity can be increased among these workers.


Source: Make the sentence fluent: Hence, in order to have a better economic growth, the process should be viewed with a more comprehensive perspective.

Target: Hence, in order to have better economic growth, the process should be viewed with a more comprehensive perspective.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Although economic growth is important in providing care for the elderly, the limit standards on the elderly spending should be set carefully, so that they would not create any adverse effects on the economy.

Target: Although economic growth is important in providing care for the elderly, the limit on elderly spending should be set carefully so that they would not create any adverse effects on the economy.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: Aside from providing financial support to the elderly, the government should try to help the elderly in other ways so as to reduce the dependency of the elderly on the government.

Target: Apart from providing financial support to the elderly, the government should try to help the elderly in other ways so as to reduce their dependency of the elderly on the government.


Source: Make the sentence fluent: The various aspects of the benefits of CPF includes retirement, healthcare, home ownership, family protection and asset enhancement.

Target: The various aspects of the benefits of CPF include retirement, healthcare, home ownership, family protection, and asset enhancement.


Source: Fix grammar errors: However, they should limit the public spending on the aged.

Target: However, they should limit public spending on the aged.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: One may argue that public spending on the aged could be spent on country's development.

Target: One may argue that public spending on the aged could be used for the country's development.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: Money should be spent more wisely on helping the country to get out of the economic downturn.

Target: Money should be spent more wisely in helping the country to get out of the economic downturn.


Source: Grammar improvements: The limit of public spending on the aged is important because it indirectly controls the funds which would be channeled into other areas of a country's development.

Target: Limiting public spending on the aged is important because it indirectly controls the funds which would be channeled into other areas of a country's development.


Source: Fix errors in this text: A low limitation limits the funds being diverted to other areas of the country's development such as education, technology and economic investments.

Target: A low limitation limits the funds from being diverted to other areas of the country's development, such as education and economic development.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: Hence it can be seen that different levels of limitations on public spending produces different results which can be both good and bad as shown above.

Target: Hence it can be seen that different levels of limitations on public spending produce different results, which can be both good and bad, as shown above.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Researchers also hope to develop early detection methods which will help by prescribing preventive medication before the actual occurrence of the disease.

Target: Researchers also hope to develop early detection methods which help by prescribing preventive medication before the actual occurrence of the disease.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: This implies that aging perhaps can be influenced with manipulation of certain cells.

Target: This implies that aging perhaps can be influenced by the manipulation of certain cells.


Source: Make the sentence fluent: Critics have argued that though these researches are seemingly impressive and hopeful, there are simply no concrete empirical evidence on their practical significance or effectiveness.

Target: Critics have argued that though these researches are seemingly impressive and hopeful, there is simply no concrete empirical evidence of their practical significance or effectiveness.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Government subsidies on a wide range of intermediate and long-term care services such as community hospitals and dementia care centers are available for patients especially elderly who require continuing care after hospitalization.

Target: Government subsidies on a wide range of intermediate and long-term care services, such as community hospitals and dementia care centers, are available for patients, especially the elderly, who require continuing care after hospitalization.


Source: Grammar improvements: Although fertility rates fallen, longevity increased.

Target: Although fertility rates have fallen, longevity has increased.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: As concerns have been raised on the effectiveness of excessive money injected into financing social welfare policies to arrest short term issues, the improper use of public spending will likely create much burden for the next generation.

Target: As concerns have been raised on the effectiveness of excessive money injected into financing social welfare policies to arrest short-term issues, the improper use of public spending will likely create much burden for the next generation.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: There is little doubt that social welfare policies can alleviate difficult situations that the aging population is facing today.

Target: There is little doubt that social welfare policies can alleviate the difficult situations that aging populations are facing today.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Some of the elderly have no dependents and they live by themselves while others are looking at hefty medical bills and healthcare costs as their health deteriorates.

Target: Some of the elderly have no dependents, and live by themselves, while others are looking at hefty medical bills and healthcare costs as their health deteriorates.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: Excess public spending only adds to the comfort of the aging population and does not effectively benefit the economy.

Target: Excessive public spending only adds to the comfort of the aging population and does not effectively benefit the economy.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: As resources are poured into the different sectors in the economy, growth will increase along with public spending.

Target: As resources are being poured into different sectors of the economy, growth will increase along with public spending.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: Governments should weigh the costs and benefits associated with each dollar spent on social policies and the economy.

Target: Governments should weigh the costs and benefits associated with each dollar being spent on social policies and the economy.


Source: Fix errors in this text: They must then determine where the necessary point is to effectively solve the issues an aging population is facing and then channel the remainder into the other sectors of the economy.

Target: They must then determine where the necessary point is to effectively solve the issues an aging population is facing and then channel the remaining resources into the other sectors of the economy.


Source: Fix grammar: Public spending on the aged should be limited as money should be spent in other areas such as defense and public infrastructure as they play a more important role in a country's future development.

Target: Public spending on the aged should be limited as money should be spent on other areas, such as defense and public infrastructure, as they play more important roles in a country's future development.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: This causes social security problems which concern the ability of the young to support a larger number of people.

Target: This causes social security problems which question the ability of the young to support a larger number of people.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: It is not feasible for a country to spend more the elderly when funds have a possibility of decreasing in future years.

Target: It is not feasible for a country to spend more on the elderly when funds have a possibility of being decreased in future years.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: Money for the aged can be saved as people should take care of their own parents when they turn old.

Target: Money for the aged can be saved as people should take care of their own parents when they become old.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: Only by living in a safe country then can one enjoy the benefits of living in a ripe old age.

Target: Only by living in a safe country then can one enjoy the benefits of living to a ripe old age.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: Therefore, technology is highly needed to replace the lost of manpower.

Target: Therefore, technology is highly needed to replace the loss of manpower.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Therefore, retirement age should be extended and people should be educated to work longer and save more for their future livelihood.

Target: Therefore, the retirement age should be extended, and people should be educated to work longer and save more for their future livelihood.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: Elderly should be more independent instead.

Target: The elderly elderly should be more independent instead.


Source: Fix grammar errors: In this case, they may not have the financial ability to take care of themselves without the help from the government.

Target: In this case, they may not have the financial ability to take care of themselves without any help from the government.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: Another reason why we should not limit the public spending on the older population is because of the fact that the phenomenon of ageing population is expected to continue growing.

Target: Another reason why we should not limit public spending on the older population is because of the fact that the phenomenon of the aging population is expected to continue growing.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: That is, the amount of money that the government can use for developments of other areas may not increase even after limiting the spending on elderly.

Target: The amount of money that the government can use for developments in other areas may not increase even after limiting the spending on the elderly.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: If we limit the amount the government pays, the additional cost falls on the shoulders of the family members which will then be shifted back to the government by family in other means.

Target: If we limit the amount the government pays, the additional cost falls on the shoulders of the family members, which will then be shifted back to the government by the family in other means


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: In fact, it calls into the question whether the elderly really benefits from the policy implemented in the aspect of financial security, employment and living arrangements for elderly.

Target: In fact, it calls into question whether the elderly really benefit from the policy implemented in the aspect of financial security, employment, and living arrangements.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: All of these prove the failure of CPF scheme in providing a secure future life for most of the elderly.

Target: All these prove the failure of the CPF scheme in providing a secure future life for most of the elderly.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: However, people should take note that the problem now is not about the mandatory retirement age of the elderly, but indeed the employability problem faced by the senior citizens.

Target: However, people should take note that the problem now is not about the mandatory retirement age of the elderly but the employability problem faced by senior citizens.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: No one can guarantee that children who live nearby their parents will eventually take good care of their parents.

Target: No one can guarantee that children who live nearby their parents will eventually take good care of them.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: As a conclusion, to a large extent, current policies implemented have not helped much to ease the aging process.

Target: In conclusion, to a large extent, current policies implemented have not helped much to ease the aging process.


Source: Grammar improvements: This global aging is also starting to intrude some developing nations such as Malaysia and Thailand.

Target: This global aging is also starting to affect some developing nations such as Malaysia and Thailand.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: However, the funds have to be restricted wisely and diverted to other fields of the country's development.

Target: However, the funds have to be used wisely and diverted to other fields of the country's development.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: Firstly, governments have to continue push up the pension age in line with rising life expectancies.

Target: Firstly, governments have to continue to push up the retirement age in line with rising life expectancies.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: For some countries with little economic growth, society faces few choices on how to care for those who are least able to care for themselves.

Target: For some countries with little economic growth, the society faces few choices on how to care for those who are least able to care for themselves.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: For example, Japan is one of the countries which using the most advanced technology in manufacturing.

Target: For example, Japan is one of the countries which uses the most advanced technology in manufacturing.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: In contrast, North Korea is still communist country and it is conservative.

Target: In contrast, North Korea is still a communist country, and it is conservative.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: In addition, governments could give subsidies or incentives to encourage people increase fertility rates.

Target: In addition, governments could give subsidies or incentives to encourage people to increase fertility rates.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Another policy is to ensure Singaporeans are financially secure after retirement.

Target: Another policy is to ensure that Singaporeans are financially secure after retirement.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: An aging population has been much talked about in recent years.

Target: An aging population has been talked about much in recent years.


Source: Make the sentence fluent: Critics of this proposal have pointed out that the money set aside for this scheme will go to waste if they pass away even before they can utilize them.

Target: Critics of this proposal have pointed out that the money set aside for this scheme will go to waste if the elderly pass away even before they can utilize them.


Source: Fix grammar errors: This way, it minimizes the chances of them not being able to afford their medical bills, and at the same time reduces the heavy burden on government subsidies.

Target: In this way, it minimizes the chances of them being unable to afford their medical bills and at the same time, reduces the heavy burden on government subsidies.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: For example, these funds can be used in the research and development of the cures for terminal illnesses like cancer.

Target: For example, these funds can be used in the research and development of cures for terminal illnesses like cancer.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: The aging population has become a major issue in many developed countries including the United States, Japan and Singapore.

Target: The aging population has become a major issue in many developed countries, including the United States, Japan, and Singapore.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: It is important that governments take note of this and control their spending so as not to neglect these other more important areas such as the education and the economy.

Target: It is important that governments take note of this and control their spending so as not to neglect other more important areas such as education and the economy.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: It is crucial for the government to spend money on the aged as not doing so will lead to social problems.

Target: It is crucial for the government to spend money on the age, as not doing so will lead to social problems.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: People may take advantage of government subsidies to pay for the expensive new technologies which are not necessary.

Target: People may take advantage of government subsidies to pay for expensive new technologies which are not necessary.


Source: Fix grammaticality: Governments may be spending too much money on expensive medical infrastructure such as building new facilities to suit the elderly.

Target: Governments may be spending too much money on expensive medical infrastructure, such as new facilities to suit the elderly.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: Medical facilities can only prolong their life which does not have any significant impact on the country's economy.

Target: Medical facilities can only prolong their lives which does not have any significant impact on the country's economy.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: Instead, the governments can distribute the money into other projects that are more beneficial to the country's development.

Target: Instead, the governments can divert the money into other projects that are more beneficial to the country's development.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: Much should be done to help ease the aging process to avoid social and economical problems in the future.

Target: Therefore, much should be done to help ease the aging process to avoid social and economic problems in the future.


Source: Fix grammar errors: Of all the different aspect of development that has been done to ease the aging process, the most significant field is medicine.

Target: Of all the different aspects of development that have been done to ease the aging process, the most significant field is medicine.


Source: Fix grammar: The aging population has forced a restructure of the whole healthcare system.

Target: The aging population has forced a restructuring of the whole healthcare system.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Better solutions are hoped to be found in order to help the elderly on their health issues.

Target: Better solutions are hoped to be found in order to help the elderly with their health issues.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: For instant, in the United Kingdom, researches on dementia are being done to find a better solution to cure the patients who are mostly the old aged.

Target: For instance, in the United Kingdom, researches on dementia are being done to find a better solution to cure the patients, who are mostly aged.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: In this scheme, a basic old aged pension is provided to all citizens who are above 65 years of age and have contributed for 25 years or more to the country.

Target: In this scheme, a basic pension is provided for all citizens who are above 65 years of age and have contributed for 25 years or more to the country.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: The old aged can then be independent and they do not need to rely on their children for money.

Target: The aged can then be independent, and they do not need to rely on their children for money.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: But on the other hand, with these schemes, children need not do their duty to take care of their parents.

Target: On the other hand, with these schemes, children need not do their duty to take care of their parents.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: If the country were to spend entirely caring for the aged, then many would shove responsibilities and indirectly many would also not care for their own health, since the healthy, represented by the country, would care for them.

Target: If the country were to spend its budget entirely caring for the aged, then many citizens would shove the responsibilities and would not care for their own health since the healthy, as represented by the country, would care for them.


Source: Fix errors in this text: Since birth, parents would give the best to their children from clothing to education and this should be reciprocated.

Target: Since birth, parents would give the best to their children, from clothing to education, and this should be reciprocated.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: Being able-bodied and in good health, children should not forget their parents' deeds towards them.

Target: Being able-bodied and in good health, children should not forget their parents' kindness towards them.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: On the other hand, a substantial amount could be saved if not spent in caring for the aged, therefore enabling more funds to be disseminated for the country's development in many other areas.

Target: On the other hand, a substantial amount could be saved if not spent on caring for the aged, thereby enabling more funds to be diverted for the country's development in many other areas.


Source: Fix grammaticality: This would be proved beneficial in the short run, when facing emergencies, or in the long run, when facing retirement.

Target: This would be beneficial in the short run, when facing emergencies, or in the long run when facing retirement.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Help given could be in many other forms instead of just monetary value.

Target: Help given could be in many other forms instead of just monetary.


Source: Fix grammar errors: Although help is given, it is not encouraged for the aged to continuously be reliant on that.

Target: Although help is given, it is not encouraged for the aged to continuously be reliant on it.


Source: Fix errors in this text: Instead, with the skills acquired, they should'venture' out and earn a living of their own which would in turn reap many returns in both monetary value and health.

Target: Instead, with the skills acquired, they should'venture' out and earn a living of their own which would, in turn, reap many returns in both monetary and health.


Source: Fix grammaticality: To find a solution to that problem certain amount of the public spending has to be diverted to it.

Target: To find a solution to that problem, a certain amount of public spending has to be diverted to it.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: This is one of the long term efforts that the government has decided to invest in so that their public spending on the aged would be reduced in years to come by, as the future working population starts to emerge.

Target: This is one of the long-term efforts that the government has decided to invest in so that their public spending on the aged would be reduced in years to come as the future working population starts to emerge.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: An increase in the working population will then allow more resources to be channelled out to other areas which demand such funds.

Target: An increase in the working population will then allow more resources to be channeled to other areas which demand such funds.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: Health sector would be one of the areas where help is needed for the aged due to the rising medical expenditure, thus not being fair to burden them with the entire cost.

Target: The heart health sector would be one of the areas where help is needed for the aged due to the rising medical expenditure, and it is not fair to burden them with the entire cost.


Source: Fix errors in this text: Without a limit the country would then experience a decline in economic growth.

Target: Without an on spending, the country would then experience a decline in economic growth.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: As such public spending on the aged should be limited so that money can be diverted to other areas of the country's development.

Target: Therefore, public spending on the aged should be limited so that money can be diverted to other areas of the country's development.


Source: Fix errors in this text: Currently, much of the public discussion about an aging society involves the responsibility of the children to look after their aged parents.

Target: Currently, much of the public discussions about an aging society involve the responsibility of children to look after their aged parents.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: Some feel the state has gone too far by intruding on the delicate relationship between children and their parents.

Target: Some feel the state has gone too far by intruding into the delicate relationship between children and their parents.


Source: Fix grammaticality: According to that statistics, over 400 parents have sought the aid of the Tribunal of the Maintenance Act since it was set up 3 years ago.

Target: According to statistics, over 400 parents have sought the aid of the Tribunal of the Maintenance Act since it was set up 3 years ago.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: Being occupied with work, the aged could actually use their brains more frequently and this reduces the chances of getting senile dementia and Parkinson's diseases significantly.

Target: Being occupied with work, the aged could actually use their brains more frequently, and this reduces the chances of developing senile dementia and Parkinson's diseases.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: As the saying goes, 'no man is an island', social activities are essential for the aged to stay healthy.

Target: As the saying goes, 'no man is an island,', and social activities are essential for the aged to stay healthy.


Source: Fix grammaticality: The seniors could build up their social circles at the working place and this reduces their dependency on their family members.

Target: The seniors could build up their social circles at their workplaces, and this reduces their dependency on their family members.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: In a nutshell, it may be said without fear of contradiction that the current policies have helped to ease the aging process to a large extend.

Target: In a nutshell, it may be said without any fear of contradiction that the current policies have helped to ease the aging process to a large extent.


Source: Fix errors in this text: With the implementation of the Maintenance of Parents Act in Singapore, it is arguable that the young generations are not only morally responsible, but also compelled to take care of their aged parents independently.

Target: With the implementation of the Maintenance of Parents Act in Singapore, it is arguable that the younger generations are not only morally responsible for but also compelled to take care of their aged parents.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: However, the low fertility rate in Singapore challenges this argument because the financial burden resulting from the provision of aged parents is currently increasing on the fewer offspring.

Target: However, the low fertility rate in Singapore challenges this argument because the financial burden resulting from the provision of aged parents is currently increasing on fewer offspring.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: Singapore faces a sharp shortage of medical specialists in the areas of geriatric field and palliative care, to the extent of importing foreign nurses into the medical industry.

Target: Singapore faces a sharp shortage of medical specialists in the areas of the geriatric field and palliative care and to the extent of importing foreign nurses into the medical industry.


Source: Grammar improvements: The geriatric patients are often the ones who occupy majority of the hospital bed space and they suffered from chronic illnesses that require regular follow-up consultations.

Target: Geriatric patients are often the ones who occupy the majority of hospital bed space, and they suffer from chronic illnesses that require regular follow-up consultations.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: In contrast, the western welfare states that fund heavily on social expenditure have hindered the functioning of private market.

Target: In contrast, the western welfare states that fund heavily on social expenditure have hindered the functioning of the private market.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: This means that people will not see the need to save for retirement fund or work to be financially secure, as they know they can depend on the government.

Target: This means that people will not see the need to save for retirement funds or work to be financially secure, as they know they can depend on the government.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: Family support and close kinship, which exists strongly in Asian society, has also helped in decreasing state's welfare dependency.

Target: Family support and close kinship, which exists strongly in an Asian society, have also helped in decreasing the state's welfare dependency.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: Money can be diverted to other areas of the country's development to grow revenues in order to support the aging population.

Target: Money can be diverted to other areas of the country's development to earn revenues in order to support the aging population.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: Helps are readily available to those who are incapable of providing for themselves.

Target: Help is readily available to those who are incapable of providing for themselves.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: Thus this refers to an increase in the population's mean age which is generally due to the decline in birth rate and the increase life expectancy.

Target: Thus this refers to an increase in the population's mean age, which is generally due to a decline in birth rate and an increase in life expectancy.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: Moreover, we will also expect a shortage of labor which affects the level of efficiency of the country.

Target: Moreover, we will also expect a shortage of labor which would affect the level of efficiency of the country.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Firstly, medical advancements helps to lighten the burden of healthcare costs.

Target: Firstly, medical advancements help to lighten the burden of healthcare costs.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: Moreover, the polyclinics provide highly subsidized medical care which benefited the elderly greatly.

Target: Moreover, polyclinics provide highly subsidized medical care, which benefits the elderly greatly.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: There is also an increase in research on healthier food and supplements that helps to inform and advice the public on a healthier lifestyle.

Target: There is also an increase in research on healthier food and supplements that helps to inform and advise the public to adopt a healthier lifestyle.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: From another point of view, government intervention helps to solve the problem.

Target: From another point of view, government intervention may help to solve the problem.


Source: Fix grammaticality: Secondly, automation helps to solve the social cost and reduces the need for younger generation to take care of aging population.

Target: Secondly, automation helps to reduce social cost and reduces the need for the younger generation to take care of the aging population.


Source: Make the sentence fluent: In addition, automation only reduces the need for human labor but there is no guarantee that it is able to drive down social costs.

Target: In addition, automation only reduces the need for human labor, but there is no guarantee that it is able to drive down social costs.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: In addition, countries like Singapore has started to tackle aging problems where government is getting companies to rehire workers aged 62.

Target: In addition, countries like Singapore have started to tackle aging problems where the government is getting companies to rehire workers aged 62.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: However, some people may think that the aged is a burden to the society as they believe that the physical condition of the aged cannot keep pace with the development of the country.

Target: However, some people may think that the aged are a burden to society as they believe that the physical condition of the aged cannot cope with the development of the country.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: While this may be true, the facts show that the aged still can contribute to the economics as they have more experiences when compared to others.

Target: While this may be true, facts have shown that the aged can still contribute to the economy as they have more experiences when compared to others.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: It analysis the needs and existing services within the county and prepare a comprehensive plan for the delivery of services to the aged.

Target: It analyses the needs and existing services within the county and prepares a comprehensive plan for the delivery of services to the aged.


Source: Fix grammar: However, with the limited budget a country has, it is essential that the more important priorities are first taken care of before large scale policies are implemented to help the aged.

Target: However, with the limited budget the country has, it is essential that the more important priorities are first taken care of before large-scale policies are implemented to help the aged.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: One of these areas would be that of military.

Target: One of these areas would be that of the military


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: The significance of military to a nation is so great that it is not possible for a country to constrict its spending in this area.

Target: The significance of the military to a nation is so great that it is not possible for a country to constrict its spending in this area.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: However, others may argue that our country has always enjoyed peace and there are no signs of any conflicts with other nations arising.

Target: However, others may argue that Singapore has always enjoyed the peace and that there are no signs of any conflicts with other nations arising.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: This dire effect is something we cannot afford, thus, investing in military good will definitely be one of the top priorities of the government.

Target: This dire effect is something we cannot afford; thus, investing in military goods will definitely be one of the top priorities of the government.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: Secondly, government should allocate its available resources wisely so as to obtain the most effective use of it.

Target: Secondly, the government should allocate its available resources wisely so as to obtain the most effective use of them.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: To achieve this, money has to be channelled to the research and development area instead of spending excessively on the aged.

Target: To achieve this, money has to be channeled into research and development instead of spending excessively on the aged.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: No doubt, some may argue that we should always show our gratitude to the elders of the nation by making sure that they are well taken care of.

Target: No doubt, some may argue that the nation should always show its gratitude to the elders of the nation by making sure that they are well taken care of.


Source: Fix the grammatical mistakes: Neglecting the other areas of our country's development will hinder our progress and lead to limited economic growth, thus a shrinking budget.

Target: Neglecting the other areas of the country's development will hinder its progress and lead to limited economic growth and, thus, a shrinking budget.


Source: Fix grammaticality: With more emphasis placed on healthcare by governments today and the advancement of our medical technology, people get to live longer.

Target: With more emphasis placed on healthcare by governments today and the advancement of medical technology, people get to live longer.


Source: Fix grammar errors: In some others such as Singapore, the people are compelled to provide in advance for their old age dependency.

Target: In some others, such as Singapore, the people are compelled to provide in advance for their old age.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: In the case of government pensions, the heavy spending of public fund on the old aged may take a toll on other areas of the nation's development.

Target: In the case of government pensions, the heavy spending of public funds on the aged may take a toll on other areas of the nation's development.


Source: Make the sentence fluent: Thus a method that works in a society may not work in another and sometimes, multiple approaches have to be taken.

Target: Thus a method that works in one society may not work in another, and sometimes, multiple approaches have to be taken.


Source: Fix errors in this text: Governments in developed countries should look beyond temporary solutions to rising aging population and focus on getting people to reproduce.

Target: Governments in developed countries should look beyond temporary solutions to the rising aging population and focus on getting people to reproduce.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Therefore, the use of the country's resources should be well diversified to different areas of the country's development so that no one area would be compromised on.

Target: Therefore, the use of the country's resources should be well diversified to different areas of the country's development so that no one area is compromised.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this text: This caused the aged to be heavily dependent of the government and thus developed a negative practice of the aged not saving for their own retirement.

Target: This has caused the aged to be heavily dependent on the government and thus has developed a negative practice of the aged not saving for their own retirement.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: It may be objected that the money which is not saved for retirement can be better spent elsewhere.

Target: It may be argued that the money which is not saved for retirement can be better spent elsewhere.


Source: Fix grammar errors: Other areas of developments that will increase the economic growth of the country will then be compromised.

Target: Other areas of development that will increase the economic growth of the country will then be compromised.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: This will allow the elderly to be able to work for longer years and delay their retirement.

Target: This will allow the elderly to be able to work for longer and delay their retirement.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: It may be objected that these values are innate to one's identity and is not easily influenced or changed by other factors.

Target: It may be objected that these values are innate to one's identity and are not easily influenced or changed by other factors.


Source: Fix grammar: In the long run, these will translate into a low fertility rate in the country.

Target: In the long run, this will translate into a low fertility rate in the country.


Source: Fix errors in this text: This is because the current benefits that are provided to the elderly are still inadequate.

Target: This is because the current benefits that are provided for the elderly are still inadequate.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: Therefore, an increase in social disparity and healthcare problems would be an issue to the country.

Target: Therefore, an increase in social disparity and healthcare problems would be an issue for the country.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: There are many elderly who are unable to support their living and have to take up jobs like road sweeping and toilet cleaning.

Target: There are many elderly people who are unable to support themselves and have to take up jobs like road sweeping and toilet cleaning.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Besides that, the elderly were once the people who had contributed to the growth of the nation and economy.

Target: Besides that, the elderly were once the people who contributed to the growth of the nation and economy.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: The aged should be able to enjoy the social security during their later years.

Target: The aged should be able to enjoy social security during their later years.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: In a summary, the government should not limit the public spending on elderly and divert it to other areas of the country's development.

Target: In summary, the government should not limit public spending on the elderly and divert it to other areas of the country's development.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: It is vital that the expenditure on elderly is being delegated according to their needs so that wastage can be avoided.

Target: It is vital that the expenditure on the elderly is delegated according to their needs so that wastage can be avoided.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: The latter involves developing public facilities that cater to the need of the elderly who are physically weak.

Target: The latter involves developing public facilities that cater to the needs of the elderly who are physically weak.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Given the high cost of living in Singapore, the government had provided benefits for the elderly by granting subsidizes on healthcare.

Target: Given the high cost of living in Singapore, the government has provided benefits for the elderly by granting subsidies on healthcare.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: This policy is workable as elderly can recuperate better in the community hospital as they do not have to worry much about the medical fees.

Target: This policy is workable as the elderly can recuperate better in a community hospital as they do not have to worry much about medical fees.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: The next policy that is suggested is to give rebate to those who purchase a house that is close to their parents.

Target: The next policy that is suggested is to give rebates to those who purchase a house that is close to their parents.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: Some children will only make use of the reason to get as much subsidy as possible and they might not visit their parent even though they are living very near.

Target: Some children will only make use of the reason to get as much subsidy as possible, and they might not visit their parents even though they are living very near.


Source: Fix errors in this text: In Singapore, the increasing life expectancy with the high-quality healthcare and the declining fertility rates are the causes of graying population.

Target: In Singapore, increasing life expectancy, together with high-quality healthcare and declining fertility rates, are the causes of the graying population.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: Besides slow economic growth, the result of an ageing population is the rising pension and healthcare costs, which forces major increase in public spending in Singapore.

Target: Besides slow economic growth, one result of the aging population in Singapore is the rising pension and healthcare costs, which forces a major increase in public spending.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Furthermore, CPF does not protect certain segment of the population who were not able to work and save during their younger days.

Target: Furthermore, the CPF does not protect certain segments of the population who were not able to work and save during their younger days.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: Eventually, this does not only burden the aged with insufficient funds to support their medical expenditures but also strain the relationship with their children as they need to provide more monetary contributions to their parents.

Target: Eventually, this does not only burden the aged with insufficient funds to support their medical expenditures, but it also strains the relationship with their children as they need to provide more monetary contributions to their parents.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: These reasons continue to urge the government to expand the public spending on the aged so as to sustain the needs and livelihood of the aged within the population.

Target: These reasons continue to urge the government to expand public spending on the aged so as to sustain the needs and livelihood of the aged within the population.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: On the whole, as Singapore population ages rapidly, it accentuates the need to increase the public spending on the aged in order to meet greater healthcare demands and rising cost of living.

Target: On the whole, as Singapore's population ages rapidly, it accentuates the need to increase public spending on the aged in order to meet greater healthcare demands and the rising cost of living.


Source: Fix grammaticality: In short, the aged need more financial help from the government so as to ease the strain on the elders as well as their children.

Target: In short, the aged need more financial help from the government so as to ease the strain on the elderly as well as their children.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: From other perspective, an increase in the aging population will lead to an increase in the government spending on the elderly.

Target: From another perspective, an increase in the aging population will lead to an increase in government spending on the elderly.


Source: Fix all grammatical errors: Public funds that are saved can be used to develop the economy because economy growth will increase the citizens' standard of living.

Target: Public funds that are saved can be used to develop the economy because economic growth will increase the standard of living.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: Therefore, the government has to choose the most beneficial areas to invest.

Target: Therefore, the government has to choose the most beneficial areas to invest in.


Source: Fix errors in this text: In addition, government can also invest in areas where the profit and social welfare can be improved so that the citizens' standard of living will be increased.

Target: In addition, the government can also invest in areas where profit and social welfare can be improved so that the standard of living will be increased.


Source: Fix grammar errors: Therefore, the citizens have more job options and find it easier to be hired.

Target: Therefore, citizens have more job options and find it easier to be hired.


Source: Update to remove grammar errors: Moreover, the citizens can request for higher salaries as the economy has improved.

Target: Moreover, citizens can request higher salaries as the economy has improved.


Source: Fix grammar errors: Therefore, the citizens' standard of living will be much better compared to the past.

Target: Therefore, the standard of living will be much better compared to the past.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Moreover, some of the research and development are not only beneficial to the economy but is also environmentally friendly.

Target: Moreover, some of the research and development is not only beneficial to the economy but is also environmentally friendly.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: In conclusion, public spending should not be mainly on elderly and the money should be used for other areas of the country's development.

Target: In conclusion, public spending should not be mainly on the elderly as the money should be used for other areas of the country's development.


Source: Fix grammar: It is said that government should spend much money on the aging population in order to reduce burden on young people.

Target: It is said that the government should spend a lot of money on the aging population in order to reduce the burden on young people.


Source: Fix grammar errors: This argument goes on to assert that because the expenditure of time and money on caring as well as buying medicine for the elderly is enormous, public spending on the aged will help young people concentrate more on their work and improve the quality of life.

Target: This argument goes on to assert that because the expenditure of time and money on caring for as well as buying medicine for the elderly is enormous, public spending on the aged will help young people concentrate more on their work and improve their quality of life.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: If other prior areas of the country's development such as education, economy are not be invested adequately, future generation of older people are likely to be even worse.

Target: If other areas of the country's development, such as education and economy, are not invested in adequately, future generations of older people are likely to be even worse off.


Source: Fix grammatical errors: The first reason is that if people are not be educated well in their young days, their lives in the old age will be very vulnerable as people with more education tend to have higher incomes and better health.

Target: The first reason is that if people are not educated well in their young days, their lives in old age will be very vulnerable as people with more education tend to have higher incomes and better health.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: Therefore, concentrating on prior areas of the country's development instead of investing significant amount of money in the aged is likely to ensure better lives for future groups of older people.

Target: Therefore, concentrating on prior areas of the country's development instead of investing significant amounts of money in the aged is likely to ensure better lives for future groups of older people.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: Because little medical and welfare programs are launched when decrease government expenditure on the aging population, many people may have not enough money to send their old parents to rest home.

Target: Because few medical and welfare programs are launched when government expenditure on the aging population decrease, many people may not have enough money to send their old parents to rest homes.


Source: Improve the grammar of this text: They have to spend more time to take care of their parents by themselves.

Target: They have to spend more time taking care of their parents by themselves.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: In order to make the most of the limited budget for aging population, government should concentrate to support people who really need aid such as older single women.

Target: In order to make the most of the limited budget for the aging population, the government should concentrate on supporting people who really need aid, such as older single women.


Source: Fix grammar errors: The aging population is a common situation in many developed countries.

Target: An aging population is a common situation in many developed countries.


Source: Make the sentence grammatical: With the number of elderly increases rapidly, there are numerous problems like deterioration of health.

Target: With the number of elderly increasing rapidly, there are numerous problems like deterioration of health.


Source: Improve the grammaticality: There is a need for government to focus on these problems, in order to improve the welfare of the aged.

Target: There is a need for governments to focus on these problems in order to improve the welfare of the aged.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: The contributions of the elderly should not be forgotten, the need to reward them for their efforts are crucial.

Target: The contributions of the elderly should not be forgotten; the need to reward them for their efforts is crucial.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Therefore, the government should not reduce the public funding on the elderly.

Target: Therefore, the government should not reduce public funding for the elderly.


Source: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Since there is no way to escape aging, the government needs to pay much attention in the issues relating to aging.

Target: Since there is no way to escape aging, the government needs to pay a lot of attention to the issues relating to aging.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Therefore, the government needs to pay extra attention in taking care of the aged.

Target: Therefore, the government needs to pay extra attention to taking care of the aged.


Source: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: In conclusion, the public spending on the aged should not be limited.

Target: In conclusion, public spending on the aged should not be limited.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: I agree that other areas do need public funding, and indeed money have to be spent on it.

Target: I agree that other areas do need public funding, and indeed money has to be spent on it.


Source: Fix grammar in this sentence: Aging population is a problem affecting many global countries.

Target: An aging population is a problem affecting many global countries.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Therefore, part of public spending will be placed on the interest of the elderly and the rest will be diverted to other areas of the country's development to help boost the economic growth.

Target: Therefore, part of public spending should be placed on the interest of the elderly, and the rest should be diverted to other areas of the country's development to help boost economic growth.


Source: Fix errors in this text: Last but not least, business opportunities can be created with government efforts.

Target: Last but not least, business opportunities can be created with government effort.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: On the other aspect, if most of the public spending is used on easing the aging process, it will slow down economic growth because it's more of a cost than income for the country.

Target: On the other hand, if most public spending is used to ease the aging process, it will slow down economic growth because it's more of a cost than income for the country.


Source: Fix grammaticality: However, leaders in the country must realize that as more money is spend on easing the aging process, future public spending will be limited and this could have negative impact on future generations.

Target: However, leaders must realize that as more money is spent on easing the aging process, future public spending will be limited, and this could have a negative impact on future generations.


Source: Fix errors in this text: It has always been for the development for Singapore and its people.

Target: It has always been for the development of Singapore and its people.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: The cost of living in Singapore is high such that children have resorted to abandon their parents.

Target: The cost of living in Singapore is high such that children have resorted to abandoning their parents.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: The elderly had played their part in their younger days by paying for taxes and it is only reasonable for the government to repay them.

Target: The elderly have played their part in their younger days by paying taxes, and it is only reasonable for the government to repay them.


Source: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: In the context of the elderly, the reason why government has to spend a lot of money on them is due to the fact that children nowadays are abandoning their parents either in hospitals or old folk homes.

Target: In the context of the elderly, the reason why the government has to spend a lot of money on them is due to the fact that children nowadays are abandoning their parents either in hospitals or old folk homes.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: The fact remains that education helps individuals gain knowledge and insights to life, which is the basis of civilisation and is vital for a nation's political stability in the long run.

Target: The fact remains that education helps individuals gain knowledge and insights into life, which is the basis of civilization and is vital for a nation's political stability in the long run.


Source: Fix grammar: For instance, the government should adopt a more holistic approach such that the skills learned in classrooms can be adapted to the globalising world.

Target: For instance, the government should adopt a more holistic approach so that the skills learned in classrooms can be adapted to the globalizing world.


Source: Fix grammar errors: With its well-reputable education system, the focal point of public spending should instead be placed on the elderly.

Target: With its well-reputed education system, the focal point of public spending should instead be placed on the elderly.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: In this case, they might encounter difficulties in paying for the medical fees as they have more than one elderly to look after.

Target: In this case, they might encounter difficulties in paying for the medical fees as they have more than one elderly person to look after.


Source: Remove grammar mistakes: A case study in 2008 have shown that 20% of the population now in Japan is sixty-five years old and above.

Target: A case study in 2008 has shown that 20% of the population now in Japan is sixty-five years old and above.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Increasing of public spending on the aged will not be able to solve this problem.

Target: Increasing public spending on the aged will not be able to solve this problem.


Source: Make the sentence fluent: Lastly, policies have been implemented by the countries to help the aged.

Target: Lastly, policies have been implemented by countries to help the aged.


Source: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Having a saving for them would be a better choice.

Target: Having a saving fund for them would be a better choice.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Being one of the top aging populations in Asia, Singapore has to be prepared for the challenges to be faced currently or in the future when Singapore turns into a prominent ageing society.

Target: Being one of the top aging populations in Asia, Singapore has to be prepared for the challenges to be faced currently or in the future when Singapore turns into a prominent aging society.


Source: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: This scheme allows extended-family applicants to be given priority allocation on the flats they wanted to live in.

Target: This scheme allows extended-family applicants to be given priority allocation on the flats they want to live in.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: Needy patients are hence able to apply and use this fund to pay for their healthcare services.

Target: Needy patients are hence, able to apply and use this fund to pay for their healthcare services.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Not only that, government also extended the retirement age of the individuals.

Target: Not only that, but the government has also extended the retirement age of individuals.


Source: Fix the grammar mistakes: In conclusion, Singapore government has seriously looked into the needs of the senior citizens and the challenges faced in terms of aging population by implementing policies to ease the aging process.

Target: In conclusion, the Singapore government has seriously looked into the needs of its senior citizens and the challenges faced in terms of an aging population by implementing policies to ease the aging process.


Source: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: Thus I advocate spending on the aged is necessary yet it should be carefully limited so as not to compromise other sectors and overall national interest in the long run.

Target: Thus spending on the aged is necessary, yet it should be carefully limited so as not to compromise other sectors and overall national interest in the long run.


Source: Remove grammatical mistakes: Thus education, which helps to sustain future economic growth, is an aspect where the spending on the aged must be carefully limited in order to prevent any compromise.

Target: Thus education, which helps to sustain future economic growth, is an aspect where spending on the aged must be carefully limited in order to prevent any compromise.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: In the modern era, ageing population has become a phenomenon in many countries, especially those which hold records of past baby boom and present low fertility rates, like Singapore and Japan.

Target: In this modern era, aging populations have become a phenomenon in many countries, especially those which hold records of the past baby boom and present low fertility rates, like Singapore and Japan.


Source: Fix errors in this text: As compared to a welfare-state that provides pensions indiscriminately to all, such comprehensive approach would demand lesser public expenditure on the aged and thus funds allocated should be limited accordingly.

Target: As compared to a welfare state that provides pensions indiscriminately to all, such as comprehensive approach would demand less public expenditure on the aged, and thus, funds allocated should be limited accordingly.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: Besides, there will be psychological effect of limiting public spending on the aged too.

Target: Besides, there will also be psychological effects of limiting public spending on the aged too.


Source: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Social work aims at restructuring the society, such that a more balanced society is attained, where no single citizen becomes the victim of the economics development.

Target: Social work aims at restructuring society such that a more balanced society is attained, where no single citizen becomes the victim of economic development.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: It also helps to solve the existing social problems and provides supports to the needy.

Target: It also helps to solve existing social problems and provides support to the needy.


Source: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Besides, it helps to solve other social issues than aging problem.

Target: Besides, it helps to solve other social issues than just the aging problems.


Source: Fix grammar in the sentence: Therefore, public spending on industrial and related sectors which provide more job opportunities for people who are affected during this harsh period should be stressed equally.

Target: Therefore, public spending on industrial and related sectors, which provide more job opportunities for people who have been affected during this harsh period, should be stressed equally.


Source: Fix errors in this text: Besides, some elderly still wish to continue working as a result of insufficient savings and increasing cost of living.

Target: Besides, some elderly still wish to continue working as a result of insufficient savings and the increasing cost of living.